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message 13351: by Julian (new)

Julian Moreno (emmieloowhoo) | 7315 comments Ben sighed. "What happened?"


message 13352: by Elliott (new)

Elliott | 22634 comments Mod
"Why do people always assume something happened?" Abby snapped. "Can't I just dislike school and be done with it?"


message 13353: by Julian (new)

Julian Moreno (emmieloowhoo) | 7315 comments "Because most kids hate school. But they stick up with it."


message 13354: by Ky (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments Salem was sitting on the roof by the time he came out, tears trailing slowly down her cheeks.


message 13355: by Hannah (new)

Hannah (lettingtheinkdry) | 4824 comments Pineapple Jack-o'-lantern (Emmie) wrote: "Pineapple Jack-o'-lantern (Emmie) wrote: "Dani smiled and listened carefully.""

"Ok so the kitchen is in the back of the house." Declan said smiling


message 13356: by Julian (new)

Julian Moreno (emmieloowhoo) | 7315 comments Dani followed him into another room.


message 13357: by Hannah (new)

Hannah (lettingtheinkdry) | 4824 comments Josiah could feel where she was and looked up
"Salem..." he said quietly and went up after her.


message 13358: by Ky (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments "What do you want?" she asked coldly.


message 13359: by Elliott (new)

Elliott | 22634 comments Mod
Pineapple Jack-o'-lantern (Emmie) wrote: ""Because most kids hate school. But they stick up with it.""

"I don't like people," Abby said. "I think I have some sort of social disorder."


message 13360: by Hannah (new)

Hannah (lettingtheinkdry) | 4824 comments "I'm sorry." Josiah said sincerely "I didn't think. Please forgive me." he said sitting near her.


message 13361: by Julian (new)

Julian Moreno (emmieloowhoo) | 7315 comments Ben looked at her. "Look, here's the thing. People will always suck. There will always be that person who calls you a faggot, ms matter who you are. For the kids on top of the food chain, it's the kids at the bottom, and vice versa. Because in the end, we all have good and bad to us, because that's humanity for ya', so you can choose to ignore the nasty comments, not care, and see everyone as people, or let them tear you down and see them all as faggots. Your choice."


message 13362: by Ky (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments Nephilim {Hannah} wrote: ""I'm sorry." Josiah said sincerely "I didn't think. Please forgive me." he said sitting near her."

"You didn't think what?" Salem said, tapping the ceramic coffee mug that held her current security blanket.


message 13363: by Elliott (new)

Elliott | 22634 comments Mod
"Yeah, well I'm a middle school girl. A stupid, shy, insecure middle school girl. So yeah, I take stuff personally. Yeah, I'm probably just being an idiot, but I don't even care anymore," Abby said into the pillow.


message 13364: by Hannah (new)

Hannah (lettingtheinkdry) | 4824 comments Pineapple Jack-o'-lantern (Emmie) wrote: "Dani followed him into another room."

"Ok Big pine bar in the middle, small table for breakfast or whatever." Declan shrugged "It'll all be blue really light, blur grey."


message 13365: by Hannah (new)

Hannah (lettingtheinkdry) | 4824 comments [Just:] Kendall wrote: "Nephilim {Hannah} wrote: ""I'm sorry." Josiah said sincerely "I didn't think. Please forgive me." he said sitting near her."

"You didn't think what?" Salem said, tapping the ceramic coffee mug ..."


"That Emmy would take that as bad as she did. I also didn't think about you. How much this is affecting you. I am sorry, I didn't realize." JOsiah said softly


message 13366: by Julian (new)

Julian Moreno (emmieloowhoo) | 7315 comments Dani smiled. "That'd look great."

Ben sat on the edge of the bed and pulled her into a sitting position so he could hug her.


message 13367: by Elliott (new)

Elliott | 22634 comments Mod
Abby let him hug her and she held back her tears.


message 13368: by Ky (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments "Of course you didn't realize," she mumbled. "You couldn't have fortold it." But I could. Salem looked over at him through her bangs. "I forgive you." But do you forgive me?


message 13369: by Julian (new)

Julian Moreno (emmieloowhoo) | 7315 comments Me (Lavendarlol) wrote: "Abby let him hug her and she held back her tears."

Ben held her close.


message 13370: by Elliott (new)

Elliott | 22634 comments Mod
"You probably think I'm really stupid and self centered," Abby sniffed.


message 13371: by Julian (new)

Julian Moreno (emmieloowhoo) | 7315 comments "No, I don't," Ben said softly.


message 13372: by Elliott (new)

Elliott | 22634 comments Mod
"And I was such a jerk to him," Abby muttered. "It's probably my own fault no one likes me."


message 13373: by Julian (new)

Julian Moreno (emmieloowhoo) | 7315 comments "Don't say that. I'm sure he'll give you another chance. He really seemed to like you, you know?"


message 13374: by Hannah (new)

Hannah (lettingtheinkdry) | 4824 comments Declan smiled at her
"Yeah?"

