Part 1:
S1: The Wish Bridge: Epic 5
S2: The Audit: um... not bad but it felt like it was lacking something. All of the parts with the Agoraphobe were amazing, but genuinely I thought coming back to Francis and even his job felt unnecessary 2.75
S3: Sucker For Pain: ok this would have been so much better as a full length novel or at least a novella, very abrupt, not a great pacing for development 3
— May 12, 2025 07:35AM
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