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message 13501: by Hannah (new)

Hannah (lettingtheinkdry) | 4824 comments Declan pulled her up the grand staircase.

JOsiah rolled his eyes
"That was so poorly planned, I'm embarrassed."

Emmy nodded picking up her bag and the weapon she had used from it earlier and tossed it back in. Patrik watched the girls finish getting ready. Emmy drew some symbols in the airand the portal opened on the floor. Patrik moved to her side, she took his hand and squeezed
"I'll be back before you fall asleep." she assured
"Mmhmm." Patrik said pressing his lips to hers.


message 13502: by Julian (new)

Julian Moreno (emmieloowhoo) | 7315 comments Dani followed.


message 13503: by Ky (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments "We'll do better next time," Damien said simply.

"Watch out for Waverley," Salem muttered. "And tie Farrow to a chair or something." She closed her eyes. Yay. Romance. She tapped her leg, anxious to get out of there.


message 13504: by Hannah (new)

Hannah (lettingtheinkdry) | 4824 comments Declan led her to a smaller room that had a porch with what seemed to be the best view of the whole house.

"Yeah, I would advise it." Josiah nodded

Emmy pulled back slowly, Patrik nodded at Salem.
"See you two later." He stepped back.
Emmy held out her arm to Salem and grinned impishly.
"You ready?"


message 13505: by Julian (new)

Julian Moreno (emmieloowhoo) | 7315 comments Dani tilted her head slightly, smiling.


message 13506: by Ky (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments "Good. It'll happen, you know."

"I was born ready," she deadpanned, taking Emmy's arm. "Goodbye world!" Salem laughed humourlessly. "See you soon, and you're welcome."


message 13507: by Hannah (new)

Hannah (lettingtheinkdry) | 4824 comments Declan smiled leaning on the rail
"Best spot in the house." he said to her "What do you want it to be?"

Josiah looked at him
"What?" He had stopped paying attention to what he was saying and was thinking again.

Emmy laughed and jumped into the portal. Her feet hit the ground if the Faerie Market hard, it jarred her whole body.
"My Fyre, you are later than expected." Seraena said


message 13508: by Ky (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments "They'll be caught, Josiah," Damien said, shoving his hands in his pockets and looking at the ground as he walked.

Salem turned towards the voice and smiled softly, the adrenaline from the fight not allowing the smile to show in her eyes.


message 13509: by Julian (new)

Julian Moreno (emmieloowhoo) | 7315 comments Dani pondered it. "I don't know. What do you think?"


message 13510: by Hannah (new)

Hannah (lettingtheinkdry) | 4824 comments Josiah gave him a look anger grinding at his core.
"I know that Damien, I'm not nieve((how is that spelt?))"

Emmy turned towards Seraena
"We had an unexpected problem." She said smoothly willing her eyes to go back before she saw it.
"Fyre your problem was a fight?" She said then looked to Salem "But I am being rude, you must be Salem?" Seraena said looking at Salem. Her inky hair flowing around her like she was stuck underwater, green eyes like jade shone.

"It's your room, what do you want?" Declan asked again


message 13511: by Ky (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments ((naive))

"Sorry. I'm just...shocked."

"Yes, I am. And you must be Seraena. It's a pleasure to meet you," Salem said, amazed by the woman's beauty.


message 13512: by Julian (new)

Julian Moreno (emmieloowhoo) | 7315 comments Nephilim {Hannah} wrote: "Josiah gave him a look anger grinding at his core.
"I know that Damien, I'm not nieve((how is that spelt?))"

Emmy turned towards Seraena
"We had an unexpected problem." She said smoothly will..."


((You mean naive?))

Dani kept thinking about that. "This one has too much potential," she said jokingly.


message 13513: by Hannah (new)

Hannah (lettingtheinkdry) | 4824 comments ((THank you ladies! I can't spell!))

Josiah nodded and put his hands in his jeans pockets
"I'm not."

"And same to you midear." She smiled "Emmy told me it was your birthday yesterday. How do you like your present?"

