Ann’s Reviews > Still: Notes on a Mid-Faith Crisis > Status Update

Struggling a little. Lauren's journal style of writing is to me, choppy and disjointed, as stream of consciousness can be, but hers, without any poetic flow to keep me involved. I thought I would love this, as it is very close to my story, but, I am feeling a lack of soul in her writing. Maybe her journey now, looking back, would produce more introspection, instead of just a list of facts and random thoughts.