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SO MUCH IS PACKED IN THIS!! It can be a little bit repetitive at times, but it covers so many topics otherwise it's very good. The sources are so varied, it automatically makes you eager to read more -which is one of its point so this is great

Didn't like this fictional bit at first, made me miss the discourse of the first bit and its writing was too descriptive. But I liked it in the end, the shift in tone was pleasantly unexpected and brought an atmosphere more to my liking

Easy to follow introduction! Clear structure with the right amount to precise references

Loved the flashback!! Such vivid imagery, especially of the grandmother, through the smells and colours
Loved the vegetable patch & the dog description as well

It's the ugly child of Good Omens, Supernatural and Hazbin hotel (derigatory)

Leto is the most boring of them all

I still love it, the pace is perfect, the tension feels so real and really enhances the stakes and Roscille character development
I think I wish hopelessly for a happy ending

I still love it, the pace is perfect, the tension feels so real and really enhances the stakes and Roscille character development
I think I wish hopelessly for a happy ending

NOOO

The repetition in the imagery, the ermine, the lampreys & eels, Hawise's fate

Atmosphere as good as promised, the barren settings and chilling, windowless castle just what I needed for that story and Roscille is a promising mc

October - 3,5

Wind Through the Pineapple Leaves, Through the Frangipani - 3,5
Lovely, lovely atmospheric writing

Summer Tornado - 3,25/5
Somehow, the writing is very relaxing

The Chest - 3,25

Lake Like a Mirror - 3,5, same as before!

Radio Drama - 3,5, I liked the eeriness of the atmosphere, but I wished it had lead us to something bigger

The Wall - I liked the weird atmosphere and mundane stakes

Meh, the dialogues are predictable...
Reads a bit like ya

YA writing so far : too many physical descriptions, too much telling and not showing, frustrating