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message 101: by Leah, Rainbow Lollipoppish!!! :) (new)

Leah (lepolk) | 607 comments Mod
They were on a date, Beth and Ash. Candlelight, roses, the works. He was about to kiss her, and- BETH, BETH! Are you okay?" Beth was jerked from her dream, her...uh...embarrassing dream by the sound of a very familiar voice...Ash's voice. Wait! Ash's voice!? She opened the door to her room to see Ash, his face full of worry. She blinked a couple times before finally answering, "Yeah, I'm fine." (Sorry, this is SO choppy.)


message 102: by Bookworm (new)

Bookworm | 369 comments ((Its fine.))
Beth blushed, then realized that Ash was in her room. "What are you doing here?!" She yelled.


message 103: by Leah, Rainbow Lollipoppish!!! :) (new)

Leah (lepolk) | 607 comments Mod
"Beth," Ash said softly, "I'm sorry. I shouldn't have blown up, and...well..." He blushed, "I was worried about you."


message 104: by Bookworm (new)

Bookworm | 369 comments Beth smiled. She hugged Ash. "I forgive you. And I'm sorry too."


message 105: by Leah, Rainbow Lollipoppish!!! :) (new)

Leah (lepolk) | 607 comments Mod
Ash smiled a tiny smile. "It's alright, Beth. Look, I know it wasn't your fault. It just...came out. I shouldn't have said it." He smiled again and wiped a few stray tears from Beth's face. "After all, you're the best friend I've ever had."


message 106: by Bookworm (new)

Bookworm | 369 comments Beth squeezed him tight. Then she pointed to her room. "Wanna hang out for a while?" She normally didn't invite guys into her room, but this was Ash. They were friends. But that stupid dream returned to her mind.


message 107: by Leah, Rainbow Lollipoppish!!! :) (new)

Leah (lepolk) | 607 comments Mod
"Yeah, sure," Ash said, thinking about how awkward he was about to make the conversation. You see, he kind of liked Beth. And not just because Becca turned him down.

(I know, I know, it's getting sappy, but I couldn't resist adding that in.:) )


message 108: by Bookworm (new)

Bookworm | 369 comments ((I always knew someone would make these two like each other.))
Beth sat on her bed. Okay, this was awkward. Ash was in her room. But they were just friends, right? Just friends.
Ash looked at Beth, and then sat next to her. They were uncomfortably close.


message 109: by Leah, Rainbow Lollipoppish!!! :) (last edited Nov 03, 2012 06:35PM) (new)

Leah (lepolk) | 607 comments Mod
((Okay, here goes my attempt at knowing what's inside a teenage boy's mind. Haha!))

"So, uh...hey Beth?"
"Yeah?"
"I was wondering..." Ash gulped. He was unbelievably nervous, "Would you like to...you know...go out sometime?"
"YES!!!" Beth exclaimed right before she blushed a bright red. "I mean, uh, sure, sounds great!" Ash smiled. She liked him as much as he liked her.


message 110: by Bookworm (new)

Bookworm | 369 comments Beth's heart thumped in her chest. YES YES YES!!


message 111: by Leah, Rainbow Lollipoppish!!! :) (new)

Leah (lepolk) | 607 comments Mod
"So, tonight by chance?" Ash asked.


message 112: by Bookworm (new)

Bookworm | 369 comments "Sure." she said. "Seven?"
Ash said yes, and then left her house. Beth set about trying to find an outfit for her date.


message 113: by Leah, Rainbow Lollipoppish!!! :) (new)

Leah (lepolk) | 607 comments Mod
Ash could feel his heart pounding in his chest. He was going on a date with Beth! He couldn't believe it! Just where exactly he wasn't sure, but that didn't matter. All that mattered was that he and Beth were going on a date.


message 114: by Bookworm (new)

Bookworm | 369 comments Beth looked through her closet. What to wear?


message 115: by Leah, Rainbow Lollipoppish!!! :) (new)

Leah (lepolk) | 607 comments Mod
A dress or...or jeans or...or what? She didn't even know where they were going. Just when her day was getting better.