Declan looked at her and grinned
"You're not getting off that easily."


message 13514: by Julian (new)

Julian Moreno (emmieloowhoo) | 7315 comments Dani sighed and smiled slightly. "Maybe..."


message 13515: by Ky (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments ((olo))

"Of course you're not. You know about this shit," the french boy pointed out.

"I love it. Most likely the coolest thing I've ever owned." Not that I owned much before escaping from the lab. She pulled on her shirt, straightening the soot-smeared white camisole.


message 13516: by Hannah (new)

Hannah (lettingtheinkdry) | 4824 comments Declan looked around
"This'll be yours. You can pick what gets done to it. When I buy thi place it'll be done that way." he decided.

"I told you about that shit, you shouldn't be all too suprised." JOsiah retorted.

Emmy looked at Salem and breifly wondered how she kept herself that clean after fights.
"I'm glad." Seraena said smiling again "Come Ladies, let's get you cleaned up before you go wandering."
"Thank you." Emmy said


message 13517: by Julian (last edited Aug 04, 2010 11:11PM) (new)

Julian Moreno (emmieloowhoo) | 7315 comments Dani smiled at him.
"A photography room," she said at last.


message 13518: by Ky (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments "Well I'd never seen anything like it!"

Salem was lost in her thoughts but followed them on autopilot. Something didn't feel right.


message 13519: by Hannah (new)

Hannah (lettingtheinkdry) | 4824 comments Declan nodded
"I like that idea. That's what this room will be then. Your photography room."

"I kind of figured as much." Josiah nodded thinking.

Emmy looked back at Salem laughing at something Seraena had just said. THe look on Salem's face killed her good mood, she moved to Salem's side
"What is it?" she asked


message 13520: by Julian (new)

Julian Moreno (emmieloowhoo) | 7315 comments Dani looked at him.


message 13521: by Hannah (new)

Hannah (lettingtheinkdry) | 4824 comments Declan looked back at her
"What?" he asked confused


message 13522: by Julian (new)

Julian Moreno (emmieloowhoo) | 7315 comments Dani shook her head, looking away.


message 13523: by Ky (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments Damien scowled and had a little rant in french.

"Nothing, I'm just...thinking. Don't worry about it," she smiled brightly, telling Emmy to be happy. It feels so wrong...why can't I see what it is? It was like someone was purposely blocking her, but it would've had to be someone close to her. Someone strong.


message 13524: by Hannah (new)

Hannah (lettingtheinkdry) | 4824 comments "Dani." Declan said in his adorable accent "What is it?"

Josiah rolled his eyes.

((ohhh what is it?))
Emmy didn't buy it but nodded.
"Seraena, can we just walk like this? If I sit now I'll never get up."
Seraena laughed at her
"Yes fine most are used to you being covered in blood and soot."
Emmy gave her a 'what can you do?' shrug.


message 13525: by Julian (new)

Julian Moreno (emmieloowhoo) | 7315 comments Dani kind of melted a little. "Nothing," she said, blushing.


message 13526: by Ky (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments ((not totally sure. :P The ambush?))

Damien sighed. "What?"

Salem let herself get lost again. She was tempted to close her eyes and follow by instinct but she didn't think that would be taken well. She was beginning to feel like on of the walking dead. With all the drama and just plain bad stuff of reality.


message 13527: by Hannah (new)

Hannah (lettingtheinkdry) | 4824 comments "Ohcome on tell me please." Declan pressed.


message 13528: by Julian (new)

Julian Moreno (emmieloowhoo) | 7315 comments Dani looked at him. "Really, it's nothing."


message 13529: by Hannah (new)

Hannah (lettingtheinkdry) | 4824 comments ((You know what could be cool? It could be Josiah, he's thinking about her, he's crazy powerful... just a thought.))

"You, next time you can't rely on brute force. YOu need strategy, you need lots of men to wear them out then grab them when they are weak." Josiah said still halfway out of it.

Emmy waved to Seraena and took Salem's arm and started walking
"Salem." Emmy said to her.

Declan nodded
"Alright, if you say so."


message 13530: by Julian (new)

Julian Moreno (emmieloowhoo) | 7315 comments Dani smiled at him.


message 13531: by Ky (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments ((great idea! I love it!))

