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ӍдѕҞa (whichsidewillyouchoose) I paused opening my eyes and glanced over at him frowning, "why did you let me take some of you soul?" I asked suddenly..


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ӍдѕҞa (whichsidewillyouchoose) "I would have adjusted to that level of pain eventually, it wasn't mandatory," I stated examining his expression before glancing up, "besides I could have waited a bit before I left to seduce a man into having sex with me..." I said with a shrug watching him from the corner of my eyes..


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ӍдѕҞa (whichsidewillyouchoose) I couldn't help but smirk since I of course wouldn't do that... But it was a funny thought before I closed my eyes again relaxing into the seat, "so are you always this colourful?" I asked of course being sarcastic about the wore colourful...


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ӍдѕҞa (whichsidewillyouchoose) "Wow that's just great, being followed around my a lifeless ass... Who would have thought that fortune teller would have been right," I drawled dramatically sighing while I kept my expression impassive tho Inside I was laughing my ass off.... But show no emotions... That's the code.... I stiffened the slightest squinting my eyes open my gaze flicking over to him..


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ӍдѕҞa (whichsidewillyouchoose) **by

I sighed closing my eyes gain and leaned back getting comfortable so I could sleep, "I think I liked you better when you were swearing your head off at me," I muttered.


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ӍдѕҞa (whichsidewillyouchoose) Sifting again so I was slightly curled up, "wake me up when the flights over," I mumbled quietly before slipping off into unconsciousness...
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Hour or so later..
I stirred before jolting awake sucking in a deep breath reminding myself not to draw a blade as I glanced around figuring out quickly that we were minutes from the destination and relaxed slightly..


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ӍдѕҞa (whichsidewillyouchoose) I looked at him my eyes slightly narrowed, "I know that, I am not an idiot.. It's just a reflex," I mumbled rubbing my head slightly stretching slightly as I yawned clamping a hand over my mouth before glancing around, "we'll be landing soon," I muttered more to myself them him blinking before stiffening..


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ӍдѕҞa (whichsidewillyouchoose) *


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ӍдѕҞa (whichsidewillyouchoose) ~~
In minutes the plane had landed and everyone was hurrying off... I watched them silently before finally standing up and glancing at Dan before I headed towards the exit and descended smirking as I headed towards the parking lot to find my car..


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ӍдѕҞa (whichsidewillyouchoose) Finding my car where I thought it would be I couldn't help but grin patting the good as I walked around to the driver seat and hopped in again ignoring the seat belt as I glanced over waiting for him, "so have you figured out where we are?" I asked raising an eyebrow as I watched him entering the car...


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ӍдѕҞa (whichsidewillyouchoose) I smirked looking ahead as I put the car into reverse swinging out of the spot and then quickly put it in drive glancing at him briefly, "we're in Rome," i said then looking ahead I quickly drove out of the parking lot and towards the destination I had in mind...


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ӍдѕҞa (whichsidewillyouchoose) "My father called me to meet him," I replied zipping through traffic but began slowing down when I neared population, "and I'm banned from Greece so we alway meet in Rome," I said slightly amused..


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ӍдѕҞa (whichsidewillyouchoose) Turning sharply I slowed driving slowly through Rome as I headed towards the colosseum, "so Dan how do you feel about meeting death himself?" I asked glancing at him..


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ӍдѕҞa (whichsidewillyouchoose) **


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ӍдѕҞa (whichsidewillyouchoose) ?


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ӍдѕҞa (whichsidewillyouchoose) ((Okay... Have fun cause school always is ;). ))

I chuckled softly parking a block or so from the colosseum, "yup, its Inevitable," I mumbled shaking my head as I got out of the parked car, "but being completely serious I'd suggest you your around I'll find you when I'm done.. Understood..?" I stated..


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ӍдѕҞa (whichsidewillyouchoose) *


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ӍдѕҞa (whichsidewillyouchoose) I waited for his response wondering if he'd do as I say or follow me...


