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Once Upon A Time + Bee

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message 401: by Eden (new)

Eden Kabeer (edenk) | 37908 comments He liked her, he really really liked her. Thats why he's been trying, but he had no reason to try. She didn't like him. Why the hell would anyone? If his own parents hated him. If he hated himself. Why would anyone else like him? His thoughts ran a million miles a minute and suddenly he was dizzy. The only reason he did drugs was to forget but now he was overthinking everything and on the verge of throwing a fit but then everything went black and the only thing he felt before completely going into oblivion was his body hitting the gravel.


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She started to get worried when he didn't come back. She waited for him patiently. "Nurse can you check on my friend he went outside to take smoke." She whispered. The nurse nodded and called some people to see if he was there. Annabelle was scared out of her mind. What if he killed himself then she would be alone forever and it would be her fault. Right everything was her fault. She had to calm down her would be back he wouldn't leave her right.

Outside they found him and put him to a room. They pumped his stomach thinking it was an over dose.

Annabelle didn't see or hear from the anyone. She guess he did leave her.


message 403: by Eden (new)

Eden Kabeer (edenk) | 37908 comments He only woke up hours later with a groan that no one heard from him. He rubbed his forehead, "what the hell is going on?" He tried saying but he only mouthed it.

He sat up abruptly when he realized he was in a hospital room. He started pulling all the tubes out, panicking. No. He couldn't be at the hospital. Let alone a patient but as he stood up he got dizzy again and fell back on the bed, feeling a sudden surge of pain from his stomach.

He barely recalled anything. All he remembered was he was out smoking and then nothing. He figured it was probably from three days of no sleep, stress, overthinking and the drugs but he wasn't sure.


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Annabelle waited and waited and her food grew cold. No one cared about her in the end she was right. He only cared about himself. She knew he was upset but she didn't know he would leave her.

The doctor came and explained what was wrong. "You basically had an overdose but you seemed super stressed out and combining with no sleep."


message 405: by Eden (new)

Eden Kabeer (edenk) | 37908 comments "I know. Hows my friend? Does she know? I've got to go talk to her," he signed but the doctor didn't understand sign language, so he urged him to get his phone and so he typed it and handed it to the doctor, typing furiously.


message 406: by onceuponatimeareview (last edited Jan 29, 2015 12:07PM) (new)

onceuponatimeareview | 4906 comments Mod
The nurses gave her some more food that was warm and wanted him to eat. She nodded her head slowly and ate the food she forced it down she shouldn't care.


"Okay if you want we can move you to her room she is being very diffcult right now and we haven't told her what happen either." He said.


message 407: by Eden (new)

Eden Kabeer (edenk) | 37908 comments "Why not? But yes, I'd like to be moved," he typed, showing her the text he wrote.


message 408: by onceuponatimeareview (last edited Jan 29, 2015 12:12PM) (new)

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"Because we thought it would be worse." She nodded and they started to prepare him to be moved.

Annabelle finished the food but she didn't want to eat anymore. "He left me." She whispered. When they were gone she tried getting up and started to struggle. "Let me out of here." She screamed. they came in right away putting her to sleep again. She soon was sleep.


message 409: by Eden (new)

Eden Kabeer (edenk) | 37908 comments Once he was finally moved he looked over at her, she was sleeping. When the nurses left he pullet the tubes out again and limped towards her bed. He held her hand gently in his.

He looked worse than he felt. He was deathly pale with deep, very visible bags under his eyes. His hair was a mess... More than usual. He looked bad. He looked really really bad.


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She didn't move much but she felt someone there. She smiled some in her sleep. She was hoping he was okay where ever he was.


message 411: by Eden (new)

Eden Kabeer (edenk) | 37908 comments He leaned over her and rested his forehead gently against hers, closing her eyes. He put his lips to the top of her head, them mouthed, "I've missed you. A lot." He smiled, glad no one was there.


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She opened her eyes some. "You look awful." She whispered. She wanted to snap at him. "Am I dead?" She asked.


message 413: by Eden (new)

Eden Kabeer (edenk) | 37908 comments He pulled back abruptly. She's awake? Then he laughed softly and shook his head, "no," he mouthed.


