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message 13651: by Ky (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments "What are you talking about, bro?" Farrow asked, yawning.

"Oh trust me, she is," Salem shot Emmy a meaningful glance. "She just has the same issue as me when it comes to admitting that." Because having something to be grateful for means you needed something in the first place. Need. What it comes down to. She shook her head; it wasn't her thinking these things.


message 13652: by Julian (new)

Julian Moreno (emmieloowhoo) | 7315 comments "I'm partially schitzophrenic."


message 13653: by Hannah (new)

Hannah (lettingtheinkdry) | 4824 comments JOsiah shook his head
"Nevermind."
Patrik gave Farrow her orange juice.

((Ohhh whose thoughts??))

Emmy gave Salem a lopsided grin. Salem had that way of getting into Emmy's head and saying all the stuff that she didn't know how to.


message 13654: by Julian (new)

Julian Moreno (emmieloowhoo) | 7315 comments Emmie wrote: ""I'm partially schitzophrenic.""


message 13655: by Ky (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments ((dunno yet. It just struck me and I wanted to bother Salem more cause it's fun.))

Farrow smiled and said thanks.
Damien was still suspicious but practically clueless.


Salem smiled back, her mind somewhere else for a second, somewhere that was almost peaceful. Until that peace was shattered by a vision so real she could feel it. The smile faded from her face and her hand clenched on the knife, her other pressing on the blade to keep herself from using it on somebody. Blood dripped from the wound there but she couldn't feel that. She only felt what happened in the vision. She Saw, she Heard, she Felt. It was terrifying.


message 13656: by Hannah (new)

Hannah (lettingtheinkdry) | 4824 comments Declan looked at her and nodded
" I hate my family."


message 13657: by Hannah (new)

Hannah (lettingtheinkdry) | 4824 comments Josia's vision doubled breifly and his head hurt. He shook himself out of it.

Emmy Grabbed Salem's shoulders and kept the pressure off the knife
"Salem!" Emmy said loudly


message 13658: by Julian (new)

Julian Moreno (emmieloowhoo) | 7315 comments Dani nodded.


message 13659: by Ky (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments "Mon ami, what is wrong?" Damien asked.

The knife slipped from her grip and to the ground. She fell to her knees and her eyes snapped open, not silver any longer. There were tears and almost as soon as it had happened, the vision began to fade.


message 13660: by Hannah (new)

Hannah (lettingtheinkdry) | 4824 comments Declan looked at her
"No, that wasn't enough. Most kids hate theor families, I wanted mine dead."

Emmy went down with her
"Hey, Salem." She said to her wanting a response


message 13661: by Julian (new)

Julian Moreno (emmieloowhoo) | 7315 comments Dani frowned. She felt horrible for him.


message 13662: by Ky (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments Damien smacked Josiah's forehead like the V8 commercials. "what happened?"

Salem choked up and then cleared her throat, raising her gaze to Emmy. "Em..."


message 13663: by Hannah (last edited Aug 05, 2010 11:42PM) (new)

Hannah (lettingtheinkdry) | 4824 comments Declan laughed
"How awful does that sound?"

Josiah glared at him
"Hey! What was that for?"

"Salem, talk to me. What just happened?" Emmy asked looking at her.


message 13664: by Julian (new)

Julian Moreno (emmieloowhoo) | 7315 comments Emmie wrote: "Dani frowned. She felt horrible for him."


message 13665: by Ky (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments "You went all weird." He shrugged. "What happened?"

"I don't kn- I Saw something, Em. But it was different...I Felt it...I didn't just See and Hear it this time...I Felt," she shivered and closed her eyes. "I feel funny Em. So funny.."


message 13666: by Hannah (new)

Hannah (lettingtheinkdry) | 4824 comments Declan laughed
"How awful does that sound?"


Josiah focused in on him
"My head went all weird. I can't really explain it."
((Josiah's now zeroed in on Salem...))

Emmy looked at her and rubbed her shoulder
"What was it Salem? What did you see?"


message 13667: by Ky (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments ((This is so cool/interesting/fun...))

