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onceuponatimeareview | 8405 comments "Umm I don't really have a tv." She looked down at her books. She heard the other kids laughing.


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Elizabeth (fantasynerd365) Again Zach shot icy glares in their direction, quieting them down. "It's alright. We can pick one when we get there."


onceuponatimeareview | 8405 comments "Ok. You know you don't have to be nice to me." She gave him a serious look."I hope you aren't doing this because you feel bad for me.


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Elizabeth (fantasynerd365) He shook his head, giving a small smile. "Not at all."


((Skip to Friday or something? Not sure what to do here))


onceuponatimeareview | 8405 comments ((Yeah))

It was Friday evening. She got ready. In a nice pair of jeans and a shirt. She walked outside and started to walk to the movie theater. She didn't want him picking her up. She didn't want anyone making fun of her worst than they already have.


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Elizabeth (fantasynerd365) Zach was waiting outside the theater. He would have picked her up if she had wanted, but just meeting her here was fine too.


onceuponatimeareview | 8405 comments "Hi."She let a smile come on her face.She didn't like going out. Well she needed to get a life.


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Elizabeth (fantasynerd365) "Hey." He said with a bit of a smile, then nodded to the movie posters. "Any of those catching your eye?"


onceuponatimeareview | 8405 comments "Yeah um that one I think it might one those Paranormal Activity movies."She smiled. She liked scary movies. Most of the time they had no effect on her,but these one scared her.


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Elizabeth (fantasynerd365) "Sounds good to me. Those movies are awesome." He replied, going to pay for their tickets.


onceuponatimeareview | 8405 comments She smiled. No one was ever nice to her. She grabbed his hand. "Thank you."


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Elizabeth (fantasynerd365) "No problem." He said, giving a tiny smile as they went in. "Want any popcorn? A soda or something?"


onceuponatimeareview | 8405 comments "Sure ah and popcorn with a coke please." She smiled at him. She never been on a date before.


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Elizabeth (fantasynerd365) He got them an extra large tub of popcorn and two large drinks. Coke for her and a Sprite for himself.


onceuponatimeareview | 8405 comments "Thank you for being kind to me. " She said as she walked with him.


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Elizabeth (fantasynerd365) "Don't mention it." He said. "I don't see why more people aren't."


onceuponatimeareview | 8405 comments "Neither do I." She looked down at the floor.


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Elizabeth (fantasynerd365) ((Not sure what to do...want to skip to when they've maybe been going out a bit?))


onceuponatimeareview | 8405 comments ((Sure))


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Elizabeth (fantasynerd365) ((So what should be happening?))


onceuponatimeareview | 8405 comments ((They are on a date and the hunter comes back.))


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Elizabeth (fantasynerd365) ((sure. You start?))


onceuponatimeareview | 8405 comments ((Sure))

They walked into the park. She never thought she would have someone like him. Then this person came up. It was the person who kidnapped her. She held his hand tightly."Hello little one." He smirked.


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Elizabeth (fantasynerd365) Zach tensed a bit, reisting the urge to let out a growl. He still hadn't told her the truth about what he was.... "What do you want...." He demanded, eyes narrowed.


onceuponatimeareview | 8405 comments "You know what I want. You dead."
"Why would you want him dead? Why does he want you dead?"
"You haven't told her yet." He laughed
"What haven't you told me." She looked up at him concerned.


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Elizabeth (fantasynerd365) Zach glanced at her for a spilt second, guilt creeping over his face for a moment before it was gone, almost too quickly to have been seen. "I'll explain everything when we get out of here....okay?"


onceuponatimeareview | 8405 comments "Ok."
"Why not tell her now? See how long you have a girlfriend?" He let a snicker. "We could play a game." She gulped. "It's called how long until the girlfriend freaks out and runs away." He reached over and grabbed Tessa.
"Let go of me."


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Elizabeth (fantasynerd365) That time he couldn't help but to let a small growl escape. "You heard her. Let go." He said, his teeth clenched. He was tense, wanting to do something but shifting here would be a bad idea.


onceuponatimeareview | 8405 comments "The game had only begun." He put his hand over her mouth. "How would you feel if I did this." He knocked her out. She felt her eyes slowly closing.
"Help me." She said faintly.


