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onceuponatimeareview | 8405 comments Her head started to spin. She collapsed on the ground. "Zach please take somewhere,but not the hospital." She frowned and closed her eyes.


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Elizabeth (fantasynerd365) He was still frowning as he picked her up, deciding to take her to his place. Maybe he could do something for her....and if that hunter showed up again....he wouldn't let him get away this time.


onceuponatimeareview | 8405 comments "Please don't leave Zach." She muttered.


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Elizabeth (fantasynerd365) "I'm here." He kept whispering, over and over as he brought her to his house, laying her on the ground for a split second as he unlocked the door, before picking her up again and bringing her inside.


onceuponatimeareview | 8405 comments "Please don't take me to the doctors." She was begging.


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Elizabeth (fantasynerd365) "I'm not." He promised. "I'm going to lay you on the couch. Get the first aid kit."


onceuponatimeareview | 8405 comments "My head hurts." She muttered.


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Elizabeth (fantasynerd365) "Hey it'll be alright." He said as he came back, firstaid kit in one hand a glass of water in the other. "Here. take some aspirin,"


onceuponatimeareview | 8405 comments "Thank you." She smiled.


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Elizabeth (fantasynerd365) He nodded, sitting down on the table. "What can I do?"


onceuponatimeareview | 8405 comments "I don't know."


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Elizabeth (fantasynerd365) ((not sure what to do here))


onceuponatimeareview | 8405 comments ((Maybe he asks her about what she remembers about the attack?))


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Elizabeth (fantasynerd365) He bit his lip as he pulled things out of the first aid kit. "So....what do you remember rom when that guy showed up?" Did she remember him shifting? He didn't think so. She wouldn't be this calm if she had. Right?


onceuponatimeareview | 8405 comments "I remember the guy showing up. Then he supposedly called you a wolf. That guy must of been pretty crazy." She said as she shook her head.


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Elizabeth (fantasynerd365) HE swallowed a nit nervously, debating with himself over whether to tell her. "Anything else?"


onceuponatimeareview | 8405 comments "No not really. Crazy person."


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Elizabeth (fantasynerd365) "Tess...." He hesitated for a moment before letting out a breath and looking her in the eye. "He wasn't completely crazy...somewhat yeah. But not completely..."


onceuponatimeareview | 8405 comments "What do you mean?"


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Elizabeth (fantasynerd365) "He was crazy. Attacking you how he keeps doing but....
once more he hesitated. "The wolf part.....I'm a werewolf......" there. He'd said it. Now he held his breath, waiting for her reaction.


onceuponatimeareview | 8405 comments She looked at him. He wasn't lying. She got up. "I'm sorry for convince,but i should get home." She got up. She barley made to the door and collapsed.


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Elizabeth (fantasynerd365) He made no move to follow at first, not blaming her for wanting to leave. when she collapsed however he was quickly on his feet, rushing to her side. "Tess!"


onceuponatimeareview | 8405 comments She felt sick. "How come I can't leave?" She blacked out again.


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Elizabeth (fantasynerd365) "I don't know." He said, shaking his head. there shouldn't be anything there..... "I'll get you home." He promised, even if she was already out. He gently picked her up, he was going to get her home safely then go after that hunter.


onceuponatimeareview | 8405 comments "Don't go." She muttered. She didn't know what was happening. She hurt so badly.


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Elizabeth (fantasynerd365) "I'm going to get you home okay." He said. "Everything's going to be okay."


onceuponatimeareview | 8405 comments "Don't go." She faded out again.


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Elizabeth (fantasynerd365) ((Really not sure what to do again. ))


onceuponatimeareview | 8405 comments ((They run into the hunter. And the reason she can't leave him is because she is slowly becoming his mate.))


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Elizabeth (fantasynerd365) ((Alright. Can you start? And gtg soon))


onceuponatimeareview | 8405 comments ((Sure))

She snuggled closer to Zach. She felt protected. She heard a familiar voice. "Hello wolf boy." Chuckled the hunter.


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Elizabeth (fantasynerd365) He spun around when he heard the voice, unable to stop himself from letting out a growl, his eyes narrowed as he faced the hunter. "Look. Can't you just leave her alone. If you want me alright,. But leave her out of this. She;s human. She didn't do anything to you."


onceuponatimeareview | 8405 comments "I know she is just a human,but don't you see the signs. The signs of her becoming your mate. Not being able to leave your side. Not wanting to you to go. You and I both know you can't be mates unless you turn her. " he said with a laugh. Tess heard a voice. She pressed closer to Zach.


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Elizabeth (fantasynerd365) He hadn't thought of that. He hadn't grown up in a pack like most werewolves did. Had only joined one a little over a year ago and no one had ever mentioned signs like this....was that really what was going on? "That doesn't change the fact that she didn't do anything to you. And I'm not going to turn her. He layed her gently down on the ground, not taking his eyes off the hunter. "So fight me and leave her alone. you and me. That's it. Let's just finish this...."


onceuponatimeareview | 8405 comments "Fight as much as I would say sure it would take the fun of watching her follow you around like puppy dog. " He laughed. "This game got interesting. Be careful tonight is the full moon. She will feel some pain as you shift." He laughed again. He was gone.


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Elizabeth (fantasynerd365) ((Quick question. How does he keep just disappearing?))


onceuponatimeareview | 8405 comments ((I think he just leaves))


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Elizabeth (fantasynerd365) ((You make it sound more like he disappears. And if he was just leaving Zach would chase him, attack him from behind or something.))


onceuponatimeareview | 8405 comments ((I probably do. True that.))


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Elizabeth (fantasynerd365) ((So is he maybe not human himself? Something else?))


onceuponatimeareview | 8405 comments ((I got it maybe he is a vampire))


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Elizabeth (fantasynerd365) ((hmm...maybe? Or maybe a warlock or something? Him disappearing is a spell or something?))


onceuponatimeareview | 8405 comments ((Warlock most likely))


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Elizabeth (fantasynerd365) ((Alright, Want to skip to later that night?))


onceuponatimeareview | 8405 comments ((Sure))


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Elizabeth (fantasynerd365) ((Can you start?))


onceuponatimeareview | 8405 comments ((Yeah))

Tess woke up in the arms of Zach. "Hello." She whispered."What time is it?" She gave him a smile.


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Elizabeth (fantasynerd365) "It's about 6." He answered. The sun would be setting soon....he'd have to go. while a werewolf could shift whenever they wanted the full moon was the one time they pretty much had to. Only the oldest and strongest werewolves could stay human during that time.


onceuponatimeareview | 8405 comments "Ok. How long was I out?" She blinked at him.


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