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message 12151: by Julian (new)

Julian Moreno (emmieloowhoo) | 7315 comments Ben nodded, "Yeah, probably. Let's roll."


message 12152: by Elliott (new)

Elliott | 22634 comments Mod
Abby finished the last bites of her omelet and put the plate by the sink and slipped on her beat up green converse that she had found at a consignment store and bought with her birthday money.


message 12153: by Julian (new)

Julian Moreno (emmieloowhoo) | 7315 comments Ben looked at her. "Nice shoes."


message 12154: by Elliott (new)

Elliott | 22634 comments Mod
"Thanks," Abby said. "I got them for my birthday. Kind of."


message 12155: by Julian (new)

Julian Moreno (emmieloowhoo) | 7315 comments Ben nodded. "Cool. Hey, also, if you want we can go buy yousome more clothes."


message 12156: by Elliott (new)

Elliott | 22634 comments Mod
"That might be good," Abby said. "Seeing as I only packed three shirts and two pairs of jeans."


message 12157: by Julian (new)

Julian Moreno (emmieloowhoo) | 7315 comments Ben looked at her. "Yeah. We can go shopping later."


message 12158: by Elliott (new)

Elliott | 22634 comments Mod
"Awesome," Abby said, smiling at her brother.


message 12159: by Julian (new)

Julian Moreno (emmieloowhoo) | 7315 comments Ben smiled back and open the door for her.

((I need your help.))


message 12160: by Elliott (new)

Elliott | 22634 comments Mod
((With? DUDE it's 11:11! I made a wish! Well actually two wishes.))


message 12161: by Elliott (new)

Elliott | 22634 comments Mod
Abby stepped out of the apartment and ran outside, overjoyed when she felt faint raindrops on her bare arms.


message 12162: by Julian (new)

Julian Moreno (emmieloowhoo) | 7315 comments Ben laughed.

((Aww lucky. Here it's plain old 10:15))


message 12163: by Elliott (new)

Elliott | 22634 comments Mod
"I love rain!" Abby said as they walked along the sidewalk.


message 12164: by Julian (new)

Julian Moreno (emmieloowhoo) | 7315 comments Ben grinned at her. "I know. I remember when you were little you would go outside when it was raining, even if you were on your way to getting pneumonia."


message 12165: by Elliott (new)

Elliott | 22634 comments Mod
"I only got pneumonia once!" Abby protested. "And it had nothing to do with rain!"


message 12166: by Julian (new)

Julian Moreno (emmieloowhoo) | 7315 comments Ben laughed. "It did too."


message 12167: by Elliott (new)

Elliott | 22634 comments Mod
"How so? We learned in school that getting colds has nothing to do with being cold so pneumonia has nothing to do with rain!"


message 12168: by Julian (new)

Julian Moreno (emmieloowhoo) | 7315 comments Ben rolled his eyes. "Whatever you say."


message 12169: by Elliott (new)

Elliott | 22634 comments Mod
"You know I'm right."


message 12170: by Julian (new)

Julian Moreno (emmieloowhoo) | 7315 comments Ben chuckled.

((Wanna read it? And GUESS WHAT?!?))


message 12171: by Elliott (new)

Elliott | 22634 comments Mod
((I do! And WHAT???))

"This is the school?" Abby said as they approached a rather large building with tons of kids walking around in the courtyard outside.


message 12172: by Julian (new)

Julian Moreno (emmieloowhoo) | 7315 comments "Yep." Ben glanced at her.

(( http://www.goodreads.com/story/show/2... ))

((I'M GOING ON A ROAD TRIP!))


message 12173: by Elliott (new)

Elliott | 22634 comments Mod
((Lucky you! Where to?))
"It's really... big."


message 12174: by Julian (new)

Julian Moreno (emmieloowhoo) | 7315 comments ((I don't know. Down I-70 and as far as our money can take us.))

((How am I messing with you?))

"Yep."


message 12175: by Elliott (new)

Elliott | 22634 comments Mod
"With lots of kids."

((Let's move this convo to your old topic or mine.))


message 12176: by Julian (new)

Julian Moreno (emmieloowhoo) | 7315 comments "And more of a variety of kids. It'll be...better. I promise."