Josiah nodded and looked at her
"Thank you. What's going on in that head of yours?" he asked gently

"Emmy!" Patrik said louder
"What?" Emmy whirled on him
"YOu have to Calm down. Now. YOu're effecting Salem and everything around you. She hasn't lived like this her whole life. You have, people are only equiped to deal with so much." Patrik explained to her.


message 13375: by Julian (new)

Julian Moreno (emmieloowhoo) | 7315 comments Dani smiled back. "Absolutely."


message 13376: by Elliott (new)

Elliott | 22634 comments Mod
"According to someone, it was all fake."


message 13377: by Julian (new)

Julian Moreno (emmieloowhoo) | 7315 comments Ben frowned. "What do you mean?"


message 13378: by Ky (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments "I don't know! I don't know what this feeling is! It's complicated. I'm angry and sad and everything all at once!" Salem gripped the cup tighter, knuckles white.


message 13379: by Elliott (new)

Elliott | 22634 comments Mod
Pineapple Jack-o'-lantern (Emmie) wrote: "Ben frowned. "What do you mean?""

"His friend... in the bathroom... told me he didn't really like me," Abby sputtered.


message 13380: by Hannah (new)

Hannah (lettingtheinkdry) | 4824 comments Declan laughed
"Maybe you could help. Once I finish all the restorations."

"Hey, hey hey." Josiah soothed "You'll break it that way." he placed his hands over hers "Ease up a little Salem."

Emmy shook her head
"Salem's getting all messed up and you can sense it. I know you can. I also know you're getting just as messed up as she is, maybe even more." Patrik kept talking


message 13381: by Julian (new)

Julian Moreno (emmieloowhoo) | 7315 comments Dani smiled. "I would love to."

Ben looked down at her. "How do you know she was his friend?"


message 13382: by Ky (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments "Maybe I want it to break!" she cried, loosening her grip anyway. Salem's breaths were quick and shallow.


message 13383: by Elliott (new)

Elliott | 22634 comments Mod
"She told me she was..." Abby trailed off. "I'm so gullible."


message 13384: by Julian (new)

Julian Moreno (emmieloowhoo) | 7315 comments Ben sighed and chuckled. "Just a little. But we'll find a way to fix that."


message 13385: by Elliott (new)

Elliott | 22634 comments Mod
"Okay," Abby said.


message 13386: by Hannah (new)

Hannah (lettingtheinkdry) | 4824 comments Declan smiled again

Josiah put an arm around her and pulled her nearer to him
"Oh Salem..." he breathed


message 13387: by Julian (new)

Julian Moreno (emmieloowhoo) | 7315 comments Ben half smiled at her.


message 13388: by Julian (new)

Julian Moreno (emmieloowhoo) | 7315 comments Dani smiled back.

((Gah! Josiah and Salem are kind of killing me right now...)$


message 13389: by Elliott (new)

Elliott | 22634 comments Mod
"Well, school's over, so I'm going to watch TV," Abby said, standing up.


message 13390: by Hannah (new)

Hannah (lettingtheinkdry) | 4824 comments Pineapple Jack-o'-lantern (Emmie) wrote: "Dani smiled back.

((Gah! Josiah and Salem are kind of killing me right now...)$"


((I KNOW!! ME TOO!!))

Declan took her upstairs
"I have to show you the room for my studio."


message 13391: by Julian (new)

Julian Moreno (emmieloowhoo) | 7315 comments Ben let her go.


message 13392: by Ky (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments Tears streamed steadily down her face, leaving trails on her flushed cheeks. Salem leaned into Josiah, struggling to get her breathing under control.


message 13393: by Elliott (new)

Elliott | 22634 comments Mod
Abby zoned out in front of the TV.


message 13394: by Julian (new)

Julian Moreno (emmieloowhoo) | 7315 comments Nephilim {Hannah} wrote: "Pineapple Jack-o'-lantern (Emmie) wrote: "Dani smiled back.

((Gah! Josiah and Salem are kind of killing me right now...)$"

((I KNOW!! ME TOO!!))

Declan took her upstairs
"I have to show y..."


((Eeep!!!))

Dani followed eagerly.


message 13395: by Julian (new)

Julian Moreno (emmieloowhoo) | 7315 comments Ben went to find his book.


message 13396: by Ky (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments Pineapple Jack-o'-lantern (Emmie) wrote: "Dani smiled back.

((Gah! Josiah and Salem are kind of killing me right now...)$"


((is that a good thing or a bad thing?))


message 13397: by Elliott (new)

Elliott | 22634 comments Mod
Abby couldn't find anything good on TV so she started watching Hannah Montana.


message 13398: by Hannah (new)

Hannah (lettingtheinkdry) | 4824 comments Josiah rested his head on hers and rubbed her arm with his.
"It'll be ok, I promise." he said so quietly it was like he was talking to himself.


Emmy put her hands on Patrik's shoulders
"Stop. Patrik I get it, just stop."
"You and Salem have to leave."
"What?!" Emmy said looking up at him
"If what JOsiah says is true, you and Salem Have to leave. I can take care of this here. I don't want to loose you again."


message 13399: by Julian (new)

Julian Moreno (emmieloowhoo) | 7315 comments [Just:] Kendall wrote: "Pineapple Jack-o'-lantern (Emmie) wrote: "Dani smiled back.

((Gah! Josiah and Salem are kind of killing me right now...)$"

((is that a good thing or a bad thing?))"


((Good.))


message 13400: by Julian (new)

Julian Moreno (emmieloowhoo) | 7315 comments Me (Lavendarlol) wrote: "Abby couldn't find anything good on TV so she started watching Hannah Montana."

Ben sat down to read The Stranger. ((Eep. *giggle*))


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