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onceuponatimeareview | 8405 comments She was tied to a tree. She was trying to stay alive. Her breathing slow down. She drifted in the blackness. He kept pacing around. Wondering what to do next.


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Elizabeth (fantasynerd365) The man wasn't looking at him, Zach still silently sneaking up behind...a couple more steps and he leapt towards him.


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onceuponatimeareview | 8405 comments She fluttered her eyes. She saw something there. She held back her scream a wolf. The color from her face left. She saw it attack the person. She was too terrify to anything. She closed her eyes. She wanted this to be over.


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Elizabeth (fantasynerd365) ((He'd just leapt towards the hunter))


onceuponatimeareview | 8405 comments ((Yeah I know. She is afraid of wolves because she almost got killed by one.))


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Elizabeth (fantasynerd365) ((I know. You just didn't post anything for the hunter when Zach just attacked him))


onceuponatimeareview | 8405 comments ((Ooooooo sorry I post that after a test brain was fried. Ah let me fixed that.))


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Elizabeth (fantasynerd365) ((Okay))


onceuponatimeareview | 8405 comments ((Fixed it))


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Elizabeth (fantasynerd365) ((Okay, I was expecting a bit of a fight with the hunter but I'll try to think of something.))

He threw one quick glance in the girl's direction as he attacked. She looked terrified, but honestly he couldn't blame her. Being kidnapped then a wolf coming out of nowhere?


onceuponatimeareview | 8405 comments ((Oh))

The person was trying to fight the wolf as good as he could. He got a blade out and trying to stabb him. Tessa was shaking really bad. It was her worst nightmare all over again.


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Elizabeth (fantasynerd365) ((Sorry. Just used to more actiony rps and when you had said before that he was a werewolf hunter I was expecting more of a fight like this))


Zach let out a bit of a yelp as the knife bit into him, luckily he'd moved before it had gotten him deeply but it still hurt. He kept fighting though.


onceuponatimeareview | 8405 comments ((Oh I'm sorry.))

The hunter fell backward when he lost his balance."I see that I found you." The hunter laughed. He got out his poison blade. He ran towards to the wolf. He stabbed but he missed him. Tessa seeing the whole battle screamed. She couldn't take it. She started to breathe harder.


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Elizabeth (fantasynerd365) 'Found me?' He wondered. What the heck was that supposed to mean? Zach dodged out of the way as the hunter came at him. What do you want? He demanded into his head.


onceuponatimeareview | 8405 comments "Your death. You don't remember me. I killed you once,but obviously you didn't die." He laughed. She started to freak out. She needed to get out of here. This wolf will kill her like the one along time ago.


onceuponatimeareview | 8405 comments "Your death. You don't remember me. I killed you once,but obviously you didn't die." He laughed. She started to freak out. She needed to get out of here. This wolf will kill her like the one along time ago.


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Elizabeth (fantasynerd365) He frowned a bit, staying tense, ready to jump to the side again if he had to. What did he mean he killed him? He obviously wasn't dead.....There was a faint memory of....something at the back of his mind that he couldn't quite reach.


onceuponatimeareview | 8405 comments "Well that's fine,you don't remember those people you tried killing?" He laughed again. "I'm surprise you don't remember the little girl?" He was laughing so hard. Tessa was frozen with fear. She couldn't breathe. There was a wolf. A wolf tried killing her.


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Elizabeth (fantasynerd365) He dared to take his eyes off the hunter long enough to glance in her direction. Was that why she was so familiar? He'd attacked her? He didn't remember much about the first time he'd shifted. Most werewolves lost control a bit during it but mist had a pack there to stop them from causing too much damage. He didn't....


onceuponatimeareview | 8405 comments She couldn't breathe."Help me." She gasped for air. She needed to get away. She kept telling herself that her life was over."Oh first shift huh, why do you think the girl is so afraid of you wolf. One attack her when she was young. You are scaring her to death." He laughed.


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Elizabeth (fantasynerd365) It wasn't my fault.....and I wouldn't have chased after you if you hadn't kidnapped her. Why anyway?


onceuponatimeareview | 8405 comments "She had your scent on her. Do know why that is? If she was in contact with you at all she would have your scent on her. She doesn't have much time. She looks like she could die anytime." He started laughing again.


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Elizabeth (fantasynerd365) He suppressed the urge to let out a growl. You're the one kidnapping an innocent girl and I'm supposed to be the bad one here?


onceuponatimeareview | 8405 comments "No kidnapping is harsh a little bit." He let out another laugh."Well you see she is hyperventilating. She is afraid of you more than me." He walked over to her. She started shaking. "Get away from m-mee." She gasped for breath again. "I think this is more your fault than mine. Now who are your afraid of more me or the wolf." She looked up at him then to the wolf."The w--wolf."


