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No the one that changes density is a real ability. I think it's a "Fluctuator" or something like that.
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Full name: Drake Larknisk (might have been changed)Age: 196
Gender: male
Species : Alien elf (Moon)
Rescidence : Somewhere on the moon
Organization: Blankpoint (leader of organization, Blankpoint is an organization that wants to take over the lost cities.)
Appearance : Distinct elf feature, green skin , Black hair, Red eyes
Ability: Telepath, Technopath, Inflictor and Drainer
Personality : Full of hate, lost the ability to love and in time got red eyes.
History: He was the top of his school (Foxfire) and he surpassed his teachers. His abilities slowly corrupted him. Later he blew up foxfire killing hundreds of elves. The counsel banished him to space with his followers. Centuries later, there were colonies of elves on the moon. This was never reported by NASA because he founded a memory wiper using his superior Technopath ability. He has wanted revenge ever since the day he got banished
Likes:
-Destruction
-Domination
-Annihilation of earth
Dislikes: LOSING
"What would you like to drink, Una?"Riko: "Water."
"Oh, you're a telepath?"
Riko: "Nope. Triplets."
Full Name: Rikard Ackley
Nickname(s): Riko
Age: 16
Gender: Male
Species: Elf
Ability(max is 4): Vanisher
Residence: Wargrove
Family Crest: Lots of hands in the centre of a silver square
Organazation: Nope
Appearance: Riko has shaggy dirty blond hair and periwinkle eyes. You'll either see him with a deep scowl or a crooked grin on his face. He's really tall, 6'3" and has some muscle. Cute button nose.
Other Markings or Accessories: He has a mark on his hand because he thought it would be fun to play with fire.
Personality: He is reeeeeeeaaaaaaaaallllllllllllyyyyyy over protective of his sister Una. You make fun of her, or his other brothers and sisters for that matter, he'll turn on you so fast, you will be seriously injured before you can say "yikes". That's why he scowls, to make you back off. If you aren't a threat to him or his family, he a sweet little prankster.
Other Notable Things: noooope
History: Riko's mom died after the youngest of his siblings was born. He knew his mom really well, so it was kind of hard for him to loose her. Ever since his mom died, his dad has been acting kind of weird and distant. Being a triplet is hard on him, what with everyone not liking the multiple births. No one mentions the triplet thing to him, but the looks he and his siblings get are cold.
Other Achievements/Accomplishments: He hasn't hurt any of his siblings yet, that's an accomplishment, I'm telling you.
School: Foxfire
Coach(Exilium)/Level(Foxfire): 6
Best Classes/Basic Abilities: Detention
Worst Classes/Basic Abilities: Gee, how much time do you have?
Likes:
- Una and Wes
- Protecting people.
- Aaaaaaaaannnnnnndddddddddddd..... Yeah, I think that's it.
Dislikes:
- Any one who even considers being mean to his siblings
- school
- fire
Relationship Status: Single... For now
Family:
Mrs Ackley- deceased- mom
Mr Ackley- dad
Una- sister
Wes- brother
Quindon- brother
Marshall- Brother
Chandler- brother
Amias- brother
Jex- brother
Abner- brother
Linus- brother
Wife/Husband: (If adult) nope
Children: (If adult) nope
Other: noooope
"RIKO! WES! QUINDON! MARSHALL! Anddddd.... Uh...... THE REST OF YOU PEOPLE WHO ARE RELATED TO ME! DINNER'S READYYYYYY!"
Full Name: Una Ackley
Nickname(s): Nope
Age: 16
Gender: Female
Species: Elf
Ability(max is 4): Conjurer.
Residence: Wargrove
Family Crest: Lots of hands in the centre of a silver square.
Organazation: Nope
Appearance: Una has very long dirty blond hair that she makes to braids out of at the sides of her head. Like pig tails. She ties little bows around them like Anne Of Green Gables. She always has a book in her head and periwinkle eyes. Cute button nose.
Other Markings or Accessories: Nope.
Personality: Una is ridiculously smart. I know all elves are smart but Una is reeeeeeaaaaaaaaalllllllyyyyyy smart. She skipped a lot of grades and she is now in elite. She's very kind and sweet and will do anything for her brothers.
Other Notable Things: She loves to cook.
History: Una has the same background as Riko. She runs the household now. She's the one who grounds her brothers when they are bad. She's the one who cooks and cleans, with the help of the gnomes, of course. She's still super happy.
Other Achievements/Accomplishments: nope
School: Foxfire
Coach(Exilium)/Level(Foxfire): Elite
Best Classes/Basic Abilities: All of them
Worst Classes/Basic Abilities: none of them
Likes:
- School
- Caring for her family
- Cooking
Dislikes:
- Mean people
- and that's
-about it....
