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Now it's getting interesting both plots are getting complicated with good crisis and challenges.

Starting to get a little bit better with a double plot going which is typical for Connelly books

Getting a little bit more interesting, but slow and methodical writing not very exciting not very good so far.

So far just a ho-hum murder mystery nothing great

wow what a great ending. this book really finished nicely.

And now the story is getting good, some good conflict and now that you are heavily invested in the characters it is becoming much more emotional.

The story is getting better with a little bit more depth and some crisis still on the slow side but OK

Somewhat interesting, really kind of slow

Starting out okay. I do like the separation of character. Of the used as well as the separation in timeline stated that the head of each chapter.

Still the same tempo still the same style of writing interesting but slow

Still an intriguing story yet written way too lengthy

Decent story but a little long winded and somewhat boring

The book is starting off with a reasonable tempo interesting and nice detail the character development is coming along without much confusing okay so far

Not really much written at first about Paul's character should have built him up a bit man much more

overly written. takes paragraphs just for minor things to happen.