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ӍдѕҞa (whichsidewillyouchoose) ***


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ӍдѕҞa (whichsidewillyouchoose) ?


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((o.k I'm here))


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ӍдѕҞa (whichsidewillyouchoose) ((Hayy Tanny thanks so much..... Erm I'll post something and then you could figure out a wayy to get your character in there?? >~<))


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ӍдѕҞa (whichsidewillyouchoose) I rolled my eyes and sighed locking up my amazing car before i turned and stalked off towards the Colosseum knowing that it was never a smart idea to keep Thanatos waiting.... Strolling down the sidewalk I glanced around suspiciously not trusting a soul and had an odd suspicion that I was in fact being followed but I couldn't pin point who, I quickly looked all around me before whipping back to face front my hand on the hilt of my dagger that was luckily glamoured so no mortal could see...


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((crap I never show your this comment.....or it would have been easy for me....I'm such a lazy ass :(:(:(:o:o:o))

Ifrit was standing against a pillar,hidden from any eyes, well from those eyes.which can see demons. He was an ifrit and named himself out of his own race. He licked his lips,seeing the girl,he had been asked to kill. She was walking towards the colosseum and he have wait until everything is clear. He can kill her in an instant for that matter.


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((ok so I made my character an Ifrit... they are infernal genie.....so as with genies they can be wicked or good, so I made him a bad one :)))


message 176: by ӍдѕҞa (new)

ӍдѕҞa (whichsidewillyouchoose) I glanced around scowling not liking the feeling at all as I quickly tightened my white hair which was in a high pony tail before turning back at the direction I was walking in easily sneaking past the guards guarding the fence climbed up and jumped soundlessly down strolling into the ancient colosseum keeping my crystal blue eyes on watch...


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I followed her into the building, hovering above her in the sky, since I can easily fly and do anything. I flicked my fingers and a magical bubble appears,capsuling me in it, which can't be penetrated easily,It's an ancient magic,which today's hunters can't break and waits for her father to depart,so that he don't have to kill an unwanted target.


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ӍдѕҞa (whichsidewillyouchoose) I walked around the huge ancient place looking for my father who oddly enjoyed making a large grande entrance.... But there was no sign of him... I frowned in confusion glancing around in a circle before I felt something in a certain section of the colosseum and began heading in that direction drawing my blade as I entered the crumbling part of the massive stadium...


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Thanatos had sensed something really bad but wasn't able to find, so he just disappeared as a precaution to keep him and waited for his daughter. Her saw her coming,but remained disappeared for her eyes. She approached him, stones crunching under her feet. Smiling,he was behind her, wwwand formed again from his mist form to human. "you're late." he said from behind her.


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ӍдѕҞa (whichsidewillyouchoose) I whipped around blade at his throat before I realized who it was and backed away putting down my hand with the blade, "you should know better then to sneak up on me father," i said but didn't bother putting my blade away...


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I snorted, looking hard at my daughter. My gaze penetrating deep into her soul "and you know me better than this, a demon waiting outside in your car" I said in a bitter tone,bitter enough to make her flinch. I waved my hand and the blade from her hand flew away.

Ifrit kept on hovering above them, still invisible and invincible from their eyes.


message 182: by ӍдѕҞa (new)

ӍдѕҞa (whichsidewillyouchoose) I flinched at his words glaring, "and when have I ever cared about what you've told me to do? And he's not exactly a demon father," I spat not even glancing as my dagger got tossed away I simply caused it to dissolve and reappear in its sheath, "now why do you wish me here father? You realize I am actually busy," I hissed angrily crossing my hands over my chest narrowing my eyes at him and waited...


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I glared back at her, face turned into a snarl "right he is Angel,who is supposed to be the heir of Lucifer ?" I said,my voice thick with sarcasm and my eyes still boring into hers "I wants you here because you're trying to change the nature, you're a half God and that's why you can't be with an heir to Lucifer, do you realize how highly It's forbidden," I spat back at her.


