Read some reviews because I am wondering if I should continue. First, is he paid by the word? Who needs to know, in a thriller, that a character gets into a black SUV (make/model)? exact words not at hand, but everything is over described. It's the action that is wanting, Mr Hamilton. The jumps are not smoothly transitioned...oh, I could go on. I can't even decide if I like, dislike, or fear a character.
— Jul 08, 2013 08:07PM
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