Status Updates From Mister Cinderella

This book slowly started shaping up.

"Then tell your boss. He's probably too busy running a corporate ayahuasca retreat....”

Again what is this. I had to look up that word. Seriously 😒 this book needs an editor. A critical eye would help bring this book back down to planet Earth.

What even is this???? It sounds like a line for a zombie book. Cliche and def trying too hard.

It throbs in my mind like a luscious fruit that splits open to reveal stringy, rotted flesh.

Almost done with this...book. TG!

There is so much going on:

-The growing relationship between the MCs (which is not done very well)
-Harry's neglectful relationship with his daughter (girl just wants her dad's attention)
-The construction of Harry's new company
-Harry's old business partner messing with him
-Harry and his family being watched
-Harry suffering form PTSD

and yet the author manages to make none of it all that interesting.

Have to admit, it bothers me a bit, that the 2 guys in the book do not match the guys on the cover.