Chaos_ensuing’s Reviews > The Red Winter > Status Update

Okay do the demons and succubi in this story actually need to eat? They’ve been complaining all book about how hungry they are and Sebastian is still starving them all, like is there any consequences to them starving??

I will help you, but the cost will be great… I’m sorry to break it to you, but to save you you’ll have to… have a hot threesome with your boyfriend and a water nymph…

“Is the baron’s son more important than the guy whose legs were crushed by a collapsed bridge? Or the woman whose face was eaten off by hounds?” “He is… to me” Dude you’re so cringe. And selfish. Is that supposed to sound romantic lol. I’m sure your little hook-up is very important to you but you and your sex life are not the center of the universe. Let the woman work for fucks sake

Man is it necessary to be such a dick to Lyvia? Was enslaving and starving her not enough, can you like chill? Even when she does exactly as she’s told Sebastian just can’t help but treating her like shit. Free the succubus she done nothing to deserve this

Okay seriously, why does nobody know how to write romantic/sexual chemistry anymore?? Like I felt like queer books at least still knew how to do it but now even the queer romances can’t seem to manage a shred of actual romance or sexual tension anymore :/

I really should have went for the physical book on this one, I don’t know how much more I can handle all these French accents.

Also I feel like Sebastian’s connection with the demon should be a lot stronger and more, idk, intimate than it is? Just calling each other ‘my love’ isn’t enough to make me feel how strong their bond is. All the demon ever does is whine in his stupid accent about how he’s hungry and all Sebastian does is tell him not to eat the clients, it’s gettin a lil old. Sabrina did this concept so much better ngl

The Dark Urge? Is that you?

Yoooo the monster wants to fuck already???? Man I’m being spoiled this month. Say yes Sebastian do ittt, say yes say yes.

Oh no, not the sardonic smile… don’t do this to me, I won’t fall for this again. I’ve learned my lesson I swear 🥲