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Man is it necessary to be such a dick to Lyvia? Was enslaving and starving her not enough, can you like chill? Even when she does exactly as she’s told Sebastian just can’t help but treating her like shit. Free the succubus she done nothing to deserve this
— Mar 18, 2026 10:40AM
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Okay do the demons and succubi in this story actually need to eat? They’ve been complaining all book about how hungry they are and Sebastian is still starving them all, like is there any consequences to them starving??
— 11 hours, 29 min ago
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I will help you, but the cost will be great… I’m sorry to break it to you, but to save you you’ll have to… have a hot threesome with your boyfriend and a water nymph…
— 11 hours, 47 min ago
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“Is the baron’s son more important than the guy whose legs were crushed by a collapsed bridge? Or the woman whose face was eaten off by hounds?” “He is… to me” Dude you’re so cringe. And selfish. Is that supposed to sound romantic lol. I’m sure your little hook-up is very important to you but you and your sex life are not the center of the universe. Let the woman work for fucks sake
— Mar 18, 2026 01:22PM
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Okay seriously, why does nobody know how to write romantic/sexual chemistry anymore?? Like I felt like queer books at least still knew how to do it but now even the queer romances can’t seem to manage a shred of actual romance or sexual tension anymore :/
— Mar 18, 2026 09:54AM
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I really should have went for the physical book on this one, I don’t know how much more I can handle all these French accents.
— Mar 18, 2026 08:34AM
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Also I feel like Sebastian’s connection with the demon should be a lot stronger and more, idk, intimate than it is? Just calling each other ‘my love’ isn’t enough to make me feel how strong their bond is. All the demon ever does is whine in his stupid accent about how he’s hungry and all Sebastian does is tell him not to eat the clients, it’s gettin a lil old. Sabrina did this concept so much better ngl
— Mar 17, 2026 01:02PM
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Man Lyvia really overuses the term meatbag it’s getting kind of annoying. Also, why are her chapters narrated in first and third person? Like we know it’s you recounting this, why are you talking about things you did in third person, like you were seeing yourself from the outside? It’s so weird
— Mar 17, 2026 12:56PM
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Yoooo the monster wants to fuck already???? Man I’m being spoiled this month. Say yes Sebastian do ittt, say yes say yes.
— Mar 17, 2026 07:27AM
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Oh no, not the sardonic smile… don’t do this to me, I won’t fall for this again. I’ve learned my lesson I swear 🥲
— Mar 16, 2026 01:48PM
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Mar 18, 2026 04:07PM
Hating this main character from your updates.
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I feel ya I’m hating him from reading the book lol. Like dude you’re the one who fuckin enslaved her against her will, why would you keep a succubus if you’re so opposed to her feeding literally ever, you knew what tf she was when you bound her. And don’t act like she’s such a fuckin nuisance and treat her like garbage when you’re the one FORCING her to be here, if you’re so bothered by her then let her fucking go bitch
No kidding! Like how much of a dumb asshole is he?
