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This book tried to do way too much an offer a lot of detail on a bunch of different things out of order and was at times confusing. The actual story was interesting to understand but it was told in such a manner I would never recommend this book to

Too many fallbacks explaining things and going back in time is annoying just stick to the timeline

Too many names too many dates too many acronyms too much jumping around in time just way too much unnecessary information.

I like the book, the movie was definitely quite a bit different. I think the overall back half of the plot in the action although good, was drawn out a bit too much and it was too lengthy.

The book is soooo much better than the movie. Grisham loves very detailed stories, great job so far, very few flaws.

There should have been more describing and discussion of the main characters suspicion of the firm. It kind of just led into him starting to be concerned when there should have been more description of why and how he was concerned

Moving along nicely.

I've seen the movie so I already know the plot. I'm a little bit spoiled the book is starting out ok little bit long winded but very full of detail and character building some crisis beginning to occur.

Near the end the book finally picked up some solid drama and conflict. The book overall could have been much better. Let's face it if you're going to wrap fiction into historical events you can do whatever she wants in this case the book was too long and boring for the most part. It wasn't until the back part of the book that it got good with some good drama and conflict. The book is mediocre at best

As the book is drawing to a close, it is now focusing more on plot elements and drama. It is better now.

somewhat better. F you dramatic parts. Still not a great book at all.

Some conflict. Some decent plot elements. Very mediocre.

Not very much to the plot at this point. A little bit better than boring but nothing really going on no conflict no real plot.

So far there is very little substance to the story. The author's style is overly done and overly descriptive. She is disguising her lack of ability to write a story in her overly done descriptive writing style similar to a Steinbeck borderline boring at this point.

Good ending to the tension and suspense. Would have liked to see a much more detailed ending of how all the characters ended.

Very good at this.. Quite a bit of suspense and tension

Good conflict good suspense good drama very good at this point

The transformation of Bella from human to vampire was much more fascinating and interesting than I could have imagined. The author has done a great job describing her point of view. Very good at this point.

Okay babies born finally moving on thank goodness this book needs to get a spark of life that can do it

Okay, the story really needs to move along getting a little bit long winded here

I am enjoying hearing Jacobs point of view and how the Wolves think very interesting and well done by the author. I like that she has included this point of view in the last book. She started with this in Eclipse.

Very interesting Jacobs betrayal, and the fact that Bella wants to die to save her kid.

Bella and Edward leaving the honeymoon Colombian suspicion of being a vampire. Book 2 starts from Jacob's point of you interesting adds a lot of tension.

Wedding honeymoon, pregnancy discovery. The tempo is good the story is moving along

Story good tempo good, dragging a little bit long on the wedding night.

Normal beginning. Revisiting some character development catch a new heater up etc. Intro to the wedding. Talking about the wedding. Telling Charlie about the wedding. Bachelor party. Getting ready for the wedding.

A little too much of Bella whining and going on and on

steady pace to a good story

Really enjoying this book. I am getting emotionally involved I can tell I am agreeing and disagreeing with what the characters are doing and that simply means that it is a good story