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message 12101: by Julian (new)

Julian Moreno (emmieloowhoo) | 7315 comments Ben nodded. "Yeah, but then she was gone again, and I had no idea what had just happened. Anyway, I was just sitting there, kinda...Dazed? She came back a few minutes, and she asked if she could sit. She looked so hesitant." he smiled faintly.


message 12102: by Elliott (new)

Elliott | 22634 comments Mod
"This ends badly doesn't it?" Abby frowned.


message 12103: by Julian (new)

Julian Moreno (emmieloowhoo) | 7315 comments Ben nodded. "Her name was Cristina," he said and sighed, "She was gorgeous. Auburn hair and the biggest green eyes I've ever seen. Frankly she was a geek," he smiled faintly. "Do you remember how I used to loathe reading?"


message 12104: by Elliott (new)

Elliott | 22634 comments Mod
"I'd completely forgotten about that!" Abby said, looking down at the book next to Ben. "You're reading a book! Holy cow!"


message 12105: by Julian (new)

Julian Moreno (emmieloowhoo) | 7315 comments Ben smiled. "Yeah. She kind of managed to get rid of my bad habit. She was always reading. Anything and everything," he said. "Anyway, when the train got to Denver, we got out, and she looked so scared. I asked her where she was going and she said she had no idea. That she'd ran away."


message 12106: by Elliott (new)

Elliott | 22634 comments Mod
"Just like you."


message 12107: by Elliott (new)

Elliott | 22634 comments Mod
((gtg))


message 12108: by Julian (new)

Julian Moreno (emmieloowhoo) | 7315 comments Ben nodded. "By now I knew that I was going to California, so I asked of she wanted to tag along. She said yes, and anyway, it took us a few months to get there, and along the way, I fell in love with her. And for some wonderful reason, she loved me back. It was tough. It was always tough but at least we had each other's backs, you know?"


message 12109: by Elliott (new)

Elliott | 22634 comments Mod
((Kind of. I don't have to go but it might be a while between posts.))


message 12110: by Elliott (new)

Elliott | 22634 comments Mod
Abby nodded, even though she really didn't. She'd never fallen in love with someone who loved her back.


message 12111: by Julian (new)

Julian Moreno (emmieloowhoo) | 7315 comments ((Awww okay.))

Ben shook his head. "Then, last year..." he took a shaky breath before continuing, "I have no idea what we were doing in that alley so late. all I remember is that this idiot was drunk and he mistook her for someone else," he said as his voice cracked.


message 12112: by Elliott (new)

Elliott | 22634 comments Mod
Abby looked down at her hands. "I'm sorry."


message 12113: by Julian (new)

Julian Moreno (emmieloowhoo) | 7315 comments Ben shook his head, and blinked, trying to stop the burning inhospitable eyes. "He shot her. And there--there was nothing I could do," he whispered.


message 12114: by Elliott (new)

Elliott | 22634 comments Mod
A tear slipped out of Abby's own eye. She leaned over and gave Ben a hug.


message 12115: by Julian (new)

Julian Moreno (emmieloowhoo) | 7315 comments Ben hugged her back and buried his face in her hair. He took a shuddering breath.


message 12116: by Elliott (new)

Elliott | 22634 comments Mod
Abby rubbed his back softly, not used to this broken, hurting Ben.


message 12117: by Julian (new)

Julian Moreno (emmieloowhoo) | 7315 comments Ben looked at her. "I-I'm okay, though. I am."


message 12118: by Elliott (new)

Elliott | 22634 comments Mod
"You're allowed to be sad," Abby said quietly. "That's what Brooke used to tell me. And it's the truth."


message 12119: by Julian (new)

Julian Moreno (emmieloowhoo) | 7315 comments Ben looked at her. "Who's Brooke?"


message 12120: by Elliott (new)

Elliott | 22634 comments Mod
"A girl at my school," Abby said. "She used to be my friend."


message 12121: by Julian (new)

Julian Moreno (emmieloowhoo) | 7315 comments Ben frowned. "Used to? Why used to?"


message 12122: by Elliott (new)

Elliott | 22634 comments Mod
"She wanted to be cool," Abby looked away.


message 12123: by Julian (new)

Julian Moreno (emmieloowhoo) | 7315 comments Ben rolled his eyes. "WelL, she's an idiot."


message 12124: by Elliott (new)

Elliott | 22634 comments Mod
"Just like everyone else I know besides you," Abby smiled, her eyes getting more watery. "I'm glad I found you."
((gtg for real))


message 12125: by Julian (new)

Julian Moreno (emmieloowhoo) | 7315 comments ((Awww bye.))

