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Once Upon A Time + Bee
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Eden
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Jan 09, 2015 10:47AM
Heyy.
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Just for future reference here's the plot:Guy A can’t speak. He lost his voice somewhere along the darkness. He has problems. He has addictions. He even often considers suicide. His parents had kicked him out, not long after he got addicted and before he lost his voice. He’s been making himself live in hell for years. He’s dark, hostile and mean but it’s all a façade. Even through all this, he’s every girls dream. He’s a devil. This devil needs saving.
Girl B is perfection or so everyone believes. She’s beautiful. She’s a perfectionist. She lives to please her parents. She even learned sign language so she could play with her siblings, to distract them from her mother. Then all that crumbled. She developed an eating disorder and she changed almost every aspect that she could and she ran to the only place she could, college. She looked like an Angel before, but now this Angel needs saving.
Girl B is intrigued. She wants to get to know Guy A, but she didn’t know he was such an asshole. By the time she did, it was already too late, she’d caught his eye. After all, she knew sign language
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- You can add any type of history. From family death to rape to bullying to etc.
- You can add interests.
- You can request changing something in the characters, just don’t insist on it.
- I don’t mind taking either of the characters.
- Good vocabulary.
- Don’t suddenly disappear.
Do you have anything you want to add? or an idea or anything?
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I don't mind really. Do you want the basic name, age, appearance, personality or should we just start?
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It's alright :).Luke put on a jacket as he went downstairs to the front porch and took his weed out. He stared out at nothing in particular. He hated it when Taylor, his cousin, and Haley, Taylor's girlfriend, started making out like that. It was irritating.
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Annabelle looked down some taking a deep breath again. Every single day same old thing. Pain and hurt. No one cared after she was an 'angel' or used to be. Walking slowly down the street to her class for today. Maybe things would change but she doubt that.
He groaned at the time, wishing he didn't agree to go to any classes. Now he had to go high. He threw the joint onto the floor and stepped on it to put it out. He started walking over to the building.
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He went into the building and sat in the far corner of the classroom. He slumped in his seat and stared at the people filing in. He hated school and wished he never signed up in the first place but he barely ever had anything to do.
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He looked over at her, kind of confused, usually people were scared of him barely anyone approached him, especially with how tall and muscly he was, despite the drugs. The mysterious guy with tattoos, piercings and drugs. He like it when people thought that. He looked away and didn't say anything, since even if he wanted to say anything he couldn't.
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He looked at her and nodded but didn't try to communicate, no one ever really knew sign language so he didn't bother with her.
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He raised his eyebrows, then signed, "you know sign language?" He asked, a smiled playing at his lips.
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He shook his head, "I can't talk," he signed as he stared at her, intrigued.
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"Why're you staring at me like that?" He asked, as he raised his eyebrows at her.
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Confused he stared at her, not sure what he said wrong. He shrugged. He didn't really expect her to want to be a friend, it was a good thing his cousin let him stay with him and his girlfriend.
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He kept remembering how hurt her face looked. He found himself changing his seat and sitting next to her. He wrote in his note book, so the professor wouldn't see, 'did I say something wrong?" He was confused and he looked it.
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"Please, tell me," he wrote with three periods.
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At first he was stunned but when she said 'mute' that just had him pissed. He got up and stormed out.
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He found himself stomping off to the nearest bar. Way to make him feel like shit for not being able to talk anymore. He got wasted with in the hour.
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Saying 'mute' just reminded him of all the bullies which just made him want to punch some one so thats what he did, he punched the first bastard that came to pick on him.
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About 15 minutes later he was thrown out. He stumbled around the nearest park, not sure what to do with himself because he only felt more worthless by the minute. He ended up tripping over his legs and falling on his face. He only turned his head and rested his cheek against the grass.
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He closed his eyes and didn't bother getting up. His parents were enough. His 'friends' were more than enough. The bullies made it to the line. But a stranger he didn't even know was just over the top. He got up again and started stumbling somewhere.
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He jumped at the sudden noise and looked around for the source, since he didn't find it, he just moved on.
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He wandered drunkenly into a dark alley where he saw her crying. The bullied he knew never did that. Never showed remorse or sadness. He sat down crying and wrapped an arm around her shoulder, bringing her to his chest.
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"I don't feel sorry for you," he signed, his hands not forming the words completely. "I just want to know why you suddenly acted like a bitch." He signed, even though he didn't mean it.
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"Fine," he said, more pissed than before. He got up and stormed off.
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He stumbled around and went to his cousin's and his cousin's girlfriends apartment. When he reached he immediately collapsed into his bed.
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