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ღஐKendraღஐ
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Sep 29, 2011 07:06PM
((ok Hi Ember, im sorry im sucky at this -___-, i didn't check my posts))((Will check them for now on))
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((Okay. Thank you. First off, no offense, but please capitalize the first letter of your sentences. Next, end every thought with a period. This includes when you use quotations. Such as:"Hello. My name is Ember Smith," spoke the girl quietly. Her thin eyes darted around the room before continuing. "I would like to know where I am."
Oh, yeah, that brings me to my next point. Commas. But I better stop now before I go crazy.))
((Okay thanks I will fix my error's.)) ((Thanks))
((Have to go now i will continue the RP tonight.))
'Kendra followed Alex eagerly to the homestead.'
((CORRECTION: 'Kendra followed Alex eagerly to the homestead.' 1. Yours was a fragment. 2. There was no need for the comma, since there wasn't any new ideas in your sentence.))
Alex made his way into the make shift home stead. "Don't go up those stairs over there." He said pointing to his right. Some people sleep in here but you'll probably sleep outside." he said making his way back outside.(( Where were we with Bridget and Paizlie?))
Looking up at the old stairs wondering what could be up there, feeling an urge to climb them. "Oh ok i think i'll sleep outside." Kendra said having one last glance at the stairs
((I'm not sure. We'll start them now.))Meanwhile, Paizlie and Emmett were somewhere admist the Deadheads, their favorite place to spend. Over the last couple of weeks, they're relationship had grown apart, yet more head-strong. With all of the recent commotion with Bridget and Bryant, there was complete and utter chaos. It took a lot out of these 2 Glade leaders to get everything running smoothly again.
But for now, these two wild kids were leaning against a tree, just thinking. Or communicating silently. They knew each other since every moment they could remember. They could almost....guess what the other was going to say.
Paizlie opened her mouth and looked toward Emmett. "I hope the worse is over."
He responded by tucking a strand of blonde hair out of her face.
She smiled at him shyly, suddenly getting that feeling as if her heart was melting like butter. She got that feeling a lot around him.
Alex brought Kendra over to the outside of the dead heads "These are the dead heads. Don't go in there."Bridget ran up to Bryant. "Oh God I was so worried about you!" She threw her arms around his neck.
"Oh whats in there",hopefully it wasn't has bad as it sounded.
A sudden snap of a twig snapped Paizlie and Emmett's heads in the direction of Alex and the odd girl. Had a new greenie come already? Suddenly embarrassed, Paizlie stood up and slowly jogged over to go say hello. Emmett followed behind not shortly afterward."Hey Alex." Paizlie said when she got over there. "Is this the new Greenie?" She asked, nodding over toward Kendra.
Somehow feeling like an outsider blushed and said,"Hi im Kendra." giving a weak smile
Emmett nodded. "Hey Kendra. I'm Emmett and this here," he spoke, gesturing toward Paizlie, "is Paizlie."She clapped her hands together. "So, you showin' her around Alex?" She spoke directly to Alex, only stealing eye-contact with Kendra once.
"Hi Emmet and Paizlie,you guys seem to keep this place in order.said kendra
It was odd for Paizlie to have an immediate disliking to a person, but from the moment she saw Kendra, she didn't like her. Maybe she was like a spy for the creators or something. Paizlie wouldn't be surprised. Emmett, on the other side, liked Kendra almost immediately. She seemed happier. A difference on the Glade. "Thanks, Kendra. We try our best." Emmett responded after a second, playing nudging Paizlie in the stomach at the mention of 'we'.
"Thats good, don't want any chaos around here." said kendra looking at both of them "So i want to help you guys keep this place running smoothly what can i do?" Kendra hoped she was making a good impression,she kept seeing Paizlie starring at her funny.
"We'll tell you about that later. I have to finish giving you the tour first and then we will see what your good at tomorrow. Bye guys." Alex said starting to walk away.
"Sounds good" nodding to Alex,Kendra stared to follow Alex for the rest of the tour. She turned around and waved to Emmett and Paizlie,and smiling "See you guys later."
"Bye!" Emmett called and Paizlie just nodded before walking away.
Waving back and signing to herself she thought that went well,better than she expected they all seemed fine with Kendra but she sensed Paizlie didn't like her. She made a note to herself to be extra nice to Paizlie so they could get to be friends. Kendra new it would be hard though.
"Okay, Now I'll show you the gardens." Alex said walking towards the gardens.
"Oh okay do you guys plant crops or somthing?" asked Kendra following Alex towards the garden.
"Hey i just noticed somthing, i don't know how old i am or what i look like.. "How old do i look?"asked Kendra
"Hm... You look about fifteen maybe? You have blue eyes and brownish hair. Anything else you want to know?" Alex asked. They were a little ways away from the gardens.
Thinking and saying,"Actually ya i have a question."said Kendra "Hey how long have Emmett and Paizlie been here?" Kendra wondered if they were the leaders.
((Oh good at least someone iv'e been waiting for him to respond for a while now lol))
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(Hi thanks for makning the RP by the way it is really good, :( sad face for u that really sucks gives u know time for anything huh?) Ill sumarie what happend)
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(oh cool i have been here since september so this is what u missed : Kendra has come out of the box and Alex is showing her arround the glade, they met Pailzlie and Emmett they all accept her except Paizlie who thinks kendra is suspicous......*dramatic music*
(;Ha, true story. Honestly, Paizlie is just jealous of her for reasons unknown. But welcome back, Mr.Busy. :p))
(or maybe Paizlie just has good instinct and kendra may be evil...... :D)
(well maybe i will see how things go in RP but Paizlie is probably right :))
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((ALSO PLEASE LOOK AND READ THOROUGHLY POST #442!!!))
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((lol i guess im just impatient and i want the story to continue :D U don't have to investigate it's fine))
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((ITS Oz's job to show her around!!!!!! And i am not the only person who says "cool beans!" =D ))
((lol cool im glad i can't wait to start i know people who say cool beans too :))
((Where should we start off where we left off on RP??)
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(ok well we left off as i just came out of the box and then Alex was showing me arround u can come in and coninue the tour maybe?))
(( Hi guys sorry I've been gone so long! I couldn't get on my computer at all this week because I had too much homework. I'll try to get on more often though! ))
"I think Emmett and Paizlie were with the original group of gladers, that or they came before me although I think there were only one or two who were before me." Alex said thinking.
