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I grunted,thinking why the hell I took the mission of killing her. It landed me in the ancient kingdom. Although I loves it but the new era was better. With all the technology. I descends back to the earth and rubbed my finger which instantly turned my cloth like other people. Why shall I remains disappeared, just let have some fun and he know a woman here. who will do whatever I wants.


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ӍдѕҞa (whichsidewillyouchoose) I had changed in a matter of minutes and was strolling through Rome trying to recall my time here and figure out who i can actually trust and who hated me... This wasn't going to be hard... I smirked at that making my way towards a place that I should be able find someone.....
I was there in minutes and knocked on the door turning around to check to see if I was being followed waiting for them to open it.....
It opened minutes later... A girl with long blonde hair with black steaks in it was standing in the doorway watching me with colour changing eyes... I turned to face her and smile slightly, "Sabrina."


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He was with the girl,again. With whom he was thousands years ago. He had found her and was relieved to see that she also knows him, well that was obvious since she was in past.
He as sitting in her sitting room,seeing all these things after thousands of years. when.there was a knock on the door and he instantly recognized it and walked to the door. "Sabrina you never told me that you have some weird friends ?" he asked,kissing her neck.


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ӍдѕҞa (whichsidewillyouchoose) Sabrina smirked only smirked glancing at him and raised an eyebrow, "I also mentioned that I could kill you all in one swipe and this surprises you?" She asked amused her eyes shifting to an odd white with purple swirled in their depths... She then looked back at Thana who was giving the man a death glare... "Thana love, don't be a stranger come in before Estella screams at us for keeping the door open for too long," she said chuckling as she stepped away from the door opening it wider to allow Thana entree...

I entered the house smiling wearily at Sabrina, "it's good to see you Sabrina, I haven't seen you yet in the current century..." I said trying to ignore the fact he was somehow there... Sabrina gave me a look, "you'll have to ask Estella that part remember not future seeing, but could you go to the colosseum for tonight's thing, you know how I hate it," she almost pleaded and I rolled my eyes, "same old same old Sabrina... Where is Estella?" I asked and Sabrina simply pointed towards the small library within the house... Thanking her I quickly made my way to the red haired and cream coloured eyes of Estella, Sabrina's older cousin...


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ӍдѕҞa (whichsidewillyouchoose) ((ITS THEE SABRINA!))


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((what ??))


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ӍдѕҞa (whichsidewillyouchoose) ((The chick Sabrina, it's my famous character Sabrina!!))


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I chuckles at Sabrina "talking about killing an immoral, I think I haven't taught you well." I said, my arms still wrapped around her. I just snorted at the girl, who's name apparently was Thana. Than I remembered why I was here "I think I also needs to see Estella and thana I think we needs to see her together,since the magic worked on both of us." I said and started walking behind the girl, my eyes boring into her back.


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ӍдѕҞa (whichsidewillyouchoose) "Threes a crowd!" Sabrina called out laughing but followed then also...

I clenched my jaw and fisted my hand feeling his gaze and wanted nothing more to punch the living fuck out of him but held myself back, "Sabrina you need to downgrade your humour Romans aren't that advanced," i mentioned receiving a glare from her and grinned before entering the library my gaze instantly landing on Estella...

Estella looked up from her book when they entered and looked at then with her odd cream coloured eyes smirking the slightest, "Thana, haven't expected to see you for a while," she teased lightly...


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I kept on walking,only smiling at the comment of Sabrina. I, now had one arm wrapped around her but my mind and gaze on the girl in from of me. I knew that she is pissed at me but I don't care,we have to endure each other to get back to our time.

Once we entered the place of Estella I smiles at her,showing my white teeth. "hey Estella,how are you ? It's been thousands year,the last time I saw you." I spoke calmly.


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ӍдѕҞa (whichsidewillyouchoose) I smiled at Estella rolling my eyes, "don't even bother Estella," I muttered causing a laugh to escape Sabrina who easily slipped from his grasp and walked over to her cousin plopping down beside her...