Damien frowned. "That's weird. Maybe you need meds."

Salem whimpered, "I can't- I don't r-remember, Emmy." Not anymore, you don't...but you will. Again with the thoughts. They were in her head but she knew it wasn't her.


message 13668: by Hannah (new)

Hannah (lettingtheinkdry) | 4824 comments ((Yes it is. I'm enjoying it))

Josiah rolled his eyes
"Shut up Damien."

Emmy's eyes looked her up and down
"We should go home. I don't like that this gets all interfered with here."


message 13669: by Ky (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments ((same :D))

"I'm serious, dude."

Salem noticed her hand. Oopsies. She stood up, wavering only a little. When her eyes --silver again-- landed on Gawain she flinched. "I'm sorry," she apologized to both he and Emmy. "I ruined your visit."


message 13670: by Hannah (new)

Hannah (lettingtheinkdry) | 4824 comments ((:D))

Josiah shook his head
"Dude I'm fine, seriously."

Emmy shook her head an dsmiled a little
"No, hun, it's fine. Don't worry."
Gawain smiled at her
"DOn't worry Salem, it was a pleasure to meet you."


message 13671: by Ky (last edited Aug 06, 2010 12:17AM) (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments "Fine. Whatever you say." Damien shrugged. He heard clattering and then he checked his cellphone. "They're here," he murmured. Turning to Farrow and Patrik he said, "If there is anyone here who isn't supposed to be fighting, you should get them out. Now."

She smiled for their benefit and nodded. "It really was cool to meet you, for however brief."


message 13672: by Hannah (new)

Hannah (lettingtheinkdry) | 4824 comments ((Sleep is calling! Night ladies! <3))


message 13673: by Ky (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments ((goodnight! my pillow was beginning to eat me so I knew it was time to go...olo. ttyt))


message 13674: by Julian (new)

Julian Moreno (emmieloowhoo) | 7315 comments Nephilim {Hannah} wrote: "Declan laughed
"How awful does that sound?"


Josiah focused in on him
"My head went all weird. I can't really explain it."
((Josiah's now zeroed in on Salem...))

Emmy looked at her and ..."


Dani looked at him. "It makes them sound pretty cruel."


message 13675: by Hannah (new)

Hannah (lettingtheinkdry) | 4824 comments Patrik looked bored
"You want more of your men dead?"
Josiah shook his head
"You should leave here Patrik."

Gawain nodded at her
"I hope you feel better, and I hope to see you soon Tatts."
Emmy grinned
"You will. I'll talk you later."


message 13676: by Hannah (new)

Hannah (lettingtheinkdry) | 4824 comments Declan shrugged
"I don't know how else to paint them"


message 13677: by Julian (new)

Julian Moreno (emmieloowhoo) | 7315 comments Dani was dying to say the s word.


message 13678: by Ky (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments Farrow sighed dramatically. "What about the kid?"
Damien looked up. "They're here...most of them, that is."


Salem picked up her knife in her uninjured hand and held it loosely, tapping it against her leg.


message 13679: by Hannah (new)

Hannah (lettingtheinkdry) | 4824 comments Declan ordered another beer and drank it quickly.
"Any more secrets?" Declan asked her

"Waverly? She's with Liv. They went out for the day." Patrik told Farrow

JOsiah nodded "You should leave too Patrik."

Emmy moved her bag up on her shoulder
"Let's go." She created a portal infront of them.


message 13680: by Julian (new)

Julian Moreno (emmieloowhoo) | 7315 comments Dani thought about that. "Well, my dad and sister are dead, but that's not really a secret."


message 13681: by Ky (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments Farrow rolled her eyes. "I knew that, Patrik."

Damien nodded. "Our people are here."

Salem readjusted her bag and nodded, stepping in.


message 13682: by Hannah (new)

Hannah (lettingtheinkdry) | 4824 comments "Well I was just saying you asked." Patrik shrugged
Josiah nodded
"They'll have to wait."
"Guys, I'm not going to let you kidnap them."