Relationship Status: Single... No time for boys.
Family:
See Riko
Wife/Husband: (If adult) no
Children: (If adult) no
Other: no
"Wes! For the love of jellyfish! Will you just take off that hood?"
"Non, merci."
"What language is that?"
"Je ne sais pas." ((Brownie points if you can guess the language!!))
Full Name: Wesley Ackley
Nickname(s): Wes
Age: 16
Gender: Male
Species: Elf
Ability(max is 4): Polyglot.
Residence: Wargrove
Family Crest: lots of hands in the middle of a silver square.
Organazation: Maaaaaayyyyyyyybbeeee the black swan
Appearance: Messed up dirty blond hair underneath his hood. He always wears cloaks with hoods, don't know why. He has periwinkle eyes that sparkle through the shadow of his hood. He's tall like his brother.
Other Markings or Accessories: Nope
Personality: Wes is very secretive and shy. He's a real coward because he never had to be courageous. Thattttts.... Really it.
Other Notable Things: nope
History: Nothing he really wants to talk about.
Other Achievements/Accomplishments: nope
School: Foxfire
Coach(Exilium)/Level(Foxfire): 6
Best Classes/Basic Abilities: Everything but phys. Ed.
Worst Classes/Basic Abilities: phys. Ed.
Likes:
- Being in his room
- His siblings
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Dislikes:
- People asking him personal questions
- Phys. Ed.
- The word No.
Relationship Status: Single
Family:
See Riko
Wife/Husband: (If adult) no
Children: (If adult) no
Other: no
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A few things though-One, Elite includes two levels, seventh and eighth. Please specify which.
Next, if these characters are triplets, you might want to add a little more on how that's affected them. We all know how many problems THAT can cause...
And last, concerning your Secret,
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Nobody wrote: "There are a few things. One, it isn't like an elf father at all to try and leave his family for another one. Also, are they triplets? And how old are the other siblings? Because if his mother died ..."Mom died when the youngest of the ten was born. So that was ten years ago. Yeah, they're triplets. Mom died because of an accident. I'm not sure about the whole partner thing. I could take that out.
wait one quick second... Be right back.
Taaaaddddaaaaaaaaaa!! All fixed!!
Taaaaaaaaaadaaaaaaaaaaa!! Oh! Can you guess the language Wes was speaking in?
Ya! Brownie points for you!
By the way, lightbringer made a character, I accidentally posted before you guys could say any thing about his character.
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Second, the character itself.
He's way overpowered. Not only does he have four abilities with absolutely no reason for it, (which there should be. One or two is really as much as is possible without some other factor) one is Inflictor, which is already a super powerful ability.
He also has a backstory which directly contradicts the story's canon. The character sheet also contradicts itself. Does he want to annihilate earth, or take over the lost cities?
I'd also recommend more personality than just hate, which technically is only an emotion and not a character trait.
I'm sorry to have to point out so many things! This is a cool character idea, and hopefully we can get it into roleplay soon.
-Amelia
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But um... your character list is kind of nuts. XP
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I kinda want to make a character too. I'mma do that.
I made it. *smile*Full Name: Yani Azima
Age: 17
Gender: Female
Species: Elvin
Ability: Velociter and Froster
Residence: Foxfire
Family Crest: A white lily on a blue background
Organization: Wants to join the Black Swan
Appearance: (view spoiler)
She has corkscrew curly red hair and piercing light blue eyes. She is very fair and her built is on the small side.
Personality: Yani is... special. She tends to prowl around the edges of a situation looking in and secretly making fun of everyone. Despite this, she's a goofball and draws attention in everything she does, especially when she's with her friends. She has a serious side that really only comes out at home, with certain people, and during class at Foxfire. Finally, you don't want to mess with her or her friends if you value your life.
History: Yani was born the firstborn of a kindly couple. However, her parents were very serious about her schoolwork and did not take well to her goofing off and tendency to save her work until the last minute. She fought with them a lot and was glad when she was able to move into the Silver Tower and get away from her parents. However, she struggles with the seclusion of the tower and being away from friends that didn't make it to the Elite Levels.
School: Foxfire
Level: Silver
Best Classes/Basic Abilities: She does pretty well in general, and especially excels in Linguistics and Frosting. She is skilled in her abilities beyond her years.
Worst Classes/Basic Abilities: She is having trouble with the mirror assignment, figuring out what each means.
Likes:
-Her friends
-Mallowmelt
-Anything to do with humor
Dislikes:
-Lectures
-The mirror assignment
-The stupid silver capes Elite Silver prodigies have to wear
Relationship Status: Available
Family: Alix Azima (mother), Coltrane Azima (father)
"Thank you for showing your concern, but seriously, I'm fine!" Full Name: Winifred Joyce
Nickname(s): Wini
Age: 13
Gender: Female
Species: Elf
Ability(max is 4): Will eventually manifest as a Vanisher.