Estella smirked at Thana before glaring at him, "the last time I saw you I promised to stick a fun up your ass and pull the trigger if I ever saw you again," she hissed viciously at him before taking a deep breath and put her book down before looking at them, "you both screwed you realize, this isn't the only time you'll be forced into," she cautioned and rolled her eyes, "and your an idiot to think your able to kill Thana," she stayed directed it at him..


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I rolled my eyes at her before I walked to the nearby sofa, looking at her with a wide grin "last time I told you that you can't kill me. I'm almost an immortal." I scoffed back at her.
My eyes opens wide,staring at her in disbelief,"I didn't screwed up,it was her father,how.much she denies, he would have captured her there's a lot she still don't know and no I wasn't there to kill her. I was saving her ass from getting killed. and please don't say that you're immortal or shit." I confessed for the first time,the reason of my being there.


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ӍдѕҞa (whichsidewillyouchoose) "I wasn't going to get killed!" I shouted at he man whipping around to glare at him backing up so i wasn't so close sliding behind the couch and leaned against it... "I'm the last of my kind it's illegal to actually kill me," I snarled at him..

Sabrina and Estella looked at him raising a brow, "everyone in this room is immortal, aren't they?" Estella said glancing at Sabrina who shook her head shrugging, "depends," was all she said nodding at him


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I threw up my hands in the ear, "maybe you're immortal but they can extract your powers and I was there to save you, your father is possessed by a greater demon." he said with a shrug. and chuckles at her statement "yess their are too much immoral in this room." he said,laughing.


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ӍдѕҞa (whichsidewillyouchoose) I scowled shaking my head before I simply just left the room...

Estella made an amused expression looking at him, "you handled that soo well," she said sarcastically causing Sabrina to laugh standing up, "your hopeless love," she said patting him in the shoulder before going after Thana...
Estella looked up him gesturing him to come closer...


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ӍдѕҞa (whichsidewillyouchoose) *


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I shook my head in frustration "when you're in tree mood to believes than comr to me." I called from behind and kissed the hand of Sabrina "well I'm hopeless with the chicks." I joked and looked at Estella. I puts my elbow on the table and leaned towards her ".what you're going to do with me ?" I said, my lips turned into a smile.


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ӍдѕҞa (whichsidewillyouchoose) Estella slapped him across the face, "you idiot! Your realize that now you and her will be jumping across the timeline most likely altering time??! How could you be so foolish!" She snapped jumping to her feet while Sabrina's laughs could be heard from the other room...


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I touched my cheek and glared at her, my eyes raging with fury. I lift my hand to do a magic trick and turn her into ash but dropped it. "I just don't raises my hands on girls." I hissed. I heard the laughter of Sabrina "I will get back to you." I said and looked at her again "I wasn't interested in changing timelines nor do I cares, Gabriel asked me to save her, I did and besides I didn't wanted to come in past,especially the one where you lives." I retorted.


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ӍдѕҞa (whichsidewillyouchoose) Estella glared, "yeah yeah blah blah, have your pity fest later when I'm not around go here it, and besides your petty magic tricks would have just back fire upon you," she stated coldly and with a shrug before rolling her eyes, "what you were supposed to do or not doesn't matter, the only reason your in Rome is cause that was wear you were and sadly Rome is the only other time I was around in so... Get over it... Cause soon you two with be thrown into another time and shit will happen.... I don't know why nothing had happened to you guys here," she mumbled shaking her head tho she was smirking....

Sabrina and I entered the room again I didn't look at him only at Estella, "there's a commotion happening outside..." I said raising a brow, "I think-" i was able to finish cause something throw into the window shattering it....


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"yeah like I cares about you Estella" I scoffed still glaring at her and than dropping my gaze I sighs "no not petty magic tricks, her father is possesed by an older demon, more older than Lucifer or lilith. and when he attacked her, I just knew one thing I have to save her and than I thought of past, he will need time to find us and than we will be in other, I wanted to be in past, I just didn't wanted to be changing them...." I explained my situation to her. But I was still angry for the slap and was about to say something when someone threw the something at the window "don't tell me that Julius Caesar just got assassinated outside." I said,with a roll of ny eyes and rushed to the other girls.