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Elizabeth (fantasynerd365) He shifted then, letting his wolf form take over. He crouched in front of the hunter, letting out a growl. Leave her out of this....You want me. Why bother her?


onceuponatimeareview | 8405 comments "Don't you see this is a game. Let's see how long it takes her to freak out." She slowly opened her eyes. She looked around for Zach. "What did you do with Zach?" She demanded. Then she saw a wolf and screamed in terror.


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Elizabeth (fantasynerd365) He winced a bit when she screamed. Deciding to revel it was him. Please....Calm down. He said to her, looking in her direction. It's me. Zach. I'm not going to hurt you..... 'not again' he silently added to himself.


onceuponatimeareview | 8405 comments She heard a voice in her head. Wolves can't talk. "Let go of me." She needed to get away from this crazy person and this wolf who thinks he is Zach. "Very funny trying to fool a person into thinking their boyfriend is a wolf."


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Elizabeth (fantasynerd365) Tessa. It is me. I swear I'll do everything I can to get you out of here. He said, but his gaze was focused on the hunter, eyes narrowed. He wanted to attack but couldn't exactly do that while the hunter had her.


onceuponatimeareview | 8405 comments Her boyfriend was a wolf. She gulped in fear.


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Elizabeth (fantasynerd365) Why do this to her?He demanded from the hunter. Just let. Her. Go. She didn't do anything to you. I'm the one you want so fight me and leave her out of it.


onceuponatimeareview | 8405 comments "I told you this is game." He laughed. She started to kick and struggle.
"Help please." She was losing a battle. Next thing she knew she was being thrown against a tree. Everything went black."Bye for now." The hunter was gone.


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Elizabeth (fantasynerd365) He wanted to chase after the hunter again but he was worried about her, he let out a bit of a frustrated growl before running to her side, changing back into a human as he got to her side. "Tessa? Come on...wake up..."


onceuponatimeareview | 8405 comments She laid there. She heard someone calling for her. She didn't know who. She went back into the darkness. Her breathing was slowing down. Each breathe was farther apart than the other.


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Elizabeth (fantasynerd365) He let out a string of curses, taking out his phone and once again calling for the ambulance. He'd find that hunter....He wouldn't let him keep hurting her like this....


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onceuponatimeareview | 8405 comments "Zach don't go." She muttered. She didn't know where she was. She couldn't lose him. "Stay please." She opened her eyes. She saw light. It hurt her head. She quickly closed her eyes. She laid there. "Please stay." She winced at the pain. "It hurts Zach. Don't leave." Her voice was weak.


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Elizabeth (fantasynerd365) "I'm here." He told her, taking one of her hands and giving it a light squeeze. He wanted to race off after the hunter now but wouldn't leave her. "Help is on the way. You'll be fine."


onceuponatimeareview | 8405 comments "No please don't let them take me to the hospital." Tears came to her eyes. "Please no. Not the hospital." She didn't want to go. She squeezed his hand. "Please don't let them take me." She hated hospitals. "Please no." She begged.


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Elizabeth (fantasynerd365) He frowned a bit. "What's wrong? They'll help you Tess....There's nothing I can do to help. They'll know what to do....much better than I would."


onceuponatimeareview | 8405 comments "I don't want to go to the hospital." She looked at him."I'm getting up to get out of here before they come." She started to get up.


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Elizabeth (fantasynerd365) "and go where?" He asked. "You're hurt. I can't just let you run off somewhere like that." He stubbornly insisted. "At least let them check you out to see if you're okay? Please?"


onceuponatimeareview | 8405 comments "No I'm not going to the hospital." She got up. "Please don't let them take me." She started walking.


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Elizabeth (fantasynerd365) "Tess..." He got to his feet, following after her. "What's wrong..." He asked as he stepped in front of her. "What's so bad about the hospital?"


onceuponatimeareview | 8405 comments "I don't like them. I was in one for a while when the wolf attack happen when I was little. Then there was another one not to long ago." She shook her head. "They ran tests on me gave crazy medicine." She started to shake.


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Elizabeth (fantasynerd365) He winced a bit when she mentioned the wolf attack. His fault.... "Tess....about a minute ago...." He trailed off again. She'd seen what he was.....and from how she was acting now it was clear to him she didn't believe what she'd seen. How was he going to tell her this?


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