100 pages in and so much has happened but also nothing has happened? I feel like the author had a lot of ideas, but most of this would come across better in a screenplay than a novel. You can't tell me a character is dodging bullets and exploding things with magic and barely describe it? I'm going to keep trying but this is leaning towards a DNF :/
— Feb 22, 2023 06:26PM
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