Points for there being enough mystery to hold my attention and keep me reading. Negative points to INFINITY for the frequently incorrect and overuse of the word "that!" Come on, dude! "The," "his," a name? All perfectly valid and less jarring ways to identify something. Seriously, this book doesn't read like a soaring gothic epic. No matter how flowery and obnoxious your language is. >_>
— Aug 22, 2015 11:02PM
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