Ben grinned. "Right back at ya. Love you, Kiddo."


message 12126: by Elliott (new)

Elliott | 22634 comments Mod
"I love you too," Abby said with a yawn and fell back asleep, so exhausted she didn't dream.


message 12127: by Julian (new)

Julian Moreno (emmieloowhoo) | 7315 comments Ben watched her sleep before falling asleep himself.


message 12128: by Elliott (new)

Elliott | 22634 comments Mod
Abby woke up as sun streamed into the room. She groaned, and promptly rolled off the bed. "Ow," she moaned, still half asleep.


message 12129: by Julian (new)

Julian Moreno (emmieloowhoo) | 7315 comments Ben was woken up by a thud, and an "Ow!" He stretched and looked over the side of the bed to see Abby. "Good morning."


message 12130: by Elliott (new)

Elliott | 22634 comments Mod
"I just fell off my bed," Abby said, rolling over onto her back.


message 12131: by Julian (new)

Julian Moreno (emmieloowhoo) | 7315 comments Ben grinned teasingly at her. "I noticed. Though technically, it's my bed."


message 12132: by Elliott (new)

Elliott | 22634 comments Mod
"Touche," Abby said standing up. "I guess I'd better get ready to go get enrolled in school?" Abby said as a question. She wasn't sure if she needed to go with him or not.


message 12133: by Julian (new)

Julian Moreno (emmieloowhoo) | 7315 comments Ben shrugged. "You can come if you want."


message 12134: by Elliott (new)

Elliott | 22634 comments Mod
"I think I'll come," Abby said. "Staying here is boring." Her face stayed solemn but her eyes were fighting back a twinkle.


message 12135: by Julian (new)

Julian Moreno (emmieloowhoo) | 7315 comments Ben shook his head and ruffled her hair. "Alright, you get ready and I'll make breakfast. Yes, real breakfast."


message 12136: by Elliott (new)

Elliott | 22634 comments Mod
"Sounds great," Abby said. "Um, where's your shower?"


message 12137: by Julian (new)

Julian Moreno (emmieloowhoo) | 7315 comments Ben showed her.


message 12138: by Elliott (new)

Elliott | 22634 comments Mod
Abby grabbed some clothes and hopped in the shower and let the ice cold water rush over her. Whenever she took showers she made sure they were ice cold, to wake her up, and heighten her senses. Less chance her mind would wander in freezing cold water.


message 12139: by Julian (new)

Julian Moreno (emmieloowhoo) | 7315 comments Ben made omelets. And they were edible. And good.


message 12140: by Elliott (new)

Elliott | 22634 comments Mod
Abby stepped out of the shower and pulled on her favorite green and black checkered shirt from Wet Seal. Well, technically, it was from Goodwill, but it was one of her better finds. She toweled off her hair and brushed it out so it would dry somewhat smooth. She walked out to wear Ben had made breakfast. "That smells good," she said.


message 12141: by Julian (new)

Julian Moreno (emmieloowhoo) | 7315 comments He grinned at her. "Why thank you."


message 12142: by Elliott (new)

Elliott | 22634 comments Mod
Abby grabbed a plate and put an omelet on it and started to eat it. "Mmmmm," she said, surprised. "When did you learn to cook?"


message 12143: by Julian (new)

Julian Moreno (emmieloowhoo) | 7315 comments "Food Network."


message 12144: by Elliott (new)

Elliott | 22634 comments Mod
"Ahahahaha!" Abby laughed into her omlette.


message 12145: by Julian (new)

Julian Moreno (emmieloowhoo) | 7315 comments Ben chuckled at her reaction.


message 12146: by Elliott (new)

Elliott | 22634 comments Mod
"You've changed a lot," Abby said after she swallowed. "But somehow you're still the same old Ben."


message 12147: by Julian (new)

Julian Moreno (emmieloowhoo) | 7315 comments Ben shrugged. "I'm not the only one who's changed."


message 12148: by Elliott (new)

Elliott | 22634 comments Mod
"Me?" Abby said. "I haven't changed at all. Besides getting a little bigger and a little smarter."


message 12149: by Julian (new)

Julian Moreno (emmieloowhoo) | 7315 comments Ben smiled faintly. "You've changed, Abby. Whether you notice it or not."


message 12150: by Elliott (new)

Elliott | 22634 comments Mod
Abby shrugged and looked at her omelet. "We should probably get going."


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