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message 101: by ӍдѕҞa (new)

ӍдѕҞa (whichsidewillyouchoose) I flinched away from him, "don't- don't touch me.." I mumbled shaking so hard I couldn't even keep myself up anymore and just collapsed, "just get away from me, I promised myself I wouldn't feed from mortals anymore," I whispered knowing he had no clue what I was talking about but it didn't matter.... the pain grow twisted and deeper causing me to actually cry out..


message 102: by ӍдѕҞa (new)

ӍдѕҞa (whichsidewillyouchoose) I sucked in a breath unable to move away from him, "what I am, what I do... I need to feed like anyone else.. But I don't get energy or anything from human food or blood in that case," I said flinching, "when I don't receive what I need this happens," I gritted out trying to move away from him pleading he won't ask what she does 'eat'...


message 103: by ӍдѕҞa (new)

ӍдѕҞa (whichsidewillyouchoose) I cursed every god I could think of before I opened my crystal blue eyes and looked at him the agony evident in my depths no matter how much I tired to hide it, "souls, essences of beings, parts of them," I told him waiting for the disgusted or horrified look that was sure to come..


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ӍдѕҞa (whichsidewillyouchoose) **tried


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message 106: by ӍдѕҞa (new)

ӍдѕҞa (whichsidewillyouchoose) I shook my head clasping my eyes again, "no I can't," I mumbled shaking my head, "like succubi, I take the essence during..." I drifted off tensing from another powerful surge of pain, "intercourse, or any sexual interaction.." I stuttered out trying to stop my shaking body from pouncing at him, "I swore off mortals," I hissed through my teeth...


message 107: by ӍдѕҞa (new)

ӍдѕҞa (whichsidewillyouchoose) I shook my head, "addiction, you or myself could get addicted to it... I-I can't risk it," I stammered knowing my will to not take him was weakening and wouldn't hold at best..


message 108: by ӍдѕҞa (new)

ӍдѕҞa (whichsidewillyouchoose) I groaned when I felt him leaning closer.. Dammit it, fuck it::. My thoughts growled my eyes snapped open staring directly at him before I had in flat on his back on the floor sitting on him while I placed my hands against his chest leaning down as my eyes glowed bending down my instincts kicking in as I inhaled deeply at his neck before I grabbed the paper thing I gave him and tossed it away smelling past that scent and nearly moaned.. Holding it back I shoved the fabric of his clothes away from his collar bone where I decided in would start my route... Placing a kiss there I began my trek to his lips while planting kisses on my way, licking sucking and nipping at his skin as I went slowly making my way towards his lips...


message 109: by ӍдѕҞa (new)

ӍдѕҞa (whichsidewillyouchoose) Reaching his lips I circled them with my tongue not touching them beside my breath as I whispered looking at him While I did, "are you sure?" I asked needing him to confirm it before I would proceed while my hands clenched his shirt tightly..


message 110: by ӍдѕҞa (new)

ӍдѕҞa (whichsidewillyouchoose) Seeing his nod and a new surge of pain ripple through me I nip at his bottom lip before seizing claim to it... Closing my eyes I kissed him deeply not wanting to admit I liked it.. A lot.. Before I starting sucking in pinning his chest down soon it wouldn't jerk up as I tugged a part of his essence out to his mouth pulling away from his lips while sucking in what looked to be faint blue swirls that came from his mouth before I captured his lips again taking in the little I needed before locking it in and pushed his back finally I broke the kiss pulling away till I was just sitting on him..


message 111: by ӍдѕҞa (new)

ӍдѕҞa (whichsidewillyouchoose) Breathing deeply I looked at him, "are you okay?" Besides the fact he just got part of his soul sucked out but oh well... He did it to himself, but I continued sitting on him.. Partly cause I was too exhausted to get off and.. Well.. I just didn't want to..


message 112: by ӍдѕҞa (new)

ӍдѕҞa (whichsidewillyouchoose) I nodded relaxing slightly training my glowing eyes on his face before lower... I stopped and looked back at his face feeling his hand at my side lightly staring at him with a raised eyebrow..


message 113: by ӍдѕҞa (new)

ӍдѕҞa (whichsidewillyouchoose) I swallowed hard and hesitantly went to get off him as the glowing in my eyes died down..


message 114: by ӍдѕҞa (new)

ӍдѕҞa (whichsidewillyouchoose) I froze slowly sitting back on him raising an eyebrow at him, "and why should I not?" I asked in a hushed tone placing my hands between his head bending over slightly revealing a little too much cause of the rips in the dress..


message 115: by ӍдѕҞa (new)

ӍдѕҞa (whichsidewillyouchoose) "And should I do as you wish?" I asked slightly amused while my breath tickling across his skin at how close I was my gaze locked with his..


message 116: by ӍдѕҞa (new)

ӍдѕҞa (whichsidewillyouchoose) I rolled my eyes gaining slight control of herself but soon realized that his soul tasted different, not pure and clean like a mortals but more darker.... I looked at him my brows furrowing grinning as I hovered my mouth over his releasing a small moan before pushing away shifting to get off him...


message 117: by ӍдѕҞa (new)

