Lit Reader’s Reviews > A Debt of Gratitude: A Pride and Prejudice Variation > Status Update
Lit Reader
is 60% done
More editing errors >> The initial story says Georgiana was taken from London on the fake excuse of a visit to the modiste, but telling staff she was going away to visit some friends in the country; now Georgiana is telling Darcy an alternate story in which Mrs. Younge takes Georgiana out of the city on the explicit pretense of visiting friends, the modiste rests forgotten…
— Mar 02, 2026 10:25AM
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Lit Reader
is 70% done
More chronological mistakes >> a visit to tenants is first announced as urgent, days pass by before the visit is mentioned again and still hasn’t taken place ! Poor tenants, hahahahah
Cheap mistake >> casual mention of a trip from Longbourn to Pemberley to detour through London — WHY? Meryton lies on the North Road, this author knows this, doesn’t she ??
— Mar 03, 2026 05:31AM
Cheap mistake >> casual mention of a trip from Longbourn to Pemberley to detour through London — WHY? Meryton lies on the North Road, this author knows this, doesn’t she ??
Lit Reader
is 65% done
Several scenes are retold with little tweaks and copy-pasted lines; chronological order still flawed… unless this story is a post-modernist take with time jumps and dimensional loops… a-la hopscotch !
— Mar 02, 2026 04:26PM
Lit Reader
is 55% done
What is the point in painting the 5 Bennet sisters are brave, compassionate saviors of Georgiana, if as soon as Darcy shows up, they 2 younger ones will regress to a stage of wild lack of manners, disregard for their suroundings, and careless unawareness of their rescued guest !
— Mar 01, 2026 07:43PM
Lit Reader
is 50% done
There is a problem with the chapters, an apparent shuffling that peoduced chronological (or logical) mistakes.
Elizabeth meets Wickham when he visits Longbourn. Later she encounters Darcy on the road to Meryton. In a later chapter she tells Darcy she thought he could be Wickham when she met him (FD)— this makes no sense unless the chapters got shuffled.
This happens again, plus a mixup about a carriage vs riders
— Mar 01, 2026 05:54PM
Elizabeth meets Wickham when he visits Longbourn. Later she encounters Darcy on the road to Meryton. In a later chapter she tells Darcy she thought he could be Wickham when she met him (FD)— this makes no sense unless the chapters got shuffled.
This happens again, plus a mixup about a carriage vs riders