Residence: The forest.
Family Crest: That's a reeeeallly good question...
Organazation: Double wammy. Black swan and Neverseen.
Appearance: Wini has bright red hair that she usually keeps in two braids. Her eyes are a soft sky blue that really stand out when you look at them. She has a cute button nose and a sweet little smile.
Other Markings or Accessories: Nope.
Personality: Wini is a sweet little girl who's pretty quiet. She doesn't loose her temper that easily and she's pretty good about keeping her cool. If you are an actual threat to her, she will show no mercy in a fight. But if not, she'll be your bestie!!
Other Notable Things: Nope
History: Well, Wini got banished from the lost cities for being in relations to the black swan when she was six. It was a real shock for her family that she had to leave. Truth is, it was her parents who were apart of the black swan. Wini was just about to join when she got banished. Her parents tried to convince the council that they too were apart of the black swan but the council thought they were just trying to cover for her. So, it's just Wini, out in the forest, alone. She doesn't really see her parents anymore. The Neverseen wanted to recruit her, and she accepted their offer. They would give her a gnome to take care of her if she gives them weekly updates on the black swan. Well, she's been lying through her teeth to them. The gnome is also an undercover agent for the black swan. Her name is Luyu.
Other Achievements/Accomplishments: She held her breath for 19mins and 36secs under water!
School: Exilium
Coach(Exilium)/Level(Foxfire): Purple
Best Classes/Basic Abilities: Holding breath under water. Outward channeling.
Worst Classes/Basic Abilities: Hunger and Thirst depression.
Likes:
- The black swan
- Luyu's awesome blueberry-nutty breakfast soup
- Braiding her hair
Dislikes:
- The Neverseen
- Wolves
- How the black swan tells her NOTHING!!
Relationship Status: Single
Family:
Mom
Dad
Sister- She doesn't remember her name that well. It started with a-- Y? U, maybe? It's been a while!
Wife/Husband: (If adult)
Children: (If adult)
Other: Nope
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Also, has anyone else noticed the ridiculous amount of button-nosed characters that have sprung up into existence in the last week? Not that button-nosed characters are bad, and I'm not saying you should change them, (If that's what you're character looks like, THATS WHAT THEY LOOK LIKE) but it is really weird.
Up until now, there has been virtually no mention of Moses in character description, and now, all of the sudden, we have like six with the same descriptor. ( Probs not actually six. Haven't counted. But it's been in most of the ones I've looked over this week.)
*Amelia* wrote: "She's missing a last name and family crest. Also, has anyone else noticed the ridiculous amount of button-nosed characters that have sprung up into existence in the last week? Not that button-nos..."
She doesn't know her last name and doesn't have a family crest. She lives in the neutral territories.
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APPROVED.
Yeah, she just never asked what her last name was. It didn't matter to her. I didn't learn my last name till I was six, or so. I didn't know what I last name was. I think.
Scrap Wini. I'm not gonna use her
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I mean, it's a little tipsy on whether disabilities like deafness and blindness would really be incurable in an Elven setting, but that's basically the most important non-personality thing of their characters, so I think we can just go with it.
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I dunno. Up to you, I guess.
Taking another shot at Wini..."Thank you for showing your concern, but seriously, I'm fine!"
Full Name: Winifred (She doesn't have a last name anymore.)
Nickname(s): Wini
Age: 13
Gender: Female
Species: Elf
Ability(max is 4): Will eventually manifest as a Vanisher.
Residence: In the forest somewhere.
Family Crest: That's a reeeeallly good question...
Organazation: Double wammy. Black swan and Neverseen.
Appearance: Wini has bright red hair that she usually keeps in two braids. Her eyes are a soft sky blue that really stand out when you look at them. She has a cute button nose and a sweet little smile.
Other Markings or Accessories: Nope.
Personality: Wini is a sweet little girl who's pretty quiet. She doesn't loose her temper that easily and she's pretty good about keeping her cool. If you are an actual threat to her, she will show no mercy in a fight. But if not, she'll be your bestie!!
Other Notable Things: Nope
History: Wini was a loveable child until age six. She saw her uncle fading away Until, eventually, he was gone. Being to young to comprehend the concept of death, she started getting a little depressed. The guilt became unbearable so she became a little insane. After being framed in a crime she managed to get herself banished at the young age of seven. It turns out, being "Wild" some how made her a little more sane. She joined the black swan so she could see her parents on occasion. Then, the Neverseen offered her a gnome to keep her safe and cook for her as long as she spied on the Black Swan (this was at age 10). Truth is, she's spying on the Neverseen. The gnome she got, Luyu, she is also a double agent for the Black Swan.