ӍдѕҞa (whichsidewillyouchoose) Getting to my feet I glance at him, "thank you," I told him with a curt nod before I slid past him towards my room knowing a shower was calling me..


message 118: by ӍдѕҞa (new)

ӍдѕҞa (whichsidewillyouchoose) Entering my room I head to the washroom going in I close the door start up the shower and stripped off the dress taking my hair out if the bun and stepped into the shower letting the warm drops to release me of my tension before I began cleaning myself mentally locating my jumpsuit and praying he would be fine...


message 119: by ӍдѕҞa (new)

ӍдѕҞa (whichsidewillyouchoose) Finishing the shower I turned off the water exited, dried off, wrapped a towel around myself and headed towards the box getting out my new jumpsuit and changed quickly into it refilling it with my things before putting on my black boots and exited my room looking at Dan, "your not mortal... I mean a human," I said breaking the silence..


message 120: by ӍдѕҞa (new)

ӍдѕҞa (whichsidewillyouchoose) I rolled my eyes, "thank you for informing me," I muttered sarcastically and was suddenly pinning him against the wall glaring at him, "if you know your not human then what are you?" I hissed at him..


message 121: by ӍдѕҞa (new)

ӍдѕҞa (whichsidewillyouchoose) I glared at him, "Kane told me why lucifer wanted you dead," I replied clenching my teeth together, "your the heir to lucifer's throne," I hissed through my teeth feeling an odd sense of fear since I... I shoved that thought away glaring..


message 122: by ӍдѕҞa (new)

ӍдѕҞa (whichsidewillyouchoose) I swore wanting to scream bloody murder at him but instead I pushed away whipping around and threw a dagger as hard as I could at the door... It literally went straight through and disappeared out in the hallway, "do you realize what that means?" I hissed whipping around to face him glaring...


message 123: by ӍдѕҞa (new)

ӍдѕҞa (whichsidewillyouchoose) I slapped him across the face my temper flaring, "jackass! Seriously?!" I nearly screamed before I whipped around and marched towards the door stopping with my hand on the handle not looking at him I say, "it means I either have to kill you or protect you... Cause what I am..." I drifted off shaking my head turning to look at him, "Thana, its the female version of Thanatos, god of the dead...." I shook my head before opening the door not finishing it.... "Since your lucifer's heir... Everyone will be out to kill you.... Everyone.... It used to be... My species that took care of the new heir.... But I am the last and I just can't..." I said and went to walk out...


message 124: by ӍдѕҞa (new)

ӍдѕҞa (whichsidewillyouchoose) I pressed my back against the wall sucking in a breath as my nose flared in anger my eyes narrowed, "helpless case or not I was born to kill," I hissed feeling all too aware of his body against mine, "and I wouldn't press to close," I whispered smirking, "unless you don't kind getting stabbed," I snapped easily deciphering a plan... "And I only get hired to kill unless I go rogue... Then I kill anyone I wish... Sadly at the moment I'm In between," I said calmly before glaring, "and you are a helpless care Danny boy, you don't know what beings are willing to do to kill someone as important as you."


message 125: by ӍдѕҞa (new)

ӍдѕҞa (whichsidewillyouchoose) I glared at him before I punched him hard in the gut, "never said I wanted to," I hissed before I seeped into the wall appearing on the other side and in one fluid motion i lunged towards the wall where my dagger was implanted, grasping my dagger i ripped it out of the wall tucked it into my boot and started for the stairs...


message 126: by ӍдѕҞa (new)

ӍдѕҞa (whichsidewillyouchoose) I rolled my eyes, "coming to conclusions aren't we?" I said glancing back at him as I entered the stairway, "goddesses don't suck souls," i purred before jumping off the railing of the stairs free falling until I landed in a crouching position straightened and walked over to the door opening it and strolled out heading for the exit...


message 127: by ӍдѕҞa (new)

ӍдѕҞa (whichsidewillyouchoose) I whipped around to face him glaring, "get off my back," I hissed, "I'm not here to kill you any more," I snapped, "so just leave me the fuck alone," I snarled before turning on my heel and walked over to my car...


message 128: by ӍдѕҞa (new)

ӍдѕҞa (whichsidewillyouchoose) I stopped instantly my hands clenching into fists not looking at him, "you played me like a fool.... You know why I didn't kill you that moment days ago, not because of anything you said, not because I was curious to know why he wanted you dead... I didn't kill you because I couldn't," I said my voice quiet looking straight at my car, "I imagined you dead at my feet and nearly threw up, disgusted with the image.. Which doesn't happen, ever with my species... Never," I mumbled shaking my head before I went to continue walking towards my car..


message 129: by ӍдѕҞa (new)

ӍдѕҞa (whichsidewillyouchoose) I went around the driver side my hand grasping the handle, "feelings are nonexistent to me," i muttered opened the door and slid in closing it behind me a took a deep breath shaking my head as I stuck my keys into the ignition and turned starting it up...


message 130: by ӍдѕҞa (new)

