The House of Hades
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NICO… YOU KNOW WHAT I'M TALKING ABOUT O.o
I agree with H99-ie. But I know plenty of groups that allow you to post stories and give feedback. You could join one and post your story there.
Deaths coming wrote: "here a start of one tell me what you think"I feel the same way
and what do you actully think of it
H99 wrote: "It's a good start, I think. Get some more punctuation in there, as well as more description, details, and dialogue. For example, "They found the person who organised the assassination. It turned o..."yeah I know but it was going to long because its an english assienment and only meant to be 500 words
( the other one)?
here one that I have just started
“Ahhhhhhhhhhhhhh” yarned sir duke of Europe one of the 13 lord demons in Europe at the moment him being duke the 3rd highest ranking on the continent “MINON! WHATS THE NEXT PLAN!” he bellows while getting dress in fine silk that goes excellent with his green scales when his not in glamour( a rich well to do noble from that time including Crassus, sheriff of Nottingham and a number of popes. “Sir our next plan was to stop the assignation of Emperor Nero” whimpered a tiny winged imp getting his daily meal of beheaded nobles with a side of plague rats. “Good he was fun and a ball to talk to” he said. “well we better begin plotting and doing before those angels come to ruin one of our other plans” he said to himself and the journey began
do you know any of those sites avalon?
Well I know a group on GoodReads called Write Your Heart Out. People have their own threads where they just write and other people comment on it, improving their work and pointing out good and bad points. You could join it.
Avalon wrote: "Well I know a group on GoodReads called Write Your Heart Out. People have their own threads where they just write and other people comment on it, improving their work and pointing out good and bad ..."thanks I will cheak that out :)
any way while thats happening do any of you have any stories?
any way while thats happening do any of you have any stories?
whats the most messed up ting you know about your family?
Deaths coming wrote: "29 of January 1314So the king, my father is dead oh how I wish I could have been by his side as he died. He was off hunting elk in the black forest of the south where snow is just starting to melt..."
um.... what did I just read? O.o
Blogger wrote: "Deaths coming wrote: "29 of January 1314So the king, my father is dead oh how I wish I could have been by his side as he died. He was off hunting elk in the black forest of the south where snow is..."
my english assienment :)
ohh. Is it worth a lot of points? my history paper turned out to be worth 4oo points, no joke -__- Well I'm sure you'll do fabulous
Points? We don't use that system here in Australia and It haven't gotten marked yet
No points in Australia? How do they determine your grade there?
♫~Kelly~♫ wrote: "No points in Australia? How do they determine your grade there?"Usually for assignments we get a mark out of 20 and see how it goes
Each part of the assignment you do right you get marks
This sounds much more difficult than just seeing if its right or wrong and giving u a percentage.
Blogger wrote: " I seriously don't know why Zeus is the leader... "It goes by the kingdoms they command, the sky covers all of earth so Zeus is the most powerful, then the earth is covered by 70% water making percy's dad second most powerful .... that leaves Hades with the scraps
Deaths coming wrote: "♫~Kelly~♫ wrote: "No points in Australia? How do they determine your grade there?"Usually for assignments we get a mark out of 20 and see how it goes
Each part of the assignment you do right you..."
oh yeah i remember. we had the same system in Cameroon. sadly if you were 10/20, you had to repeat the class. Doesn't it rate you out of your whole class, like if you were the 17th smartest person out of 20 then.....you're dumb BUT i may be wrong
In New York they grade you from 1-100.
This turn of events did not bother me. It was unexpected and not really necessary, but the characters will grow and it does not bother me.This turn of events did not bother me. It was unexpected and not really necessary, but the characters will grow and it does not bother me.
And the books began as children's books, but readers grow and the characters grow with them and they are no childrens anymore. And I liked that Rick will take this risk as a writer, knowing that there might be a bit of controversy on this point. It was weird and surprising because I was not expecting, but nothing more. It doesn't change my opinion at all about the character or the series.
nice new pic avalon I do not know how to explain the marking system in australia what you said dosen't happen here so yearh what did you actully think of my stories?
Kevin wrote: "Blogger wrote: " I seriously don't know why Zeus is the leader... "It goes by the kingdoms they command, the sky covers all of earth so Zeus is the most powerful, then the earth is covered by 70%..."
the reason zeus was in charge in the first place is because he reliesed his brothers and sisters from cronus
Tank you :3
It was interesting ! There were just some things you need to fix, but other than that it's off to a nice start and it was great :)
It was interesting ! There were just some things you need to fix, but other than that it's off to a nice start and it was great :)
by the way do you agree with the people who said that eoin colfer lost his touch with writting since book 3.some say he has steadly going down hill since book 2
by the way do you agree with the people who said that eoin colfer lost his touch with writting since book 3.some say he has steadly going down hill since book 2
H99 wrote: "Deaths coming wrote: "whats the most messed up ting you know about your family?"I don't think I'm going to say anything about that online..."
hey I have a great uncle whos in the mafia.
theirs not much worst than that
H99 wrote: "Still, this isn't something I'm discussing and posting anywhere everyone can see it."let me guess it is something personal a close relitive okay I can understand I have never met my great uncle so it is not that personal
H99 wrote: "Look, it doesn't matter if I even have anything to hide. I'm just not giving personal information to the Internet."I said it is fine this something personal and you don't won't to talk about it to people you don't know
any way if you had to marry a villian who would it be?
