The diagrams leave a lot to be desired. In many of the feedback loops, the author just uses a simple + or - to indicate the direction of the change, but not what is changed (the time required for a step, the amount of XP, the cost). This makes it difficult to interpret them. Otherwise, the focus on systems is well-presented and handled. It ties in nicely with the game design material.
— Sep 06, 2019 08:32PM
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