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ӍдѕҞa (whichsidewillyouchoose) I didn't even flinch at his vicious tone rolling my we knowing I should have ditched my stupid year of talking to dad... Cause they are always so colourful... I glared at him, "and are you forgetting that I'm also part death dealer? I am supposed to be protecting him from gods and other demons, but if you haven't noticed I haven't been exactly doing that since I have found out," I snapped at him, "need to lecture me more about what's legal or not? And need I remind you I am an assassin... I'm pretty sure that's highly illegal," I hissed at him rolling my eyes again...


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My face turned into snarl, remembering how adamant she can be at times, which is usually most of the times "yes you're a death dealer and you were supposed to kill him, not protect, don't bother to lie to me" I snapped back at her, jaw clenched shut and eyes darting back and everywhere. "yes you're an assassin but of demons and dark dealers, because you're a part god, I think I have to teach you some lessons" I said, enchanting something. An ancient spell.


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ӍдѕҞa (whichsidewillyouchoose) I glared at him seeing the fury twisting his features... And this is why I killed for a living... And it wasn't for his Benefit being the god of death and all... Sometimes i wished that I could murder him myself, "and if I recall you didn't place that order lucifer did, and instincts overrules jobs, whether you like it or not, and its not like I'm protecting him!" i spat viciously at him trying to control my anger and shuddered at the look he was giving before glaring, "You disowned me remember?? You can't teach me a lesson," i stated glaring at him before I stiffened stepping away from him sensing the magic behind his ancient words knowing it was going to be bad I turned to run...


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He kept on enchanting words,not bothering himself to reply and broke the spell. When he was finished,he opened his eyes but she was running away from him. "Yes but once a death order place it can't be overruled. I may have disowned you but blood remains the same." he said and flicked his hand which caused a light to travel to her. it will seize her souls and I can keep her with myself.
Ifrit was seeing everything and when I saw the light and heard the words,I floated down to her,because if her soul is taken than I will be dead and stepping in front of her I shoot my own magic and it caused an explosion and than there was like somethin is sucking them in.


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ӍдѕҞa (whichsidewillyouchoose) I paused with his words whipped around and glared standing my ground, "in your books not mine," I hissed stiffening when i saw it coming at me but when something jumped out of no where and counteracted the curse causing an explosion of light I bent slightly over twisting my body to my vision from it before I felt whoever had counteracted it and myself being pulled into an unknown force before being sucked in completely.... Wind whipped and things scratched at me before I landed hard... On somebody.... My eyes snapped opened to see the person that stopped my dad from doing whatever the hell he was doing and quickly pulled out my dagger pressing it to his throat hard glancing around quickly before back down.... That's when I did a double take... We were in the colosseum still but it wasn't on the brick of crumbling to pieces.... It was new and filled with people..........


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He knew what had happened and he was silently cursing himself. It was on of the worst feeling of being sucked by time and when he was not feeling that overwhelming sensation in his body he realized that she is on top of him.
Before I can say anything she had her knife pressed to his throat,"I saved your soul from getting being slaved and that's how you treats me,?" I smirked at her, but I didn't needed to look around and see where we are, since the suction has started I knew where we will land "welcome to the ancient Rome sweetheart" he said in an amused tone, his eyes glinting with pleasure.


message 190: by ӍдѕҞa (new)

ӍдѕҞa (whichsidewillyouchoose) "I have no soul you idiot, he would have taken any fricken soul I had eaten lately, so they should he saying thank you not i," I growled low and viciously under my breath still glancing around with a low groan looking back at him narrowing my crystal blue eyes, "I know where we are," I growled harshly rolling my eyes slightly, "I'm not an idiot.... I just never thought I've ever have to endure this place ever again," I muttered before gaining my bearings and pinned him to the ground eliminating his everyday of escape, "now why were you there when you were?" I demanded ignoring what was going on around us....


