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Yanik
is on page 155 of 448
Damnit. I was ready to yeet this, but that was an awesome and brutal flashback. Prose might still be very basic, but that has the makings of a very interesting backstory.
Now to weather through these present day skirtchasing, parties and dates.
— Jul 14, 2024 11:12AM
Now to weather through these present day skirtchasing, parties and dates.
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Yanik
is on page 170 of 448
Alright, story picking up and am kind of enjoying it.
But fuck, Martinez is a world class POS. Being angry that someone has issues to deal with and you didn't get laid, then calling your rebound 'refreshingly uncomplicated' is such a baffling series of backhanded blows.
I'm sick of his constant woomanizing, judging and plotting to climb the social ladder. Sula's part of the story better be tripple worth it.
— Jul 22, 2024 12:00AM
But fuck, Martinez is a world class POS. Being angry that someone has issues to deal with and you didn't get laid, then calling your rebound 'refreshingly uncomplicated' is such a baffling series of backhanded blows.
I'm sick of his constant woomanizing, judging and plotting to climb the social ladder. Sula's part of the story better be tripple worth it.
Yanik
is on page 133 of 448
I'll try to do one last reading session with this before I yeet it.
I no longer care about the interesting setting or upcoming civil unrest.
I'm sick and tired of half the text revolving around the physical descriptions of woman or how to get in their pants and the other half not even being written that well.
Ugh. Dissapointments.
— Jun 16, 2024 10:50AM
I no longer care about the interesting setting or upcoming civil unrest.
I'm sick and tired of half the text revolving around the physical descriptions of woman or how to get in their pants and the other half not even being written that well.
Ugh. Dissapointments.
Yanik
is on page 109 of 448
Alright, I am accepting both Martinez as well as Sula are deeply flawed and, to a level, unlikeable characters.
I'll just go along with the detailed interesting world building and see where the scheming, plotting plot goes.
— Jun 11, 2024 08:24AM
I'll just go along with the detailed interesting world building and see where the scheming, plotting plot goes.
Yanik
is on page 79 of 448
Really struggling with this.
I had such high hopes.:(
— Jun 11, 2024 12:20AM
I had such high hopes.:(
Yanik
is on page 70 of 448
The writing is really good, I am loving Sula...
But I'm going to scream if she ends up with a romance with Martinez.
What an absolute douchenozzle.
— Jun 09, 2024 09:49PM
But I'm going to scream if she ends up with a romance with Martinez.
What an absolute douchenozzle.
Yanik
is 70% done
The writing is really good, I am loving Sula...
But I'm going to scream if she ends up with a romance with Martinez.
What an absolute douchenozzle.
— Jun 09, 2024 09:48PM
But I'm going to scream if she ends up with a romance with Martinez.
What an absolute douchenozzle.
Yanik
is on page 31 of 448
Finally, finally starting this, and what a great intro that was.
A lot of exposition but told very artfully so I don't mind.
I do hope Martinez isn't the protagonist, what an ass.:P
— Jun 07, 2024 08:26AM
A lot of exposition but told very artfully so I don't mind.
I do hope Martinez isn't the protagonist, what an ass.:P