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ӍдѕҞa (whichsidewillyouchoose) Estella rolled her eyes at his mocking, "yes he's possessed I got that part," she mocked right back before she raised an eyebrow, "why on earth you, of all people would care if an assassin died? And why would an all powerful ancient demon be after a simple hybrid?" She questioned raising an eyebrow tho she didn't expect an answer as she yelped when the glass shattered cutting into her skin she quickly when over to Sabrina and Thana staring at the window....

I walked past them all approaching the injustice that was thrown into the window and froze before bending down to pick of the orb glancing back at them a hard expression on my face, "it's a teleporting device," I said standing up slowly still holding the device...


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My eyes opened a little wide "and what's a teleporting device is doing in here ?" I asked, a little clueless at the thing as I can be. I turned to Estella, my eyes a little narrowed "I have reasons,so does the demon have, but I can't discuss them with you. otherwise you're right,why should I cafe if an assassin dies." I said coolly and shrugged my shoulder.


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ӍдѕҞa (whichsidewillyouchoose) I shrugged and scowled and placed the device on the table strolling out of the room..

Estella looked at him hard, "whatever you say, but just remember, death will always come swiftly," as growled and stormed away leaving Sabrina and him alone in the room with the shattered glass and blood...


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I looked at them like they are crazy, when they were strolling out of the room "I said, I can't discuss here,especially when there's a teleporting device in the room, otherwise you needs to know it." I called back.
When they left the room, I crossed my arms and taps my foot on the ground,looking at Sabrina "what's wrong with your baby cousin ?" I asked, making a low grunting noise in the throat.


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ӍдѕҞa (whichsidewillyouchoose) They both ignored him thoroughly while Sabrina looked at him rolling her eyes at his hopelessness, "she's older then me remember?" She asked rolling her eyes and sighed shaking her head and with a wave of her hand the window was fixed and the pieces of it disappeared before she looked back at him, "hmmm"


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I grunted in frustration, "what you're doing here, not with those attitude bosses. ?" I asked looking at her "well yes she is but atleast you're more mature than her,because you takes me seriously." I teased with a wink and made a gagging noise "what a petty magic you do." I laughs at her before my eyes were narrowed at her, and my one brow raised "what's this 'hmmm' is supposed to mean ?"


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ӍдѕҞa (whichsidewillyouchoose) Sabrina glared at him, "um ones my family duh, you shouldn't judge, and Estella is a sweetheart when you not around," she purred her eyes narrowed at him, "you realize cause you'll be traveling throughout time you'll be seeing me every step of the way, so have fun with that," she snapped giving him a harsh look before rolling her eyes, "no for that exact reason is why she acts more mature," she teased right back before flipping him the finger, "petty? Whatever you say jackass, at least now I don't have to clean up a giant mess and replace the window so..." She gave him a look that wasn't too kind before she smirked shrugging, "I guess you'll have to find out," she stated...


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I rolled my eyes at her obvious glaring to me "ohh don't show attitude, moments before you were going all lovey dovey.." I purred back my words and sighs "Yh I realize that and I have to save her,otherwise I'll be damned, I think everyone will be." I said closing my eyes, they all are thinking that I'm doing it out of fun but I was doing it because I have to protect her. I rolled my eyes "where's the Sabrina I knew, who doesn't snaps at me ?" I asked with raised brows. I started to the direction where the other two have gone "than I don't think I'll find the reason because I have lot of things to do."


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((Paige love.....??))


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ӍдѕҞa (whichsidewillyouchoose) "I was doing nothing of the sort! And honey I invented attitude," Sabrina snapped rolling her eyes before glaring, "there's something going on deeper then everyone even you expect, watch your back Thana might look... Like Thana but she won't hesitate to kill if it means survival, just keep that in mind if you ever have a gun pointed at her head.. And just realize that even tho she means well she doesn't at all show it, take care of her," Sabrina stated stiffly before scoffing, "me not snap at you? Have you been sleeping for the last few years we've known each other?" She asked overly amused rolling her eyes and plopped down watching him leave the room...

