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Damnit. I was ready to yeet this, but that was an awesome and brutal flashback. Prose might still be very basic, but that has the makings of a very interesting backstory.
Now to weather through these present day skirtchasing, parties and dates.

I'll try to do one last reading session with this before I yeet it.
I no longer care about the interesting setting or upcoming civil unrest.
I'm sick and tired of half the text revolving around the physical descriptions of woman or how to get in their pants and the other half not even being written that well.
Ugh. Dissapointments.

Alright, I am accepting both Martinez as well as Sula are deeply flawed and, to a level, unlikeable characters.
I'll just go along with the detailed interesting world building and see where the scheming, plotting plot goes.

Really struggling with this.
I had such high hopes.:(

The writing is really good, I am loving Sula...
But I'm going to scream if she ends up with a romance with Martinez.
What an absolute douchenozzle.

The writing is really good, I am loving Sula...
But I'm going to scream if she ends up with a romance with Martinez.
What an absolute douchenozzle.

Finally, finally starting this, and what a great intro that was.
A lot of exposition but told very artfully so I don't mind.
I do hope Martinez isn't the protagonist, what an ass.:P