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Jan 28, 2014 09:16PM
[[sorry for coming off a bit harsh, but that's how I see your posts. Remember they are posts and not spoken words. Some things don't always transfer well to written words since I can't hear your inflections and tone of voice. Please be more considerate.]]
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(( I was pushy about it until I thought of something that would make it okay if the partner was a guy, it would make my character better and so would your character being a girl but you want your character to be a guy so okay :))Alexander gets a call from chief Rohan, he groans then answers his phone" Yesssss you ignorant bumbling fool!?"
Rohan grins knowing that once he found out the great Alexander Sherlock would hate having a partner it would make him miserable" Just need you down at the station for a case."Alexander scowls then hands up the phone but says to him self" He's lying and is happy about something.... happy and talking to me, this can't be good." He hurries to the elevator, goes down to the first floor, once the elevator doors open Alexander bolts out then stops on the edge of the curb and raises his hand" Taxi!" One taxi passes by him so he says" Stupid son of bitch! Ignorant fool he is probably stop for some prostitute with her breasts hanging out of her shirt, well I would to but that's besides the point he should have stopped when I yelled Taxi!" Another Taxi drives up and stops, Alexander smiles then gets in the front" You my dear Azandria are a great young cabby but you could do much greater things. Call me if you ever are looking for a job." Azandria smiles then asks" So Alexander, where shall I be dropping you off at?" Alexander smiles and leans closer without her noticing" New York pig station Beautiful." She laughs then begins to drive. Azandria stops at the police station and Alexander asks" How much?" He asks but she says with a big smile" For you it's free." He nods in thanks then closes the door and walks to the side walk and as soon as she walks off he mutters to himself." One more day and I'll be in bed with her."
Dorian was waiting at the station wondering what he was doing there. He already knew that there was a case, but he didn't know who would work it with him. As he waited in his jeans and shirt, he took a seat and began to listen to everyone around him. In a few minutes he uncovered the American accent. Yes, he's met some before, but he never had the chance to really try out his accent. Listening to the others he was sure he discovered all of it's strange pronunciations and most of it's slang. Dorian watched as someone stormed into the station as if he owned the place. It made him smile for a second before he returned to people watching. It was much more entertaining to watch an American police station. There was so much activity.
Alexander stares women's Asses as they walk by then he walks up to Chief Rohan who was standing next next to a man in a chair. Rohan smiles and says" Alexander this your partner-" Alexander cuts him off" I do not need a partner because if I had a partner he would slow me down, also I could only have a partner if he was as smart as me and there is nobody as smart as me. So you bumbling ignorant imbisol tell this man he can leave." And with that Alexander walks out.
Dorian just looked at Chief Rohan and smiled, "I still need a job, Sir. I hope you won't let me go so easily." Rohan took his seat and hesitated before getting up again. He was obviously annoyed with Alexander's behavior, but then again what was he expecting? Dorian ran out after calling back, "Let me talk to him." Dorian wan out of the office and caught up to Alexander. "Hey, dude wait up." He called out to Alexander as he grabbed his shoulder.
Instinctively Alexander quickly turns grabs Dorians hand and throws him to the wall then pins him, he let's go of him" Don't come up behind me and grab me or worse consequences will concur. Also don't call me dude you moronic brat!"
Dorian smiled like an idiot. He'd dealt with worse. "Sorry, Mr. Hot-head," Dorian replied, "how's about I tag along? Who could it hurt?" Dorian knew that he would probably get on Alexander's nerve, but then again who cared. Watching everyone move past, Dorian realized that he was pretty pale compared to the 'natives'. Pulling his hand through his thick sawdusty hair, Dorian continued, "You Americans are quite the interesting bunch. If I do say so myself. Also a bunch of burks too." He allowed a thick English accent to seep through.
" Fortunately I'm not American, I'm from Germany relocated to America 1 year from a week and 3 days ago. I relocated here because there's one of the highest crime rates here, so better money for a detective now also I have to be on the side of New York to be near a braufel girl."