Estella and Thana were arguing about the downfall of the first true lucifer...
"He was not assassinated!" Estella yelled at Thana who rolled her eyes, "please, I was party of the attack team, you should be thankful we ended that bastards rule, he would have killed us all if he had his way!" I snapped right back at her...
Estelle glared, "no the original was killed in a torture accident," she snarled as I barked out a laugh, "you idiotic scoundrel! That was the next lucifer not the original!" I correct rolling my eyes at her idiocy...


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He called her from his his behind. "Ohhh yeah I forgot that you invented the attitude and don't worry I'll take care of her, she isn't that dangerous. Maybe she is but I don't care and remember I have came back 2000 years ahead so yes I forgot that you're snappy at me." I said and walked into them who were having a heated argument.

I chuckles at them, "sweethearts you do realize that Lucifer can't be killed. what with your attitude I can't be killed." he said mimicking her voice. "if you think you can't be killed than what you think Lucifer is ?? is he a toddler ?? Ohhh honey he was the first and the most powerful Angel. he is made from light. so get over your attitude, he never dies. He just shifts, there was only one Lucifer, and he is still the same, and he is helping the greater demon to come to earth, and for that he needs a portal, and that's you, your body will act as a portal. and that's what your father was trying to do..who is happily possessed by the demon, to capture your beautiful ass and get over yourself that you can kill him, even God, the supreme one can't kill him, he is the pair of him, like everything have a pair.. light dark, male-female...so so blah blah." he scoffed at both of them,glaring at them.


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ӍдѕҞa (whichsidewillyouchoose) Sabrina don't reply only rolled her eyes huffing out a breath...

They both looked at him like he was a complete idiot, "you realize your sadly mistaken? He can be killed that is why he has heir's like the man in my car back in our time in Rome, yeah the Wee devil won't leave me the fuck alone so you obviously are not aware of the true actions that are happening within hell," I growled my eyes narrowed tho my expression was impassive releasing no emotions within their depths...
Estella nodded, "the first original lucifer the angel he was assassinated but as you say being immortal he was trapped within hell unable to ever find escape, since then heirs have appeared every century or so to replace the one before.... Like this year one has been found and will be hunted... But as you say with Thanatos and this lucifer it wouldn't be surprising since this current lucifer is a rat bastard," she pointed out causing me to rook my eyes knowing she was right:..


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I rolled my eyes at her, she really is annoying at her. I waved my hands at her "ahh whatever you says I believe. since you're so full of yourself that you don't listen to others." I retorted at her and looks at Estella with a little admiration in his eyes for her.
"Atleast someone is understanding me, because that's what I'm trying to say. He can't be killed, but this girl thinks that she is immortal and others are only mortal," I said and plopped down on a couch "but our concern is the demon, since he can't be killed, we can just fight with him and stop him by killing his alliances, and that includes the fake Lucifer, and the mother demon Lilith and there are others too." I explained to them, thinking if they will believe me or not, but that's my job to protect her. After this mission is over I just don't take any thing from Angel and be in their debt,especially Gabriel, she maybe be a beautiful white Angel but she knows ways to manipulate others.


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ӍдѕҞa (whichsidewillyouchoose) I huffed out an irritated breath before strolling out of the room not giving two shits about what he had to say...

Estella listened but only rolled her eyes, "go rant to someone who cares love, I have to be going bigger... Way bigger fish to fry," she purred and disappeared...

I entered the room that Sabrina was in sprawled on the floor looking up at the ceiling...


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I sighs, "ooh than catch the bigger fish,like I cares, I'm only here to save her." I said and groans in frustration when she left the room. If no one is here to talk than let it be, I'm living alone from centuries. Now the life is going to be a little harder since they have to fight and Thana didn't even had listened to him. I ignites a fire ball on my hands and started playing with it.


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ӍдѕҞa (whichsidewillyouchoose) I sighed decided not to bother with her.... I was out the door and clearing the block in less then a minute...

