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ᎻꮖꮐꮋᏞꭺꭰꭹ (hollywaug) "Max." She finally said.

((This could be the reason why he thinks he killed Max later on in the idea you came up with))


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Eden Kabeer (edenk) | 37908 comments ((Thats what I was thinking lol))

Elian was angry, so so so angry but he didn't trust himself to let go of Natalie. He kissed her skin, staying away from her head.


ᎻꮖꮐꮋᏞꭺꭰꭹ (hollywaug) ((Awesome lol))

"He-" she cut herself off, shaking her head. "I feel dizzy:" she whispered.


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Eden Kabeer (edenk) | 37908 comments ((Idk how stuf with the police goes lol))


ᎻꮖꮐꮋᏞꭺꭰꭹ (hollywaug) ((I've got it))

Two EMT's stormed in, holding a stretcher between them. Followed by the police.


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Eden Kabeer (edenk) | 37908 comments Elian jumped but he moved away so the people could get her. He looked to the police officer and stood up.


ᎻꮖꮐꮋᏞꭺꭰꭹ (hollywaug) "What's the story here?" The officer asked. "And who are you?"

The medical personal checked her out and wrapped a neck brace around her neck.


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Eden Kabeer (edenk) | 37908 comments Elian started to tell him what happened, excluding the fact that he couldn't remember half his day.


ᎻꮖꮐꮋᏞꭺꭰꭹ (hollywaug) "And your relation to this women?" He asked.
Natalia was put onto a portal gurney and was taken out of the room.


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Eden Kabeer (edenk) | 37908 comments "We went out on a date... She's my girlfriend," he said.


ᎻꮖꮐꮋᏞꭺꭰꭹ (hollywaug) The officer nodded. "Do you know who did this?"


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Eden Kabeer (edenk) | 37908 comments "She said it was a guy called Max," he said.


ᎻꮖꮐꮋᏞꭺꭰꭹ (hollywaug) "Do you know her relation to him?" He asked.


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Eden Kabeer (edenk) | 37908 comments He hesitated. "She used to sleep with him... He's not a boyfriend or anything but she said he liked to pretend they were dating."


ᎻꮖꮐꮋᏞꭺꭰꭹ (hollywaug) He nodded, writing everything down. "I'll need you to come into the station for further questioning tomorrow if that's okay." He said.


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Eden Kabeer (edenk) | 37908 comments He nodded, "Alright."


ᎻꮖꮐꮋᏞꭺꭰꭹ (hollywaug) "You may go meet her at the hospital." He said


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Eden Kabeer (edenk) | 37908 comments Elian didn't waste anymore time before he got into his truck and drove off behind the ambulance.


ᎻꮖꮐꮋᏞꭺꭰꭹ (hollywaug) The ambulance arrived at the hospital a few minutes later. They wheeled her into the hospital, putting her into a room.


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Eden Kabeer (edenk) | 37908 comments Elian parked quickly and then quickly followed wherever they were taking her.


ᎻꮖꮐꮋᏞꭺꭰꭹ (hollywaug) "You'll have to stay out here." The nurse said. "Just so they can check her out and run some tests. A doctor will speak with you shortly." She touched his shoulder.


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Eden Kabeer (edenk) | 37908 comments Elian stood right out the door.


ᎻꮖꮐꮋᏞꭺꭰꭹ (hollywaug) Almost an hour a later, a doctor appeared. Two police officers walked out after him. "Are you here for Natalia Karova?" He asked.


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Eden Kabeer (edenk) | 37908 comments "Yes." He told the doctor.


ᎻꮖꮐꮋᏞꭺꭰꭹ (hollywaug) "We made sure her head injury wasn't anything major. It's just a mild concussion from what he think was being slammed into a wall." He looked at his chart. "Her neck is a little stiff from the blow, as well as there are some bruise marks in the shape in hands on the sides of her neck, shoulders, hips, and thighs." He listed. "We performed a rape kit which we'll get the results of shortly."


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Eden Kabeer (edenk) | 37908 comments Elian stiffened and stared at the doctor. He hadn't even thought about the fact that Max might've.... He shook his head, "alright... Um, can I go in to see her?"


ᎻꮖꮐꮋᏞꭺꭰꭹ (hollywaug) "Yes," he said. "She's a bit groggy but she's awake." He told him.


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Eden Kabeer (edenk) | 37908 comments "Thanks," Elian said and hollowly walked into the room they had taken her into. "Nat," he said softly and took her hand, sitting on the edge of the bed.


ᎻꮖꮐꮋᏞꭺꭰꭹ (hollywaug) Natalia opened her eyes at the sound of his voice. She held his hand, clearing her throat. "Hey." She whispered.


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Eden Kabeer (edenk) | 37908 comments "I missed you today," he said softly.


ᎻꮖꮐꮋᏞꭺꭰꭹ (hollywaug) "I'm so sorry." She groaned. "I was going to come I swear. I made you lasagna." She sniffled.


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Eden Kabeer (edenk) | 37908 comments He held her hand gently. "I'm going to kill him," he whispered.


ᎻꮖꮐꮋᏞꭺꭰꭹ (hollywaug) "Elian." She sighed deeply, closing her eyes.


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Eden Kabeer (edenk) | 37908 comments He lifted her hand and gently kissed it. "Rest."


ᎻꮖꮐꮋᏞꭺꭰꭹ (hollywaug) She shook her head. "No. I want to see you. Talk to you." She opened her eyes.


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Eden Kabeer (edenk) | 37908 comments "I'll be right here for you when you wake up," he promised.


ᎻꮖꮐꮋᏞꭺꭰꭹ (hollywaug) "No." She whined like a child. She them hummed. "This morphine is great." She murmured.


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Eden Kabeer (edenk) | 37908 comments He chuckled.


ᎻꮖꮐꮋᏞꭺꭰꭹ (hollywaug) "Makes the ghosties be quiet." She whispered.


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Eden Kabeer (edenk) | 37908 comments He gently rubbed her hand gently.


ᎻꮖꮐꮋᏞꭺꭰꭹ (hollywaug) "Elian I'm so sorry." She forced her eyes open.


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Eden Kabeer (edenk) | 37908 comments "For what?"


ᎻꮖꮐꮋᏞꭺꭰꭹ (hollywaug) "For him." She swallowed. "There was nothing I could do." She started to cry.


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Eden Kabeer (edenk) | 37908 comments He leaned down and kissed her, "don't you dare apologize for what he did. It was all him, nothings on you."


ᎻꮖꮐꮋᏞꭺꭰꭹ (hollywaug) "But he didn't just push me into a wall." She bit her lip.


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Eden Kabeer (edenk) | 37908 comments "I know," he stood up.


ᎻꮖꮐꮋᏞꭺꭰꭹ (hollywaug) "What?" She frowned. "How-oh." She stopped, then sighed. She looked away.


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Eden Kabeer (edenk) | 37908 comments He rubbed her hand between his own. "I'm going to kill him for this," he swore.


ᎻꮖꮐꮋᏞꭺꭰꭹ (hollywaug) "Elian I really don't want to discuss anything like that right now." She said. "He's already dead to me. Let the police deal with him,"


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Eden Kabeer (edenk) | 37908 comments Elian kissed her hand again but didn't respond.


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