Dorian smiled at Alexander, "Then you understand that us foreigners need to stick together." He fell in time with Alexander's pace and walked along side him with a big grin. Dorian loved to smile because it could hide everything...like his disdain for this guy's attitude. Dorian continued to walk with Alexander until they came to a street corner where a rush of cars were coming from both directions.
Alexander could see past Dorians smile in a glance, but when they came to the street Alexander pushes Dorian into the middle of the road then bolts the other way then makes turns right hurries up up to a door and knocks on it. A very beautiful woman wearing a black dress opens the door" Your not late today, surprising but a nice surprise." He hurries in then closes the door.
Dorian wasn't expecting Alexander to do that. As he fell into the street a car stepped hard on the gas since the light had just changed. Dorian didn't know what to do as the hunk of metal went flying towards him. In a split second he saw his life flash before him. It wasn't a great life, heck it wasn't even a good life, but it was his nevertheless. Dorian took a deep breath before the car hit him. Everything went black. Dorian was lost in his own self conscious. At first he wondered if he was dead. The darkness continued and Dorian let himself just go.
After a 30 minutes of fun with the woman named Alexandra they turn on the tv to see a new story" just 30 minutes a man accidentally was in traffic and got hit by a car. " Alexander rolls out of bed and quickly puts his closes on, normally he wouldn't have a cared If someone died or got tradjectly died because of him this was different somehow though. Alexandra asks" Alexander you just going to Bang me and leave." Alexander smiles at her" I would love to stay but I pushed that guy into traffic."(( your choice if Dorian dies.))
[[no I won'd kill him. I just wanted to mix things up]]Dorian found himself waking up in a hospital. He knew the smell and sounds all too well to mistaken it for something else. His head was throbbing slightly and his body ached. He felt the texture of bandages on his abdomen. Thankfully, Dorian didn't feel any casts. Finding his chart hanging on the side of his bed, he realized that a day had gone by since the accident. He flopped back down for a second to take a breath before sitting up painfully. It wasn't too bad, but then again his tolerance for pain was pretty high. Removing the sheets he was happy to find that he had pants and not a gown. Dorian stood up and wandered over to the window. 'A private room, how thoughtful.' Dorian stated in his mind. He opened the window to allow some fresh air into the room. Moving was painful yet invigorating. He smile again before pulling out the needles that were attacked to his arm, knowing fully that someone was bound to show up sooner or later to see what was wrong.
Alexander had sitting there but then silently went behind him and whispered into his ear" shhhhhh."
[[now that's creepy]]Dorian turned around as his heart rate went up. "What the...." he exclaimed but found that his voice wasn't really working properly. When he realized that it was Alexander, Dorian calmed himself. Taking a deep breath, Dorian took a step back. He took a sip of water but found himself chocking on it a moment later. He held up his hand to keep Alexander away as he composed himself. His chest and back hurt from the coughing and his injuries, but he smiled anyways and asked, "Well if it isn't my failed assassin here to greet me and maybe finish the job. What are you doing here?"
" Good question I've killed many before by pushing them in front of things when their being annoying and was a killer in Russia... Might have to kill because you know these things but normally if the person was in the hospital I wouldn't care but.... I've been here ever since I saw on the Television you were in the hospital."
Dorian didn't know what to make of this. Moving around the room painfully, Dorian replied, "You didn't have to. Besides you have bigger and better things." As he took a seat on the bed a nurse came in. She was a bit overweight and breathing somewhat heavily. Before she could ask a question Dorian said, "Don't worry i'm fine." She looked to Alexander and back to Dorian. Without a word she left the two alone. He sat in silence for a while before a thick envelope slid under the door. Dorian didn't know what to do. He looked at the envelope for a second before moving to pick it up. It was labeled, 'Alice'. Dorian knew that nickname all to well. He carefully opened the envelope revealing a letter and a picture of him and a jabberwock. [[I'm setting up a plot idea. If you want you can state what the letter says. I was thinking this could work into their case.]]