((Okay.))


message 12177: by Elliott (new)

Elliott | 22634 comments Mod
"I hope so," Abby said, doubtfully. "But I'm not that good at making friends in new places. Talking to new people scares me."


message 12178: by Julian (new)

Julian Moreno (emmieloowhoo) | 7315 comments Ben looked at her. "Then you just gotta open up an throw yourself out there. Maybe they'll hurt you, but you comfort yourself by knowing you're not drowning like the rest of them."


message 12179: by Elliott (new)

Elliott | 22634 comments Mod
"That's a whole lot easier said than done," Abby said, looking out at all the kids, laughing and joking.


message 12180: by Julian (new)

Julian Moreno (emmieloowhoo) | 7315 comments "You can do it," he said and set his hand on her shoulder.


message 12181: by Elliott (new)

Elliott | 22634 comments Mod
"Maybe I can pretend I have a speech disorder," Abby muttered mostly to herself.


message 12182: by Julian (new)

Julian Moreno (emmieloowhoo) | 7315 comments Ben looked at her. "No, make friends."


message 12183: by Elliott (new)

Elliott | 22634 comments Mod
"I will try to make friends," Abby said, half meaning it.


message 12184: by Julian (new)

Julian Moreno (emmieloowhoo) | 7315 comments "You better," he said and opened the door.


message 12185: by Elliott (new)

Elliott | 22634 comments Mod
Abby followed him through the door into the crowded hallway. Too many people. Too many people. Too many people.


message 12186: by Julian (new)

Julian Moreno (emmieloowhoo) | 7315 comments Ben looked at her. "You'll be fine."


message 12187: by Elliott (new)

Elliott | 22634 comments Mod
"I always am," Abby said with a grim smile. "So where do we go to get me signed up?"


message 12188: by Julian (new)

Julian Moreno (emmieloowhoo) | 7315 comments Ben nodded towards the office. "Office."


message 12189: by Elliott (new)

Elliott | 22634 comments Mod
Abby looked at the little room with a secretary sitting in it and one other kid, a boy about her age. To her it looked like heaven compared to this hallway full of kids. She opened the door and went in.


message 12190: by Julian (new)

Julian Moreno (emmieloowhoo) | 7315 comments Ben followed.

((Haha I should make a character for the kid))


message 12191: by Elliott (new)

Elliott | 22634 comments Mod
((you should. nod, nod.))
The secretary looked down at Abby and smiled encouragingly. "What do you need?"
"I'm new here," she said quietly, looking down at her feet. "I need to get, um, en-enrolled."


message 12192: by Julian (new)

Julian Moreno (emmieloowhoo) | 7315 comments Ben smiled at the secretary. "We're here to get her enrolled."

Matt was sitting in the front office.


message 12193: by Elliott (new)

Elliott | 22634 comments Mod
Abby glanced over at the boy sitting in a chair. She almost waved, but couldn't bring herself to do it.


message 12194: by Julian (new)

Julian Moreno (emmieloowhoo) | 7315 comments Matt looked up and saw a girl. She looked scared to death, so he half-smiled at her without thinking about t.


message 12195: by Elliott (new)

Elliott | 22634 comments Mod
She couldn't tell if the boy had smiled at her or was thinking about something, but she lifted a hand in what could've been a wave, or just an absent arm movement so she wouldn't feel stupid if he wasn't smiling at her.


message 12196: by Julian (last edited Jul 16, 2010 12:28PM) (new)

Julian Moreno (emmieloowhoo) | 7315 comments Matt's smile widened.

Ben was still talkingto the secretary.

"So would you like to start school today or on Monday?" she asked Abby.


message 12197: by Elliott (new)

Elliott | 22634 comments Mod
Abby shrugged. "I don't care," she mumbled.


message 12198: by Julian (new)

Julian Moreno (emmieloowhoo) | 7315 comments Ben looked at her. "Do you want to just start today and get it over with?"


message 12199: by Elliott (new)

Elliott | 22634 comments Mod
"I don't care," Abby repeated. "Sure."


message 12200: by Julian (new)

Julian Moreno (emmieloowhoo) | 7315 comments The secretary got all her papers in order and got her class schedule. "Okay, here you go, and--Oh!" she looked at Matt. "Matt come here."

Matt looked at her, sighed, and stood up and walked over.

She beamed at Abby and continued, "Matt here will show you around."


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