Damien nodded, wondering why Josiah seemed so out of it. He texted the boss their latest news and got a positive response. Over two hundred agents would be there within the half-hour. "Covered. They left, didn't they?"

She blinked slowly and then a look of surprise crossed her face. "Oh...sorry Em. I'm sorry."


message 13532: by Hannah (new)

Hannah (lettingtheinkdry) | 4824 comments Declan grinned at her.
"So what are we doing next love?" he asked


message 13533: by Julian (new)

Julian Moreno (emmieloowhoo) | 7315 comments Dani looked at him. "WOnderful question. Let's go find out."


message 13534: by Hannah (new)

Hannah (lettingtheinkdry) | 4824 comments ((Sweet!))

((But sadly I have to go:( I must sleep! Night girlies!))

"Who? Salem and Emmy, yes they did." Josiah nodded

Emmy smiled lopsidedly
"Nah it's all good. I'm just trying to keep your brain here."


message 13535: by Julian (new)

Julian Moreno (emmieloowhoo) | 7315 comments ((Good night!))


message 13536: by Hannah (new)

Hannah (lettingtheinkdry) | 4824 comments Declan nodded and followed her out.((Sorry Emmie. I respond in my head then forget to type...)


message 13537: by Julian (new)

Julian Moreno (emmieloowhoo) | 7315 comments ((Haha! Don't you love it when that happens?))

Dani started walking, not knowing where she was going.


message 13538: by Ky (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments ((Dude, I didn't want to leave first, so this is perfect. gtg too. Talk to you tomorrow! bye!))

"Perfect. We can set up an ambush."

Salem ran a dirty hand through her mussed up hair. "My brain doesn't like me right now," she mumbled.


message 13539: by Hannah (new)

Hannah (lettingtheinkdry) | 4824 comments ((Dude, we have skills. :P))
((Yeah I do then Im like NOOO!!!))

Declan followed her.

Josiah laughed
"Isn't that more brute force? Salem can see the future right?"

"I can tell." Emmy said looking at the knives laid out on the venders table in front of her.


message 13540: by Ky (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments ((major skills.))

"Do you really think they can stop over two hundred men on their own, Josiah?"

Salem chuckled. "Sure. Ooh..nice..." she looked at the knives too, genuinely interested.


message 13541: by Julian (new)

Julian Moreno (emmieloowhoo) | 7315 comments Dani hesitated when they reached the end of the street.


message 13542: by Hannah (new)

Hannah (lettingtheinkdry) | 4824 comments Declan stood next to her, waiting.

Josiah looked at him
"Not at once." he stated.

Emmy smiled at her
"I know right? They never need sharpening."


message 13543: by Julian (new)

Julian Moreno (emmieloowhoo) | 7315 comments Dani turned left.


message 13544: by Hannah (new)

Hannah (lettingtheinkdry) | 4824 comments Declan followed


message 13545: by Ky (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments "So we'll wear them down. Didn't you just say that was the key?" Damien pointed out.

"Really? That's so...beyond...perfect!"


message 13546: by Hannah (new)

Hannah (lettingtheinkdry) | 4824 comments Josiah nodded
"yes that is what I just said."

Emmy smiled and picked up the nearest one and judged its balance.
"I know! I have atleast 6"


message 13547: by Ky (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments "So it could work then?"

"Could I get one, Em?" Salem had been drawn to a certain one right from the start and she didn't think the feeling was going to let her go so easily.


message 13548: by Julian (new)

Julian Moreno (emmieloowhoo) | 7315 comments Dani kept walking ((Now what?))


message 13549: by Hannah (new)

Hannah (lettingtheinkdry) | 4824 comments Josiah thought then nodded
"I think it could."

Emmy shrugged
"I don't see why not." She turned to the vendor saying
"What do you want for that?" she asked
The woman at the table smiled silkily
"What do you have to offer?"


message 13550: by Hannah (new)

Hannah (lettingtheinkdry) | 4824 comments ((Idk it's your story))

Declan looekd confused.


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