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Elizabeth (fantasynerd365) "A few hours." He answered, then glanced at the clock again. "How are you feeling?"


onceuponatimeareview | 8405 comments "I'm feeling fine." She smiled again. "Is everything ok? You seem worried about something." She couldn't help smiling. Why was that?


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Elizabeth (fantasynerd365) "I'm alright." He said, "Just worried about you." In more ways than one.... He added silently to himself. He took a breath. "Remember what I said earlier? Right before you were about to go?"


onceuponatimeareview | 8405 comments She tried remembering earlier. She thought hard and long. "No I don't. Besides that why would I want to go?" Still smiling. That's all she was doing around him was smiling.


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Elizabeth (fantasynerd365) "Tess.....I'm a werewolf." He told her again, holding his breath for her reaction. She;d tried to leave before. Would that happen again?


onceuponatimeareview | 8405 comments "Yeah that's what that crazy person said. Your not lying are you?" She said smiling. "I'm sorry for smiling I just can't stop."


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Elizabeth (fantasynerd365) "I'm telling the truth." He replied then frowned a bit. "You mean you literally cant stop smiling?"


onceuponatimeareview | 8405 comments "No for some reason I can't stopped around you." She paused. "So if your werewolf you will have to leave tonight. Do you have to go?"


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Elizabeth (fantasynerd365) She was taking well. Better than he'd have thought considering how she felt about wolves. "I do. But I'll be back soon. Promise."


onceuponatimeareview | 8405 comments "Please don't go." She whispered. "I don't want you to go."


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Elizabeth (fantasynerd365) "I can't stay here though." He told her. "I'm going to have to shift soon. I need to be in the woods or something when I do."


onceuponatimeareview | 8405 comments "I know. Please don't go." She felt something different. "Why don't I want you to leave?"


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Elizabeth (fantasynerd365) He was frowning again. What the hunter had said.....about them becoming mates? Was this part of it?


onceuponatimeareview | 8405 comments "What's wrong." She sighed. "Ok your promise you will be back."


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Elizabeth (fantasynerd365) ((gtg to work soon))


"I promise." He told her, giving her a quick kiss before heading to the door. "A few hours. I'll be back."


onceuponatimeareview | 8405 comments ((Kk))

She smiled. She sat there. She had a sharp pain go through her body. She let a light scream. What was happening?


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Elizabeth (fantasynerd365) ((I really don't know what to do. And sorry but I keep getting a bit bored in this one too. there's not really any action at all and I don't know what to do a lot :/))


onceuponatimeareview | 8405 comments ((I have this perfect idea that has tons of action. So it's prom night and she begs him to change her. He says no. She runs out. She finds another werewolf to change her. She then goes crazy. Then she has her first change. She goes haywire. He tries stopping her, the hunter comes with a bunch of hunters and they start a war. ))


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Elizabeth (fantasynerd365) ((We can try it. Start at prom night?))


onceuponatimeareview | 8405 comments ((Yeah))

"Please." She asks him again. "Please can you please turn me." She batted her eyes at him.


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Elizabeth (fantasynerd365) "No." He said again. like he;d been telling her. "I'm not going to do that to you. Being a werewolf isn't always that great. I'd give anything to be human again. I'm not going to do this to you."


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onceuponatimeareview | 8405 comments She knew there was no since in arguing with him. "That's the only way we can be together though." She smiled. "I understand." She looked at the time. "I have to go." She walked out of the building. Didn't he want her? She saw a strange looking man following her. The man came closer he grabbed her. "Zach." She screamed. The man knocked her out. It wasn't a hunter. It was a werewolf.


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Elizabeth (fantasynerd365) ((Gah! Comment didn't save :/ Sorry about that. Ghosting right now. Writing an essay))


He sighed when she walked out. He felt bad for letting her down like that but....it just wasn't something he was willing to do to her. when he heard her scream though his head snapped up and he let out a bit of a growl, he stayed in his human form for the moment but raced in the direction of her voice. "Tessa!" He yelled.


onceuponatimeareview | 8405 comments ((That's fine))

The werewolf was stupid. Leaving all her scent and his behind in a trail. "So little one you want to be a wolf." She opened her eyes. She nodded her head. "I want to be wolf but I don't want you turn me I want Zach." He laughed. "You don't get much of a choice." He leaned forward and bit her. She screamed in pain. She started to shake the poison started to flow through her.


