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literal lol

she’s so approachable — never distant

This would also be a good book for someone questioning the value of faith

Empire Strikes Back didn’t earn *Universal* 120 million dollars — it was Fox. how did Wasson get that wrong?!

…whose identity was obvious anyway

the continued obfuscation of the traitor is a cheat

so, so sloppy. conceptually it may be priceless but technically it’s cheap

— “a matching armchair to his wife’s” : completely superfluous preposition! nothing “matches to”, it merely “matches.” )I’m seeing this more and more among young-ish writers, confusion/obfuscation/convolution of prepositions)

for the want of copy editor…

I do not have the exact words for what is wrong, but there are some absolutely glaring grammatical errors on the second page:

- “his flat, unremarkably featured face” : as written, this means that it is unremarkable his face is featured… “unremarkably-featured” would fix it but “his flat, unremarkable face” would be better (allowing for “unremarkable”, which is inherently contradictory)