message 116: by Bookworm (new)

Bookworm | 369 comments Beth paced the room. What about this dress? Or those jeans? She really didn't know, as she never worried about how she looked in front of Ash before.


message 117: by Leah, Rainbow Lollipoppish!!! :) (new)

Leah (lepolk) | 607 comments Mod
But now it DID matter. She had to look good, didn't she?


message 118: by Bookworm (new)

Bookworm | 369 comments Not too casual, but not too formal. She picked a blouse and jeans, then took a shower.


message 119: by Leah, Rainbow Lollipoppish!!! :) (new)

Leah (lepolk) | 607 comments Mod
There, she thought to herself, It's done. Don't worry about it. He doesn't care how you look. But she couldn't help but be a little worried.


message 120: by Bookworm (new)

Bookworm | 369 comments Ash picked her up and they drove.


message 121: by Leah, Rainbow Lollipoppish!!! :) (last edited Nov 06, 2012 11:32AM) (new)

Leah (lepolk) | 607 comments Mod
To the park. Okay, maybe not the most romantic place on earth, but it's where they met, six years ago, almost to the day. Beth was having trouble with a couple of guys teasing her, and Ash stepped in to save the day. They both thought of the moment as they sat on the park bench, in silence, staring up at the starry night sky.


message 122: by Bookworm (new)

Bookworm | 369 comments Ash put an arm around Beth and she sighed.


message 123: by Leah, Rainbow Lollipoppish!!! :) (new)

Leah (lepolk) | 607 comments Mod
He was the first to break the silence. "It's beautiful out here, isn't it?"


message 124: by Bookworm (new)

Bookworm | 369 comments "Yes." she replied, then looked at Ash's face.


message 125: by Leah, Rainbow Lollipoppish!!! :) (new)

Leah (lepolk) | 607 comments Mod
There was something about him, maybe the way his dark hair fell or the softness of his big, blue eyes that Beth had never noticed before. She smiled. "You know, this is where we met."


message 126: by Bookworm (new)

Bookworm | 369 comments "Of course. I remember. I was your knight in shining armor-"
"You were not! I was totally capable of taking care of myself!"
Ash chuckled. "I know."


message 127: by Leah, Rainbow Lollipoppish!!! :) (new)

Leah (lepolk) | 607 comments Mod
What should she say next? Eek, she didn't want to make the conversation awkward but...ugggggggghhhh! Why should she worry about this? She never had to worry about this when Ash was just her friend. So, why now?


message 128: by Bookworm (new)

Bookworm | 369 comments Think of him as a friend, she commanded herself. Then she looked at him. He was actually pretty attractive. Ugh..not possible.
"So, ugh-" she started.


message 129: by Leah, Rainbow Lollipoppish!!! :) (new)

Leah (lepolk) | 607 comments Mod
"So, ugh- what?" Ash asked, smiling that killer smile. Why did she never notice it before?


message 130: by Bookworm (new)

Bookworm | 369 comments "So, ugh, nothing." She retorted.
Ash squeezed her tighter.


message 131: by Leah, Rainbow Lollipoppish!!! :) (new)

Leah (lepolk) | 607 comments Mod
"You sure?" he asked, "You look a little unsure."


message 132: by Bookworm (new)

Bookworm | 369 comments "That's exactly what you said yesterday." Beth stated. "And I'm absolutely sure."


message 133: by Leah, Rainbow Lollipoppish!!! :) (new)

Leah (lepolk) | 607 comments Mod
Ash rolled his eyes. Why were girls so complicated?


message 134: by Bookworm (new)

Bookworm | 369 comments I mean, he liked Beth. So he asked her out. Simple. But girls were way more complicated.
"Did you roll your eyes at me?" Beth teased.


message 135: by Leah, Rainbow Lollipoppish!!! :) (new)

Leah (lepolk) | 607 comments Mod
Busted. "No, I mean, I was teasing...I mean...I wasn't serious, and..." Oh crap. Not again.


message 136: by Bookworm (new)

Bookworm | 369 comments Beth laughed. Looked like she had the upper hand now.