Emmy followed Salem walking into the middle of the living room.
"Hey boys. And Farrow, what are you doing?"


message 13683: by Ky (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments "I was asking them."
Farrow sighed. "Why do you guys feel the need to kidnap them?" she fumed, acting bipolar.

Salem sat down on the floor when they got back.


message 13684: by Julian (new)

Julian Moreno (emmieloowhoo) | 7315 comments Emmie wrote: "Dani thought about that. "Well, my dad and sister are dead, but that's not really a secret.""


message 13685: by Hannah (new)

Hannah (lettingtheinkdry) | 4824 comments "Salem." Josiah said immediately "Emmy what happened?"
"She cut herself on the knife she bought."

Declan shook his head
"No it wasn't, but it's still awful."


message 13686: by Julian (new)

Julian Moreno (emmieloowhoo) | 7315 comments Dani shrugged.


message 13687: by Ky (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments Salem laughed quietly. "That makes me sound clumsy, it's new. I like it." How about we stick with that story, Em?


message 13688: by Hannah (new)

Hannah (lettingtheinkdry) | 4824 comments SOunds good to me
"What you can't be clumsy?" Emmy said

Josiah looked so broken when Damien set the order.


message 13689: by Ky (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments "Well I haven't been since practically....ever," she grinned.

Damien gave Josiah a sharp look.
Salem noticed it too, "What's wrong, Josiah?"


message 13690: by Julian (new)

Julian Moreno (emmieloowhoo) | 7315 comments Emmie wrote: "Dani shrugged."


message 13691: by Hannah (new)

Hannah (lettingtheinkdry) | 4824 comments Josiah shook his head
"Nothing Salem."
Emmy looked up at the boys. Patrik was staring at her, Emmy was confused.
"What's going on?"

Declan looked up at the celing
"My turn right? Uhh...."


message 13692: by Julian (new)

Julian Moreno (emmieloowhoo) | 7315 comments Dani nodded and waited. ((*evil British accent* I KILLED YOUR FATHER! BWAHAHAHAHAHAHA! sorry, I couldn't resist.))


message 13693: by Hannah (new)

Hannah (lettingtheinkdry) | 4824 comments ((it's Irish hun))
Declan sighed
"There are things I wish I couldn't remember."


message 13694: by Ky (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments Salem frowned at him. "Liar."
Farrow looked like she was about to cry.

The windows shattered.


message 13695: by Julian (new)

Julian Moreno (emmieloowhoo) | 7315 comments ((Yes, I know, but the way I said that in my head was with a British one.))

Dani nodded. "I know what you mean."


message 13696: by Hannah (new)

Hannah (lettingtheinkdry) | 4824 comments "It doesn't matter anymore." Josiah said barely moving as the glass rained down around him.
Patrik had been confined to his spot by JOsiah's Shadows. He couldn't move or speak.

Emmy sheilded her face with her arm.
"Again?!" she yelled


message 13697: by Ky (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments Salem cursed mildly and stood up quickly, a shard of glass slicing her cheekbone. "What the hell?!" She spun to Josiah, at first ignoring the people who came in through the windows. "You knew!"


message 13698: by Hannah (new)

Hannah (lettingtheinkdry) | 4824 comments Josiah closed his eyes
"I told you! I told you and you ignored me!" he yelled blood speckling his skin.
Emmy's eyes flashed black
"You said nothing about this!"
"I said they weren't going to stop! They have to have you two! I TOLD you!" Josiah yelled his eyes flashing entirely silver

Patrik couldn't believe they were ignoring the 100 plus men that were pouring through the doors and windows.


message 13699: by Ky (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments Salem spun around, feeling sick at the feelings tugging in her chest when she looked at Josiah. She held her hands in front of her, inches apart and palms up. How do we all fit in here? Fire flared above her hands, twisting and writhing. Salem threaded her fire with wind and sent it flying at the first onslaught of people.


message 13700: by Julian (new)

Julian Moreno (emmieloowhoo) | 7315 comments Emmie wrote: "((Yes, I know, but the way I said that in my head was with a British one.))

Dani nodded. "I know what you mean.""



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