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Elizabeth (fantasynerd365) Zach didn't know what to do. He didn't blame her for being scared, and any other time would have just run off into the woods. But could he really just leave her here with this psychopath? Let her go. You said it's me your after? well here I am...


onceuponatimeareview | 8405 comments "I don't want to kill you now. What fun would that be?" He laughed. "Good luck." Then he vanished. Tessa sat there in mortal terror. She couldn't breathe. That guy left her with a wolf who could be a man eating wolf.


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Elizabeth (fantasynerd365) He wanted to help her but it's not like he could shift right here....He threw one quick glance in her direction before running off. Maybe in a few minutes he could come by in his human form and untie her? Maybe say he'd seen what was going on and followed?


onceuponatimeareview | 8405 comments The wolf was gone. She was alone. She couldn't cried. She was going to die here alone. Tears came down her face. She couldn't breathe the crying made it worst. She sat there in mortal shock. She felt her eyes closed. She soon was unconscious.


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Elizabeth (fantasynerd365) Logan waited about five minutes before heading back, this time in his human form. He just hoped that she trusted him enough to get her out of there at least. Seeing her unconscious though definitely made things easier. He took out his pocket knife and cut the ropes. Should he take her to the hospital? He wondered, just try to wake her up?


onceuponatimeareview | 8405 comments She knew she was going to die. She soon drifted off into complete darkness. She was further away from reality. Her breathing settle some still above normal. She felt her herself spinning away.


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Elizabeth (fantasynerd365) The hospital." He decided as he picked her up. Being a werewolf did have it's advantages. Even in human form he was stronger. He;d get her out of these woods....then he could call for an ambulance or something. And that's what he did, he got her out of the woods and layed her one of the benches outside, taking out his cell and calling 911.


onceuponatimeareview | 8405 comments She didn't know what happened. She didn't know have anyone to care for her,but her granny who is really sick. At least she will leave this world with nothing to lose.


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Elizabeth (fantasynerd365) Zach watched them when they got there as they loaded her into the ambulance to take to the hospital. He stayed near the school, skipping the rest of the classes for that day and heading back to the woods to see if he could find the hunter.


onceuponatimeareview | 8405 comments She didn't know what happened. She heard a beeping noise. She opened her eyes. Where was she? How did she get here? This was very confusing. What had happen? She thought of a hospital. Who will take care of her?


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Elizabeth (fantasynerd365) ((Not sure what to do....))


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onceuponatimeareview | 8405 comments ((How about if she is out of the hospital now and he tries getting to know her like a date and the hunter comes back and confronts them and she freaks out and runs into a trap made by the a different pack of wolves and they take her and he tries saving her again. She listen to what he says. They later become a couple and it is prom night. She wants him to change her. And he says no. She runs away and cries. His pack finds her and takes her to be killed because she knows to much. He finds out about it and tells them that she is his mate. They released her. She gets turned. This leads into a big war between the hunters and the werewolves.))


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Elizabeth (fantasynerd365) ((Sounds really good! Except I don't think he had a pack, that's why she got attacked when he first shifted because normally a werewolves pack stops them from loosing control. We can say he found one later I guess but it sounds awesome :D))


onceuponatimeareview | 8405 comments ((True and great. :)))


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Elizabeth (fantasynerd365) ((So start back up when she's at school again? Can you start?))


onceuponatimeareview | 8405 comments ((Yep and sure))


onceuponatimeareview | 8405 comments She walked slowly into school. She was afraid of what the other kids would think. She walked in to her first class and sat down quietly. She was still in shock. She tried finding who called the ambulance. There was no leads though.


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Elizabeth (fantasynerd365) Seeing her walk into the class, Zach breathed a sigh of relief. He hesitated a second before getting up and heading over to her seat. "Um hey....was wondering how you were doing..."


onceuponatimeareview | 8405 comments "I'm doing ok." She snapped at him. She was lonely and had no one. She wasn't doing ok. She was awful. She had nightmares all the time. Everyone laughs and stares at her even more.


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Elizabeth (fantasynerd365) Zach shot a glare at the people laughing at her before turning back to face her "Do you....I don't know....maybe want to hang out some time?"


onceuponatimeareview | 8405 comments A friend. "Did someone put you up to this?" A lot of people would do this. She felt bad that someone would do that to her. "Why?" She asked him questionly.


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Elizabeth (fantasynerd365) He frowned. "What? No...no one put me up to this." He said then let out a breath. "You just seem nice and..." He trailed off. He'd almost killed her a couple years ago...was this really such a god idea?


onceuponatimeareview | 8405 comments "Ok. I guess I could go out with you." She smiled faintly. This wouldn't be that bad right?


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Elizabeth (fantasynerd365) "Alright cool." He also gave a bit of a smile. "A movie Friday night sound good?"


onceuponatimeareview | 8405 comments "Yeah a movie Friday sounds good." She smiled. She was happy. She got asked on a date.


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Elizabeth (fantasynerd365) "Awesome. any particular one you've been wanting to see?" He asked her.


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