message 137: by Leah, Rainbow Lollipoppish!!! :) (new)

Leah (lepolk) | 607 comments Mod
"Don't worry," she said, "I'm not going to hurt you! Geez Ash! You'd think that I was mean to you or something!"


message 138: by Bookworm (new)

Bookworm | 369 comments Ash glared and Beth smiled. It was just like old times. Except it was...different. There was something different in the air.


message 139: by Leah, Rainbow Lollipoppish!!! :) (new)

Leah (lepolk) | 607 comments Mod
About nine, Ash said, "We should probably be getting back. My mom will kill me if we're too terribly late."

Beth grinned, "Who's listening to their parents now? But you are right. We need to go."


message 140: by Bookworm (new)

Bookworm | 369 comments Ash and Beth got up and walked to his car.


message 141: by Leah, Rainbow Lollipoppish!!! :) (new)

Leah (lepolk) | 607 comments Mod
They both spent the ride home daydreaming. About each other, about their date, and about what was happening between them.


message 142: by Bookworm (new)

Bookworm | 369 comments When Beth got home, she could hardly sleep. And with Ash, it was the same.
The next day of school was weird, though.


message 143: by Leah, Rainbow Lollipoppish!!! :) (new)

Leah (lepolk) | 607 comments Mod
They didn't see each other. Not one bit. Not at lunch or after school. And Ash couldn't help but wonder why.


message 144: by Bookworm (new)

Bookworm | 369 comments Ash tried calling her, but she wouldn't pick up her cell. He called her house too, but no one answered.


message 145: by Leah, Rainbow Lollipoppish!!! :) (last edited Nov 04, 2012 03:43PM) (new)

Leah (lepolk) | 607 comments Mod
When she finally picked up, Ash was mad.

"What's going on?" he asked.
"What do you mean?"
"I didn't see you today at school. You didn't pick up your phone. What's going on? Is there something you need to tell me." He heard Beth inhale shakily.
"It's a long story, Ash. You wouldn't want to hear it." Okay, something was going on. It wasn't what he had thought either.
"Yes I do, Beth," he answered gently. She inhaled shakily again.
"Ash, my older brother was in a car accident. I've been at the hospital all day, and I've had my phone off. I couldn't text you or call you, or-" She burst into tears.


message 146: by Bookworm (new)

Bookworm | 369 comments Ash suddenly felt horrible. "Beth, are you okay? Is he alright?"
This made Beth cry even more. "He's never going to be the same. The crash messed up his brain."
"Beth, I-I'm coming over."


message 147: by Leah, Rainbow Lollipoppish!!! :) (new)

Leah (lepolk) | 607 comments Mod
((I know, I know, kind of...disturbing. But it needed something other than mushy-gushy "I love you" stuff.))

He hung up the phone and rushed over to the hospital. He found Beth waiting in the lobby. Her eyes were red and puffy, the tears still streaming down her cheeks. She was pacing the floor. When the door opened, she looked up and ran into Ash's arms.

"Beth, I'm so sorry," was all he could get out before the first tear slid down his own cheek.


message 148: by Bookworm (new)

Bookworm | 369 comments Beth ran up to Ash. "They wont let me see my brother. I don't know if hes alright or not." Her voice broke. "I don't even know if he's alive."


message 149: by Leah, Rainbow Lollipoppish!!! :) (new)

Leah (lepolk) | 607 comments Mod
"Oh my gosh, Beth, I am so sorry. I know how you feel though. He's like a brother to me." Even though he was two years older than the two of them, Mark, Beth's brother, was the older brother Ash had never had. As the only child of two work-aholic parents, Ash never really got any attention from his parents. Mark taught him how to ride a bike, play catch, and play board games. It hurt Ash as much as it hurt Beth to see this happen to Mark.


message 150: by Bookworm (new)

Bookworm | 369 comments Just then, a doctor stepped out of Mark's room. "I'm sorry, but your son is in critical care. If her does survive, he will never be able to walk." Bath's parents were crying. Beth was too. Ash didn't know what to do. This was like losing family.


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