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I like the story, but there are a lot of 'copy and pasted' phrases and events. There was one that only a few paragraphs separated the two occurrences. While I get it, there are only so many ways to describe something, but so close together, and so many times makes a reader lose confidence in the author... although why didn't an editor catch them?

This is reminding me of Robert Jackson Bennett's books... You got Sherlock Holmes, the woman, and Watson, the man: all acting almost identically in both stories... and the women are the smart ones, and both have close to the same attitude, and the men aren't all that smart and are the protectors..

I thought this was going to be funny.... NOPE