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The Young Entrepreneurs of Miss Bristol's Front Porch - 4,5/5
Camaraderie - 3,5/5
I like how uniquely written every voice is.

Ms Dallas - 3,75/5

The Okiedoke - 3,75/5

Interconnected short storieees 🙏🏻🙏🏻🙏🏻

Rent Manual - 3,75+/5
Loved the 2nd person narrative and the narrative tense. It kept us at an unusual distance for such an emotional story, but it also conveyed a more than convincing tension.

The female characters receive such a weird treatment, I can't tell what's the intention of the author behind it ?

C'est grave fun, j'adore la façon dont les dialogues ont vraiment qq chose de théâtrale et l'originalité du récit

Oh wow bresson d'un coup

I liked it at first, now it does feel a bit disjointed... We'll see how it goes

J'aime bien les dynamiques familiales, elles sont presque théâtrales
Avoir les pensées de la Grand Mère dans le coma dédramatise la chose mais reste amer

I found the beginning slow for this type of story, but the last chapters have been goood

le switch narration 1e personne du singulier gg

so far so good!
i like the pace and this introduction to the characters & world building

My God, Constance & Erica ARE something 🫦

"There You Are"

omgggg angsty teenage romcom!!!

Love the mechanics used for her deadname/deadnaming
Abigail's super credible as a teenager, angry but soft. her povs feels like diary entries, trying to look cool & convince herself she doesn't need anyone/has it all figured out
"second hand dysphoria" mdr
D'habitude j'aime pas les dual povs, mais en fait ici ça marche vraiment bien
Comme dans Nevada : feels like a cops et on a envie de lui dire "meuf tu déconnes"

Un meilleur endroit - 4/5