ӍдѕҞa (whichsidewillyouchoose) Ignoring my seat belt I clench the drivers wheel clenching it so tight my knuckles turned white before I shifted my crystal blue eyes on him in a glare leaning slightly towards him, "I only kill or protect, which ever I'm hired for... And i just don't have time for feelings, even if I were able to have feelings," I hissed before pulling back, "now move or I'll shot you in the dick," I snarled.


message 131: by ӍдѕҞa (new)

ӍдѕҞa (whichsidewillyouchoose) **i'll shot your dick. >.< fail

I looked At him impassively, "and if I do t have feelings for you?" I asked raising an eyebrow as i tapped my fingers against the wheel..


message 132: by ӍдѕҞa (new)

ӍдѕҞa (whichsidewillyouchoose) I glared, "arrogant much?" I snarled my foot twitching on the gas, "now since it seems you refuse to move I'll have to shot your dick... I hope you weren't planning on having children," I said pouting as I flicked out a gun and pointed it At him..


message 133: by ӍдѕҞa (new)

ӍдѕҞa (whichsidewillyouchoose) I smirked right back, "I'll still get great pleasure from shooting you," I simply purred a wicked gleam in my eyes as I suddenly stepped on the gas causing the car to launch backward before I lifted my foot off the gas causing it to jerk to an awkward stop, "either you fuck off and move or you can get in the car," I snarled through clenched teeth glaring at him..


message 134: by ӍдѕҞa (new)

ӍдѕҞa (whichsidewillyouchoose) Impatiently I reached over him which caused me to practically lie on his lap as I slammed the door shut behind him before I straightened up silently cursing him in Latin and without waiting for him to buckle up I stepped into the gas whipped the car around threw it in drive and sped out of the parking lot onto the open road... Well kinda.. Some cars honked at them but I ignored it having a destination in mind while I wondered why the hell I offered him to get into the bloody car... Tho I especially loved this car.... I smirked at the thought before speeding up zigzagging through the city pressing a button while I was at it...


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message 137: by ӍдѕҞa (new)

ӍдѕҞa (whichsidewillyouchoose) "Why? How? When? Where?" I demanded not caring how he answered those questions I just wanted answers and I wanted them now.. Can't blame me I did just sucked out a part of his soul.... My grip tightened on the wheel at that though my muscle in my jaw twitched and my stomach churned with..... I shook it off focusing on the road driving quickly since it was going to he a long flight....


message 138: by ӍдѕҞa (new)

ӍдѕҞa (whichsidewillyouchoose) I glanced briefly at him glaring thinking of all the vile vicious thing I could snarl at him before looking away feeling better but I still wanted to smack this smirk off his face, "how, how did you know, why, why the fuck did you play me.. Or was that just for your amusement, when, when did you realize what you were," I asked not taking my gaze off the road no matter what he thought until he was sitting on lucifer's throne and lucifer was dead Dan could still die...


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ӍдѕҞa (whichsidewillyouchoose) I simply nodded, "so you say you know everything, then you know what I am.. No?" I asked turning onto the lane that headed to the highway, "and you didn't answer my why question," I said stiffly slamming on the gas since I wanted to get to our destination in quickest time possible..


message 141: by ӍдѕҞa (new)

ӍдѕҞa (whichsidewillyouchoose) I rolled my eyes chuckling as I shook my head, "part, only half goddess..." I said amused, "my father was Thanatos, but my mother a death dealer.... You know what those are right?" I asked not taking my eyes off the road nodding at his point, since I had done that before to victims... And of course they'd be dead afterwards... Oh well...


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message 144: by Vanessa Eden (new)

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message 146: by ӍдѕҞa (new)

ӍдѕҞa (whichsidewillyouchoose) "Bull, death dealers are way before you time, extinct and never talked about, I know all you know about them is what I've told you," I stated passing cars and sped down the road, "airplane or ferries?" I asked not caring if he would he wondering why i was asking..


message 147: by ӍдѕҞa (new)

ӍдѕҞa (whichsidewillyouchoose) I nodded swerving the car into that lane making plans as I drove to the nearest airport.... We arrived in record timing, and I didn't even bother conversing with him... Soon I parked the car and slid out walking around to the back I open the trunk to grab my things slinging the bag onto my shoulder before slamming it shut walking over to the front of my car touching the hood with the palm of my hand..


message 148: by ӍдѕҞa (new)

ӍдѕҞa (whichsidewillyouchoose) I looked at him waiting for him to get out of the car, since I loved this car I was teleporting it to the destination cause I refused to drive any other car... When he finally got out the veins on the arm that was attached to the hand placed flat on the hood darkened before the car seemed to sink Into the ground and disappear, my veins returned to normal and I turned to look at him, "now Dan, are you going to continue to follow me around or are you gonna leave?" I asked impassively...


message 149: by ӍдѕҞa (new)

ӍдѕҞa (whichsidewillyouchoose) I sighed rolling my eyes before brushing past him and towards the building... Getting into the building I glanced around taking a deep breath and quickly decided that I would just get onto the plane without doing everything else... I walked over to check when the flight she wanted was..


message 150: by ӍдѕҞa (new)

ӍдѕҞa (whichsidewillyouchoose) Seeing it was leaving in a couple minutes...
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Soon I was sitting on the plane leaning back against the seat and closed my eyes..


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