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"Get some sleep." She whispered softly as she fluttered her eyes shut again. She was tired. The nurse came into the room to check on them.

"Sir you need to go to your bed." The nurse said. "Now you shouldn't be up."


message 415: by Eden (new)

Eden Kabeer (edenk) | 37908 comments He shook his head, no. He couldn't leave her.


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"Sir now go to your bed you won't be able to get better and be there for her." She said.

Annabelle stirred at the noise but didn't wake up.


message 417: by Eden (new)

Eden Kabeer (edenk) | 37908 comments He looked at her then typed on his phone, "fine. But i'm not letting you hook me up or anything like that."


onceuponatimeareview | 4906 comments Mod
"You need for now sir" She Saud calmly.


message 419: by Eden (new)

Eden Kabeer (edenk) | 37908 comments He shook his head and crossed his arms, being stubborn.


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The nurse looked at him. "Fine you can stay there but try getting some sleep that's all you really need" She said.


message 421: by Eden (new)

Eden Kabeer (edenk) | 37908 comments He nodded but he wasn't going to sleep. He stared at nothing in particularly as he held her hand.


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She smiled in her sleep. She was so happy. She wanted to snuggle into him.


message 423: by Eden (new)

Eden Kabeer (edenk) | 37908 comments He closed his eyes and then sat next to her on the bed, pulling her to him.


onceuponatimeareview | 4906 comments Mod
She felt him next to her and smiled some again. She was happy for once.


message 425: by Eden (new)

Eden Kabeer (edenk) | 37908 comments He stared at the ceiling.


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She woke up again in a small daze. Still half asleep. "Please sleep." She whispered.


message 427: by Eden (new)

Eden Kabeer (edenk) | 37908 comments He shook his head and mouth 'I can't leave you.'


onceuponatimeareview | 4906 comments Mod
"Yes you can I'm fine you can get some sleep right beside me" She whispered softly. Her eyes begin to close again"


message 429: by Eden (new)

Eden Kabeer (edenk) | 37908 comments He almost smiled but he just nodded and nuzzled her hair.


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She smiled and was quickly asleep again.


message 431: by Eden (new)

Eden Kabeer (edenk) | 37908 comments He sighed and tried relaxing to go to sleep but he was too fidgety.


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She looked peaceful as she slept near him. She didn't move much until the hospital started come alive with noise. "Hi"


message 433: by Eden (new)

Eden Kabeer (edenk) | 37908 comments He had his eyes closed. He opened them and looked at her, he looked worse than before. "Hi," he mouthed.


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"Please sleep " She whispered. "You look awful. Do you want me to call the nurse"


message 435: by Eden (new)

Eden Kabeer (edenk) | 37908 comments "I'm trying," she slowly felt abit better:


onceuponatimeareview | 4906 comments Mod
"Okay" She whispered. She wasn't sleepy now.


message 437: by Eden (new)

Eden Kabeer (edenk) | 37908 comments He smoothed her hair out, "how are you feeling,"


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"Hungry." She said. "Please rest I want you to feel better too." She whispered.


message 439: by Eden (new)

Eden Kabeer (edenk) | 37908 comments He sighed but nodded and closed his eyes.


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She snuggled into him. She smiled and pecked his cheek.


message 441: by Eden (new)

Eden Kabeer (edenk) | 37908 comments His lips tipped up and he nuzzled her hair before relaxing a little.


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She was truly happy. Hoping it didn't fade away and cause her to be lonely.


message 443: by Eden (new)

Eden Kabeer (edenk) | 37908 comments He slowly fell asleep next to her.


onceuponatimeareview | 4906 comments Mod
She was glad he didn't leave her.


message 445: by Eden (new)

Eden Kabeer (edenk) | 37908 comments He sighed in his sleep, completely exhausted.


onceuponatimeareview | 4906 comments Mod
She took his hand in hers. She liked him. She just didn't want to get hurt.


message 447: by Eden (new)

Eden Kabeer (edenk) | 37908 comments He woke up a few hours later.


onceuponatimeareview | 4906 comments Mod
"Hi." She whispered.


message 449: by Eden (new)

Eden Kabeer (edenk) | 37908 comments "Hello," he mouthed.


onceuponatimeareview | 4906 comments Mod
"Feeling better?" She asked.


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