I’m guessing this is not the way most readers feel but I was loving this until the part about the Karmas. I’m hoping that its inclusion becomes clear later on because right now it feels like a very long digression to build character in a non-empathetic and all-too-direct way, through simply telling us what they’re like instead of incorporating characterizing actions into the plot.
— Oct 20, 2024 05:55AM
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