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Elizabeth (fantasynerd365) ((Is this wolf in his pack or no?))


onceuponatimeareview | 8405 comments ((It's alone))


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Elizabeth (fantasynerd365) When he caught the scent of the wolf he let out a growl, shifting into his own wolf form and running off in the direction that they went. If he had hurt her.....That wolf was going to pay...


onceuponatimeareview | 8405 comments He sat her down. She started scream in agony. "You will pay. Zach is coming he will save me." She said strongly. He started to laugh. "He won't be able to save you." She winced at the pain.


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Elizabeth (fantasynerd365) He got to where they were only a minute are so later, snarling when he saw the other werewolf and leaping towards him without another word.


onceuponatimeareview | 8405 comments Werewolf didn't have time to shift. He struggle. "It's too late for her you know. So kill me." He snarled. She was in so much pain. "Help Zach."


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Elizabeth (fantasynerd365) He was furious right now, knowing what the other werewolf had done to her. He quickly killed him before shifting back into his human form and running to her side. "I'm here...."He told her.


onceuponatimeareview | 8405 comments "It hurts." She muttered. "I didn't want this. I wanted you to do it." She said. She screamed in pain. The poison finally spread through her body. She felt a lot better. "Why doesn't it hurt anymore?"


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Elizabeth (fantasynerd365) He sighed, he hadn't wanted this for her.... "It was hurting because your body was trying to reject the change....Now it's accepted it. The next full moon....." He trailed off, shaking his head. "You'll change. The first few times can be painful. can be hard for a wolf to stay in control, but I'll be there to help you."


onceuponatimeareview | 8405 comments "Did you change me? Because I only wanted you to change me." She was nervous. She remember the pain he goes through. She could feel it when he changed. Now his pain will be her own new pain. "Isn't there away to stop it?" She asked.


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Elizabeth (fantasynerd365) "Not that I know of." He told her. "And no....I wasn't the one that changed you." He closed his eyes. "It does get easier though. After awhile you barely feel a thing when you shift anymore. At first it does hurt. I'll be there with you for that though. And I'll help make sure you don't lose control the first time." Like I did..... He added silently to himself.


onceuponatimeareview | 8405 comments She nodded her head slightly. "Anything else I should know?" She asked knowing about the common things like easily anger strength and that. She wanted this but not this way. "My dress is covered in blood." She said angrily.


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Elizabeth (fantasynerd365) ((Wait what?))


onceuponatimeareview | 8405 comments ((When the wolf bit her she was wearing her prom dressed and now it's cover in blood and she's mad at the wolf for getting her expensive dressed covered with blood))


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Elizabeth (fantasynerd365) He shook his head, nothing he could think of at the moment. Everything about being a werewolf came with time. "Looks like we might have to miss prom tonight...I'm sorry. this is my fault..."


onceuponatimeareview | 8405 comments She was angry.Her eyes started to glow a bright blue. "My dress is ruined" she was mad over nothing.


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Elizabeth (fantasynerd365) "Just calm down Tess." He said, trying to calm her down.


onceuponatimeareview | 8405 comments "But that cost me alot of money. Money i didnt have to spend." She looked at him."Im clam/"


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Elizabeth (fantasynerd365) "You aren't calm." He replied, surprisingly calm himself. "And I'm more worried about you than the dress right now. Worried what's going to happen to you."


onceuponatimeareview | 8405 comments "What's is that suppose or mean." She was very confused about the past few events. Her eyes returned to normal. "I'm sorry for snapping at you. That's not me." She whispered.


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Elizabeth (fantasynerd365) "It's fine." He assured her, still worried, not sure how she'd adjust to being a wolf. He never would have wanted this for her....


onceuponatimeareview | 8405 comments She looked at him nodding.

((Do you like want to skip to the the first full moon?))


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Elizabeth (fantasynerd365) ((Sure. Can you start?))


onceuponatimeareview | 8405 comments ((Yeah))

That week things have been hard for her. She keeps getting angry at things. She almost beat up a cheerleader. She couldn't keep control. She knew tonight was the full moon. She knew she would be protected by Zach.


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Elizabeth (fantasynerd365) He'd been staying with her as much as he could, trying to calm her down whenever she'd get mad. The anger would lessen with time as well. His barely effected him anymore unless people he cared about were in danger. The full moon.....While there was always a possibility that a bitten person wouldn't change from all the signs she was going to. He hated that. Hated that he hadn't been able to protect her.


onceuponatimeareview | 8405 comments It was time to school. She didn't want to go. She didn't get much sleep at nights anymore. Her little brother knocked on her door. "What." She growled. Zach must of gone before anyone could see him. She smelt eggs and no meat. She was upset. She got up and headed out the door. She saw the cheerleaders come up behind her. Throwing stuff at her. Her eyes turned the wolf blue. She looked down trying to stay in control.


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