Alexander looked over Dorians shoulder, at first the name' Alice' meaning nothing to him until he remembered Paris 6 years ago. He begins to read the letter outloud" Dorian I Thought you being fragile as glass you would shatter when being hit by a car. Sadly that's not the case, in normal circumstances in a few days or weeks you would have lost and would be dead but you have my past lover and enemy, Alexander Sherlock. He can't be stopped by a car, a truck, a 18 wheeler, a few bullets, trust me I've tried they just slow him down. Oh and you 'sherlock'you probably figured out the reason I know the exact room your in even though you hacked into the systems hiding Dorians room number." Sherlock takes the letter and burns it with a lighter. He then lifts Dorian over his should and tries to open the door, it wouldn't budge. He kicks it down then begins to bolt through the hospital running as fast as he could until he was at the exit then began running away from the hospital as it exploded.(( Sorry if that wasn't to good.))
(( sorry I meant exact hospital... Not room.))
[[Interesting. I will elaborate off that, but I like it. Action!]]Before Alexander burned the letter Dorian grabbed the picture of him and the jabberwock. The past few years there was a case where the murderer taunted Dorian with quotes from Alice in Wonderland and Through the Looking Glass, Dorian's favorite books. Not only were the quotes distorted for the murderer's needs, but they were always somehow referring to him. After those years Dorian realized that he had a stalker, but who would have thought that this Alexander would be a cause for that.
As Alexander picks Dorian up, Dorian begins to protest, "H-hey, put me down!" He hated being picked up. Even if Alexander was saving his life he would still remember how much he hated being carried. When the building exploded, Dorian was safely out. He struggled until Alexander put him down. He fell to his knees holding his middle. From the running and Alexander's shoulder, Dorian's ribs were hurting. In a pained voice Dorian stated, "Thanks...for that."
Alexander was to distracted to confused, he had only been here a year. How had she already found him, he could give her what she wanted and it would be over. No! Alexander paces back and forth then walks off.
Dorian could see that Alexander was in deep thought and besides he was busy with his own thoughts. The killer that had stalked Dorian was back after two years off. Could it really be Jabberwock? He remembered the gruesome murders in Bristol. The bloody letters and messages. Not only was he back, but it seemed that he had found Alexander as well. And that letter. It obviously was addressed to Alexander and not Dorian, but would that mean that Jabberwock was after Alexander as well, or something else. As he thought Dorian asked aloud, "Alexander did you piss off a girl or something?"
".... In a way.... But you did to... why would she be after someone like you though."
Dorian began to speak but his lungs wouldn't allow him. Instead he just leaned against whatever he could find. His body still ached terribly. It wasn't unbearable, but he hated when his lungs burned. "It's not just her though," Dorian squeezed out, "there's someone else working with her."
Alexander laughs thinking Dorian was joking then sees his expression" Wait your serious. Is it that wood thing? It's a trick you dumb ass."
Dorian hated this guy right now. Couldn't he at least go with it for a while. It would make Dorian feel much better. "Don't call me that," Dorian stated in a threatening tone. He hated being called that and would fight someone over it if he ever lost control.
" Dorian. You know I could break you in half easily. Dumb ass."
Dorian looked at Alexander and said again in a low and threatening voice, "Don't call me that...ever." He refused to be called that even if it wasn't meant in a mean way. The phrase just struck something deep within; a memory. It didn't matter that Alexander was physically stronger or that he was hurt, he'd still fight him over that.
Alexander loves to break people in half mentally" Dumb ass!"
