If this were not a Le Guin Prize winner, I'd have quit reading several chapters ago. I am tired of rereading in order to figure out who is talking and the piled-on similes wear me down. Yes, some beautiful language, but also multiple similes to little effect. Characters are male unless they are girls or mothers or grandmothers. Three monsters too much alike, and why? My opinion: she needed rigorous editing. Age.
— Jan 13, 2023 08:48AM
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