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NOT to be confused with THE FINGER! Eh Rob!! (Nikolai gave me it yesterday.....remember Nikolai?)

Is that last conjugation correct? Does is seem awkward? Thanks!
"Days turned to dust that couldn’t fly;
they phantomed, bogging down
the awnings, like the bygones
I’d sworn went by."
My grammar sense wants to read "I'd sworn had gone by," but if it's a voice and that voice is of a dialect of the author's choosing, you can make do with whatever construction you wish.



UPDATE: Should be "swore." Typo.

Days turned to dust that couldn't fly
they bogged down the awnings
like bygones I'd sworn went by

We have pedagogy here.....
Has the government taken steps to control it? You know, quarantines and all that?
Has the government taken steps to control it? You know, quarantines and all that?

"D'you know, my son," Father Malachy replied, "that the male and female students there matriculate together, and share the same curriculum."
"Never mind, Father," came the reply, "I'm leaving it all to the Church!"

Certainly don't take my word for it though. I've no education in literature at all. All I do is write.
Anna wrote: "If that is an example of 'home work', I'm glad I'm here instead."
Of course it looks hard. But we haven't heard the lecture or explanation his teacher would have given.
Of course it looks hard. But we haven't heard the lecture or explanation his teacher would have given.

You said in another thread that it was a question set by your teacher and you asked for help with the answer. So it is schoolwork of some kind and you should be doing your own analysis! Happy to help with grammar and punctuation Charles, but not analysis. And we are very friendly here....just ask anyone!!:-)


I have a question about the word "steps."
There are a set of tasks that must be performed simultaneously (not in sequence). So is it all right if I said:
"Perform the following steps:"
Does the word "steps" automatically suggest that all the tasks need to be performed in sequence?
Thanks,
Nita

"These processes then carry out the following steps:"
I'll use:
"These processes then carry out the following tasks simultaneously."
(I don't know why I changed the original sentence to post it here!) LOL
Thanks! :-)
Nita

Point both index fingers, holding your hands in front of you. Move one hand clockwise and the other counterclockwise, simultaneously.
Congratulations. You are now a fifth grader again.

I came home from the party fuming, because Annette said my new ($200!) haircut looked "funny."
John wrote: "Sorry if this has already been covered, but I just can't handle a period inside quotation marks for a set-off term. The following example is just wrong:
I came home from the party fuming, because ..."
Exactly the way I feel. I copy edited a book for someone who felt the same way and we put the punctuation where we thought it belonged. Got all kinds of flak when the book came out.
I came home from the party fuming, because ..."
Exactly the way I feel. I copy edited a book for someone who felt the same way and we put the punctuation where we thought it belonged. Got all kinds of flak when the book came out.

I came home from the party fuming, because ..."
The British & Canadians agree with you, John--& those who speak other European languages too, for that matter. But I'm an editor thoroughly trained in U.S. standard English style, so my eye wants the "mild" punctuation marks (period & comma) inside the quotation marks. At least we can all agree about putting the more emphatic colons, semicolons, & question & exclamation marks OUTSIDE, unless they're part of the quoted matter.

I used to do it the 'right' way, but since becoming an L&Ger I am so confused I just stick it anywhere the mood takes me! I am now a creative punctuator!


I think that is what I am also hehehe
I put periods inside the closing quotation mark no matter what as a form of solidarity with those patriots and Minutemen who gave their lives fighting the surly lobsterbacks over such matters as taxation, representation, and punctuation. Period.

Isn't the hyphen here in "more-prominent" bullshit, and that dash also would have been better as a comma, no?
"GM announced a string of management changes - including a new role for Vice Chairman Robert Lutz and the promotion of some of the company's younger managers into more-prominent roles."

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