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"Everyone have a soul, you do realize that. even if the half goddess" I retorted,rolling my eyes back "do you think that I can be afraid of you ?" I asked amused by her reaction to the place, I sounds myself chuckling "well neither I imagined that I have to witness the death of Julius Caesar again" I replied and melted away from her touch and soon was floating in the air "you think you can trap me ?? it happens with others but not, although I can answer you, that I was given contract to kill you" I replied casually, dismissing her with a wave of my hand.


message 192: by ӍдѕҞa (new)

ӍдѕҞa (whichsidewillyouchoose) I sighed at the mans or rather things stupidity, "I'm also part death dealer... Which means I have no soul," I retorted not bothering to explain I technically only have half of a soul but its to withered to mean anything.. And at his next comment I smiles sinisterly this guy was obviously an complete idiot... How could he actually assassinate someone that literally cannot die? Before I rolled my eyes, "no one wanted that ever," I muttered to myself and as soon as he melted away I was up and I had slinked away disappearing within the crowd if Romans having already known he would get out and explain his being there... He was kinds obvious...


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He chuckles and saw her disappearing into the crowd. He simply follows her,passing through three crowd, well actually I just simply ran through them,since I can be like a soul,who can pass through objects.
She was outside, almost running and he soon.was behind her."you're a death dealer doesn't means that you don't have a soul, forgot everyone is made from breath of God, even the half god likes you. so when next time you will take pride on yourself thinks that you can be as invincible as you. abaddon and Michael can be killed too even Lucifer, so what you thinks of yourself ?" he retorded and was standing in front of her.


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ӍдѕҞa (whichsidewillyouchoose) I simply stopped when he caught him smirking, "I only have half of a soul, and when I get killed my soul does it simply goes to Tartarus and I come back, why do you think I haven't died with the rest of my kind?" I asked in a purr not bothering to turn to face him as I stabbed my dagger deep into his gut my ups curling up into a wicked smile before I bolted.... Running right into a roman guard.....


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I snorted in response. The girl is surely clueless and don't know shit about herself. So instead of arguing with her I just waved my hand. But when she stabbed me I growls at the contact of metal,although it doesn't even feels anything. I carried like a wind and stopped just near her, who was standing in front of a guard "I think you forgot your dagger.". I hissed sharply in her ear.


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ӍдѕҞa (whichsidewillyouchoose) I simply ignored the idiot who thought he knew me, he was wrong the only reason I still lived was cause I was half god... I blinked innocently up at the guard, "sir please help me, if you do I might be able to give you something in return," i purred dragging a finger down his breast plate.. The roman grinning sinisterly nodding as he began leading me away I followed eager to get away from the imbecile...


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I tossed my hairs back and turned away from the arrogant half god, who think she is invincible. even when Gabriel isn't. "well enjoy yourself with the walking STD" I snapped and started floating away from her.


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ӍдѕҞa (whichsidewillyouchoose) I sighed in relief when he began to leave ad when the guard turned to lead me away I easily dashed away deep into the crowd wondering how I would get out of Rome... And into the present..


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I was up in sky and seeing almost all of the Rome, at the top of his glory. No matter what time it was I still remembers and likes the old Rome. It was an inspiration, that one small city and control the politics of the world. I tossed myself out of my thoughts,as my eyes landed on the girl, it was easy to recognize her,since it was the unique clothing they both were wearing and she also reeks of magic. But I didn't bothered myself, when she will need me than I'll go because she will, it was my magic which landed us here.


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ӍдѕҞa (whichsidewillyouchoose) I stalking throughout Rome with a smile oddly placed on my face, having always loved this ancient kingdom.... Ignoring the looks I received from the people I Headed to the nearest market place to purchase some clothing to fit in knowing I could and would be killed viciously cause of it...


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