Dorian nearly went crazy. He was a skilled fighter especially when it came to hand to hand combat. Throwing a punch that was meant to throw the guy off balance, Dorian readied himself for the next attack. With his right foot in front, Dorian moved flawlessly and kept on his toes as he continued to throw wild, random punches.[[Please don't God-mod. If a punch hits Alexander than you can state that. You can't control what hits Dorian in this situation, that's god-moding, either.]]
Alexander kept catching each punch then he twists Dorians arm but then throws him down" Dumb ass."
[[no offense but that's god modding. You can't say that your character over powered someone else's character. Ultimately it's who ever owns the character they are the one who decides if the punches connect or not and if the counter works.]]
(( we've already talked about this!!!!!!!!!))
[[I know we've talked about this. I never said that I liked godmodding. I just stated that I would put up with it. Please could you stop godmodding though. It's a bit frustrating]]
((* Not replying to you*. FUCK NO!!! NOOOO!!!! NO! * I'm truly crying in real life* BURN IN HELL ZACH!!!!!!!
(( MOTHER FUCKER'!!! FUCK FUCK FUCK!'!! ZACH WHY YOU ARE GOING TO HELL AND WILL BURN FOR ENTERITNY!! YOU SHOULD HAVE LET JOSH WIN!! I MEAN IM GOING TO BURN YOU ALIVE ANYWAY YOU SON A BITCH MOTHER FUCKING JACK ASS COCKING SUCKING BASTARD!- What happens when your Fav YouTuber gets on the show and the asshole of the season kicks him off. Both season one of my fave youtubers gets on there, both named josh. Joven(( first josh.)) got pretty far. Josh(( second josh)) got off in the second episode because of.... The names to dread to speak once more.
[[Sorry to hear that. Actually i don't understand why you're so angry, since I'm assuming you're on a rant. Anyways. I recommend you take a step back from the computer and calm down.If you're so annoyed with me pointing out god modding, then you should research it and try to stop. In all honesty it's frustrating for me as well because I feel like I have no control over my character. If I go along, then I'm saying that I'm fine with you controlling my character (which I'm not).
I really do enjoy this rp because it's new and different than the usual rps I do. If you have any questions about this please ask. It's better to get everything squared away instead of being frustrated with each other.]]
(( do you watch king of the nerds.))
(( because that's what I'm ranting about.))Alexander dodged and countered, going easy on Dorian" Dumb ass you know I can break you in half right? I mean I did kick a metal door down earlier."
"Try," Dorian threatened. He kept a relatively cool head as he continued to fight. All his mind was concentrated on was the fight and nothing else. It almost made him feel free from the outside world. Dorian continued to push forward hoping to get an opening to best Alexander.
Alexander kept moving out of the way of Dorians sloppy attacks then he just pushes Dorian out of the way and walks away" Come at me one more time and I will break your leg, I promise."
[[FYI, Dorian is a pretty good fighter. He might have a bit of a street fighter style, but he's not really sloppy. P.S. Alexander can't be that bad-ass. Give Dorian a chance]]Dorian disregarded Alexander's comment as he continued. He got into a solid stance and went again at Alexander. He had to admit that Alexander was an accomplished fighter, but he wouldn't lose to him.
(( I told you Dorian can be smarter but Alexander would be much stronger. He was trained by some strong people also I'm going to break Dorians leg cause you technically gave me permission.))
[[You're really frustrating to work with sometimes. Fine do what you want. P.S. you technically can't break Dorian's legs since I didn't give you permission. I have to agree and I don't. But then again I can't control what you post.]]
(( you did give permission.... Alexander said he would break Dorians leg if dorian didn't stop attacking him... Dorian then continued to attack him))
[[That's not permission. Permission is me saying 'you can break Dorian's legs' which I didn't. Also you can't say 'Alexander broke Dorian's legs' only I can decide if Alexander broke Dorian's legs. Plus you're making your character too strong. This isn't your story...it's our story, so both of our characters need to be somewhat of equals.]]
(( I'm just pissed..... So pissed at zack Snyder.))
