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Fatherland - 3,5+

I'd Love You to Want Me - 3,75
The Americans -3,25
Someone Else Beside You - 3,5

The Transplant - 4
Oh those last pages, felt them in my gut

The Other Man - 3,75

super credible dialogues
great portrayal of the awkwardness of intimacy

Black-Eyed Women - 4,5
Didn't expect the story to go this way but I really liked it.

Lie bien les expériences personnelles et leur écho universel

C'est hyper fluide comme lecture

So much of this is not believable:
- the sleepless being considered as freaks
- the dialogues feel fake af
- the synthetic coffee ? 😐

There's literally a paragraph of explanation after every single sentence, I can't. LESS IS MORE, this is not an encyclopedia 😭

I'm so tired of the heavy paragraphs just explaining in too much details how everything in this world works. It's great that Manibo thought his thing through but if the only way to share that is by imposing long explanations that interrupt the plot every chapter then it's not worth it. It's supposed to be thrillery, I shouldn't be that bored

Ohlololo, l'écriture à la deuxième personne à tout moment elle me fait pleurer
J'aime beaucoup l'écriture de manière générale, fluide et assez doux -pas mièvre-

Kinda riddled with useless details/descriptions :/

I like the story itself and how the mystery of the settings almost clashes with the perceived triviality of adolescence. However, I'm not a fan of the pace and tone

April Ludgate energy

It's goood!! I like how Murderbot's vocabulary really matches their (its? character)