A bit later...
Sabrina ran into the room snapping her finger and the fire evaporated into thin air before she went over to him eyes wide, "she's gone!"


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I was lost in my thoughts and playing with the ball when Sabrina makes it disappear. I frowns at her, but stared at her with wide eyes "you can't be serious." I said and ran to the gate, trying to trace the immortal magic.


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ӍдѕҞa (whichsidewillyouchoose) Sabrina was about to reply she was fucken ass serious but he was already out the door and gone... She rolled her eyes chuckling entering the library again and plopped onto the couch...

Thana was oddly untraceable....


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I sniff the air and trace her down. Other can't trace her but I'm an Ifrit, I can trace any sort of magic. That was how I had traced her down last time too. I follows the scent and stood in front of her "what the hell you're trying to do ? getting your ass trapped by him. if that happens all this world will be gone, and God will surrender too, do you realize what's all this about ? ohh no you didn't because you're too arrogant to think that any thing can happen to you." I hissed at her, my body transformed into an apparition.


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ӍдѕҞa (whichsidewillyouchoose) I stopped in the middle of the street when he appeared in front of me And simply glared at him, "you realize god isn't... That there is no god, only angels, which are annoying as hell," I pointed out stiffly rolling my eyes, "and yes I'm following him to fall into his trap... What do you take me for?!" I snapped viciously at him, "I'm walking around the city so I don't have to be in the same house as you, but look how well that turned out," i snarled angrily beyond pissed, "I can't take care of myself! I don't need a fucken babysitter, I've been born to kill! Now if you don't move I'll take this arrogant foot of mine and shove it up your ass!" I nearly shouted but didn't luckily I kept my cool long enough to do that...


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I rolled my eyes at her,"ohh there is no God ?? well I'm standing in front of a girl,who calls herself a halfgod but don't believe in one." I said sarcastically and crossed the distance, "believe me thick head, there is one,which never showd himself,." I said and than look hard at her "ohh than fall in the trap and don't call me when you will be getting killed, and whole world will be dying, I can change sides,I don't care who's side I'm, and yeah I saw how you can defend yourself,." I said with sarcasm dipping high in my tone when I narrowed my eyes at her "you try that and I'll tear open you, and you will be dead believe me than I don't have to worry about you getting used by him." I snarls and turns to move away, not bothering to talk to her, since she already had pissed me off and she was most annoying person I have ever meet, "do whatever you wants to do,I'm out of your way."


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ӍдѕҞa (whichsidewillyouchoose) I didn't even stay to listen to his rantings, this idiot was infuriating and impossible!! Turning I simply strolled away not wasting my breath discussing shit that he obviously was too stupid to get through his fucken dense head.... I cleared a black by the time he was done laughing to myself since he was ranting to my duplicate..


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I turned back and sore into the sky, totally pissed at her, what she thinks of herself, a totally thick head. I'll go if she needs me, well why should I go there at that time too. I was lost in the thought when there was a bright light and I know what's coming.
"You should be more careful with her, try your best and if you fails,than the first one to die will be you." A heavy voice,of a girl said, in a commanding tone and my features were soon rock hard, "I'm doing my best and I don't take orders." I snapped the the archangel Gabriel.


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ӍдѕҞa (whichsidewillyouchoose) ~~~


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((your turn))


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ӍдѕҞa (whichsidewillyouchoose) ~~~ means continue, i can't do anything...


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"Yes I saw how well you are doing, making her run away, while the orders are to keep an eye on her." Gabriel snapped. Her eyes were narrowed at him, challenging him to say anything, "ok I'll do that." I said in a defeated tone. Than the light disappears as soon as it have appeared.
I sore above the city, looking for her and when I sounds her, I follows her silently,flying above her wrapped in my magic, which allows me to disappear and behave like a soul, which can pass through anything.


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ӍдѕҞa (whichsidewillyouchoose) I strolled through the streets not going anywhere or really thinking at all just walking...


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I kept walking behind her, passing through people, as I'm a soul, following her but it seems like that she is just taking a walk, not really going anywhere.


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