Status Update

Bookreader87(Amanda) is 65% done

There is so much going on:

-The growing relationship between the MCs (which is not done very well)
-Harry's neglectful relationship with his daughter (girl just wants her dad's attention)
-The construction of Harry's new company
-Harry's old business partner messing with him
-Harry and his family being watched
-Harry suffering form PTSD

and yet the author manages to make none of it all that interesting.

— Apr 04, 2018 12:17PM