Other Achievements/Accomplishments: She held her breath for 19mins and 36secs under water!
School: Exilium
Coach(Exilium)/Level(Foxfire): Purple
Best Classes/Basic Abilities: Holding breath under water. Outward channeling.
Worst Classes/Basic Abilities: Hunger and Thirst depression.
Likes:
- The black swan
- Luyu's awesome blueberry-nutty breakfast soup
- Braiding her hair
Dislikes:
- The Neverseen
- Wolves
- How the black swan tells her NOTHING!!
Relationship Status: Single
Family:
Mom
Dad
Sister- She doesn't remember her name that well. It started with a-- Y? U, maybe? It's been a while!
Wife/Husband: (If adult)
Children: (If adult)
Other: Nope
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Guilt. I mentioned that in the history. I think... *searches description frantically*
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Nobody wrote: "Ummm first off, what was the crime that she was banished for? Like seriously how well did they frame her to get a seven year old banished?"I couldn't come up with a crime (because it's the lost cities. How many crimes are there). She's just banished at age seven. That's all.
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o_o Why was my comment deleted? I just suggested she could have said something against or taken action against the Council.
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I know it doesn't make a lot of sense just trying to help out with ideas. If you want her to be banished then how about her parents are Neverseen/Black Swan/exiled/unknown location and she ran away because she didn't want to be adopted by a stranger.
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Full Name: Valiance Jason Maverick
Age: 16
Gender: Male
Species: Human
Ability: Super athletic
Residence: Um...
Family Crest: Well...
Organisation: You see...
Appearance: http://vignette1.wikia.nocookie.net/m... Dyed firetruck red hair, normally a nice shade of dark brown, naturally green eyes, but he puts in orange contacts most of the time, very thin, very athletic, like 6'2.
Other Markings or Accessories: Mmmmm nah
Personality: Rambunctious, boisterous, flirty, cocky, thinks he's the absolute bomb dot com, can be a total cinnamon roll, but if you get after his sister he will cut you, he doesn't get offended easily, doesn't take many things seriously, but can be really sympathetic if needed. Unless it's a crying girl. He can't deal with crying girls. Crying girls make him scared.
Other Notable Things: Nahhhh
History: Normal boring human history. He goes to public school, and plenty of friends, and gets good enough grades to be considered a good student.
Other Achievements/Accomplishments: Yooooo he's a fairly famous youtuber
School: Uhhh... some public school in Wyoming...
Grade: Highschool! Grade ten! Sophomore!
Best Class: Physical Education (P.E.)
Worst Classes: History and Geometry
Likes:
-Sprinting
-Flirting
-Being the funniest one in the group
Dislikes:
-History
-Geometry
-Being out witted
Relationship Status: Mmmm he's "married" to like over fifty of his fans but he doesn't have an actual girlfriend
Family:
Mother- Annalyssa Maverick
Father- Braeden Axel Maverick
Lil Twin Sis- Verity Maverick
Wife: AHAHAHAHAHA LOTS BUT NOT REALLY
Children: Nope
Other:
Full Name: Verity Maverick
Age: 16
Gender: Female
Species: Human
Ability: Super athletic
Residence: Er...
Family Crest: Um...
Organisation: Ah...
Appearance: https://68.media.tumblr.com/7a0339345... Cherry pink dyed wavyish hair that reaches her shoulders, normally it's dark brown like her brother's, she also has green eyes but hides the emerald with contacts coloured to match her hair. She petite but athletic and stands at around 5'10.
Other Markings or Accessories: She likes wearing long earrings.
Personality: Goofy bookish nerd that loves puns and jokes. She's a total fangirl, but that doesn't mean she can't absolutely demolish you in every sporty activity ever to exist. Also she can be as extroverted as Valiance. Minus being flirty.
Other Notable Things: Nehh
History: Like... the same as her brother.
Other Achievements/Accomplishments: She doesn't have a YouTube channel herself, but she guest stars on Valiance's and has lotsandlotsandlots of followers on her Tumblr and Deviantart.
School: Same as her brother
Level: Same as her brother
Best Classes: Lit and Phys Ed
Worst Classes: Ehhhhhh math but she's got a steady b+ there so
Likes:
-Books
-Drawing
-Sports!
Dislikes:
-When guys hit on her
-Losing
-Meany peoplez
Relationship Status: She's got high standards. Like... REALLY high standards...
Family:
Mother- Annalyssa Maverick
Father- Braeden Axel Maverick
Big Twin Bro- Valiance Jason Maverick
Wife/Husband: Nope
Children: Nope
Other:
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YAY THANKS!
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