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The purpose of language is to be understood and ideally to convey meaning in an elegant way. Grammar is a means to that end, not an end in itself. However, in schools and grammar books, it is easier to teach a "rule" than to teach discernment, so that is often what happens.
Sometimes it sounds better, to start with a conjunction, and if it's good enough for Shakespeare, Austen, Dickens and others, it's fine by me too.

And Dorothy, what are you going to do about it?
Venial sins at worst.
Because I've never read the Oz books, I cannot comment. But what about the habit of writing cannot as two words (can not)? Un nerving, is n't i t?

Ruth, when I lived in Europe, I found that almost all the Scandinavian people spoke wonderful English. Better than Americans! I think the educational system in Scandinavia is very, very good.

I don't want to be prescriptive here, but if we think about what a conjunction is actually used for, then it is often not..."
I think, strictly grammatically speaking, there should be a comma in that first sentence:
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If a conjunction joins two independent clauses, then a comma is required before the conjunction:
I like playing the piano, but I hate the violin.
I'm pretty sure this is correct. Thoughts?

And Dorothy, what are you going to do about it?
Venial sins at worst."
Starting a sentence with a conjunction is well accepted in fiction writing, David, if it fits the style of the dialogue or the narrative voice of the writer.

Much more fun, and uses a subordinated clause.
Gotta keep your subordinates in line at all times. Subordinating conjunctions and relative pronouns to the left, please.
Adjectivo, methinks, because "appalled" suggests a state of being, not an action (as it would if it were an adverb).

What part of speech is "appalled", please?
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I think it's an adverb because it modifies the verb "am."


Main Entry: ap·pall
Variant(s): also ap·pal \ə-ˈpȯl\
Function: verb
Inflected Form(s): ap·palled; ap·pall·ing
Etymology: Middle English, from Middle French apalir, from Old French, from a- (from Latin ad-) + palir to grow pale, from Latin pallescere, inchoative of pallēre to be pale — more at fallow
Date: 14th century
intransitive verb obsolete : weaken, failtransitive verb : to overcome with consternation, shock, or dismay

In "She grew up," "grew up" is the verb, so I guess "am appalled" is the intransitive verb in that sentence.
Thanks, Carol.
Hmn. I'm seeing "appalled" following the linking verb as a subject complement, which can be an adjective (sometimes called a "predicate adjective") but not an adverb.
It's similar to saying "The writer is talented." Talented would be an adjective referring to the subject (writer).
Right?
It's similar to saying "The writer is talented." Talented would be an adjective referring to the subject (writer).
Right?


NE is right. Both refer to the subject in the sentence. Both verbs are intransitive.
Wow, you keep a Dean around to ask? You are clearly in the mix. I feel out of it, by comparison. (Or maybe you live in a university town and I live in a cow town -- sigh).


Oh, don't feel out of it, NE! "His" university town is simply a cow town that provides space for a university. He even had to go to a nearby town for his birthday as he said they didn't have any good restaurants there. He's been my writing instructor, writing mentor, and now, writing partner, or I wouldn't know him. At least I don't think I would.
It's OK. I actually prefer being "out of it" and living "on the fringe." I don't mind "cow towns" either, as there's usually more sense to a town where cows outnumber people.
How now brown cow?
How now brown cow?

By the way, he also said if I truly thought that was a adverb, I could be dangerous. LOL Looks like I'd better start rereading a grammar book! :) Seriously.

I want to live right above the sand, with crashing waves, soft breezes, clean air, and no people.
And 10 minutes from the heart of a major city.
And 10 minutes from the heart of a major city.

Right now, my husband and I are looking at a place with all Spanish architecture, lots of palms, even brick streets, gated community. It seems to be a world of it's own, yet it's close to the city and all the shops. I suppose we'll move there if we decide we can afford it. I know I'd love it. Year round warmth and beauty.

I always wanted to live in Paris - until I did. Blah! Too crowded, and bad winter weather. No ocean or sea. The south of France is so much nicer, but visiting Paris is great. All the art and architecture, though I like Florence a little better.
I live in a 'cow town' (only it is really a sheep town....heard of the Golden Shears?) of 25,000 people.....and just and hour and 20 minutes from the heart of Wellington.....lovely!
Yes, having your cake (solitude) and eating it too (people) seems to be on all of our wish lists. Where I am in the summer seems like it's in the middle of nowhere (because it's on an island), but once you cross the causeway, you're only 10 miles from restaurants and stores.
Still, I think perfection would be living on the outskirts of a small college town with all the amenities -- restaurants, theater, museum, bookstores, music stores, farmers' markets. That's all I need, really. That and early retirement so I can make it reality.
Still, I think perfection would be living on the outskirts of a small college town with all the amenities -- restaurants, theater, museum, bookstores, music stores, farmers' markets. That's all I need, really. That and early retirement so I can make it reality.
Well, in New England it goes without saying. Except for Vermont, all the states provide plenty of ocean and all within reasonable distance.
Did I ever say I like it here?
Did I ever say I like it here?

The sea is only 45 minutes away from here.....in fact you are never much more than an hour away from the sea anywhere in NZ!! And it is warm....
Redlands, where I lived until 3 years ago, has the University of Redlands, a private liberal arts college. How sad I was to discover it was not a college town, but merely a town with a college in it.

Thank you very much.
carol (akittykat) wrote: "
Main Entry: ap·pall
Variant(s): also ap·pal \ə-ˈpȯl\
Function: verb
Inflected Form(s): ap·palled; ap·pall·ing
Etymology: Middle English, from Middle French apalir, from Old French, from a- (from ..."

Shakes head. This is much too sophisticated for eleven yr olds! I'm very concerned that her teacher will expect a dumbed-down answer.
Gabrielle wrote: "If the verb "to be" is functioning as a linking verb in "In am appalled," then "appalled" would be the subject complement. Or the adjective complement. I guess. "

I think what's confusing is that the modifier "appalled" is also a participial having an -ed ending. In this case, it's a participial adjective, but following a linking verb it's better thought of as a predicate adjective.


That's true, Carol, home is where the heart is, but I wish my "home" were warmer in the winter! LOL
carol (akittykat) wrote: "Then what is consider a college town Ruth? I like everyone's suggestions for best places to live. I am happy that everyone is generally happy where they are. I guess the old adage is true, Home is..."
I would define a college town as one where there is frequent and interesting cross-fertilization between the town and the college.
I would define a college town as one where there is frequent and interesting cross-fertilization between the town and the college.
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I don't want to be prescriptive here, but if we think about what a conjunction is actually used for, then it is often not good usage to start a sentence with one. A conjunction is used to join two utterances and to show their relationship. Some examples:
I like playing the piano but I hate the violin.
I like playing the piano and the violin.
I like playing the piano because it soothes my nerves.
In some cases where we have more than two utterances, they are often written as two or more sentences. See the following example where we have three utterances:
I like playing the piano.
The piano soothes my nerves.
The violin excites me.
This could be written as two sentences, the second sentence starting with a conjunction: "I like playing the piano because it soothes my nerves." But, in my opinion the three utterances belong together in one sentence: "I like playing the piano because it soothes my nerves; but the violin excites me."
Now, I'm sure you've noticed that I began my sentence above with 'but' - a conjunction. As I say, we can't be prescriptive about this, especially in more complex constructions. All I want to say is: reflect on the words you use and why you are using them and write accordingly.