I would marry the wonderfully deadly and fun opal kobai from artemis fowl
I WOULD MARRY DRACO MALFOY HAIL YES! Well is he even a villain? But he was kinda the bad guy during the entire series except for a few parts in the last few books.. BUT STILL he would be considered a villain and Draco is my most favorite character of all time <3 Also, maybe Kronos or something because he took Luke's body and boy, would I just LOVE to be with Luke. Luke was such an amazing character, why did he have to die? -cries- ;(
Avalon wrote: "I WOULD MARRY DRACO MALFOY HAIL YES! Well is he even a villain? But he was kinda the bad guy during the entire series except for a few parts in the last few books.. BUT STILL he would be considered..."not bad but I prefer the plotters and opal was one of the best what about anti-hero? e.g. artemis, mulch, snape and mulgraph from eraggon
by the way finished anybooks you were rereading?
Avalon wrote: "I WOULD MARRY DRACO MALFOY HAIL YES! Well is he even a villain? But he was kinda the bad guy during the entire series except for a few parts in the last few books.. BUT STILL he would be considered..."by the way I would consider him a villian
MY THREE BOYS FROM PJO/HoO! Percy Jackson, Leo Valdez, and Nico di Angelo. Aaaaand um oh! Have you ever read Fablehaven? It's a book for younger people, like for 9-12 year olds. I read it like a few years ago and one of the main characters name is Seth and I absolutely ADORE him <3 And TOBIAS from Divergent -swoons- and and and OMG Will from TID and and and SIMON from TMI and ugh so much more I can't even continue. OMG YES I CAN! FRED(RIP ILY)&GEORGE from HP!! Okay okay I'll stop fangirling now -closed eyes and hums-
Yes I finished all the books I'm rereading. Right now I'm rereading (it's rereading season!) the Book Thief which I know I'm gonna cry about all over again. Also, the Way of Kings is being shipped (finally!) so I'm gonna read that as soon as it comes. Once I finish the Way of Kings I'm going to read the Rangers Apprentice :)
Avalon wrote: "MY THREE BOYS FROM PJO/HoO! Percy Jackson, Leo Valdez, and Nico di Angelo. Aaaaand um oh! Have you ever read Fablehaven? It's a book for younger people, like for 9-12 year olds. I read it like a fe..."I wouldn't consider them anti-heros they are just good guys I would consider people like artemis as an example the villian he may have turned away from anti vilian in the later books and turned hero but he was a bad/good guy in the first few books
Avalon wrote: "Yes I finished all the books I'm rereading. Right now I'm rereading (it's rereading season!) the Book Thief which I know I'm gonna cry about all over again. Also, the Way of Kings is being shipped ..."whats the way of the king?
Kcatty wrote: "Grace wrote: "Umm... I really don't know what to say about this, but I thought these books were for 9-12 year-olds."It really bugs me when people say, "Let's not talk about things like sexual ori..."
Bravo, kcatty
You took all those angry thoughts festering in my head after listening to all these negetive comments, and breathed clarity and life into them.
I think you also cured my writer's block (I have no idea how, but you did.)
Kcatty wrote: "Brenna wrote: "I'm so disappointed! The biggest problem that I have with this move in his books is that his target audience is children. Parent's buy these books for their children because they kn..."In beauty and the beast, technically there's bestiality
The Way of Kings by Brandon Sanderson is a 1000+ page book that Kevin has been bugging me to read.
You wrote: "nico's gay? I heard a rumor but i didn't believe I mean how can you bring people back from the dead and be gay it's impossible. what's his boyfriends name is it jason I would have expected that f..."Oh i'm sorry are you telling me that powerful people/ scary people can't be gay. Because, dude, I respect your opinion and all and I'm probably going off the deep end with this rant, but thinking that gay people are innocent/ weak isn't right. Sexuality has nothing to do with your attributes. It has to do with who you love.
Avalon wrote: "I WOULD MARRY DRACO MALFOY HAIL YES! Well is he even a villain? But he was kinda the bad guy during the entire series except for a few parts in the last few books.. BUT STILL he would be considered..."i wold marry percy jackson
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