Darklight (Darklight #1)

by Bella Forrest

“This isn’t your fight, Lyra,” he replied, staring at me with dead eyes. “You’ve helped us, but do you really think you have some kind of say in this?”

Uh, yeah. They just threw away their jobs and lives to help rescue you. There's nothing to go back to but prison.

I threw myself up against him, wrapping my arms around his neck, and pressed my lips to his.

Whoa! Whoa! Anybody got a rape whistle? ... Okay, not something to joke about, but seriously, is this the time and place for finally throwing this kiss into the book?

But now I knew, we both knew, that what we felt was real, and there was good to it, not just pain.

Somebody get this girl a restraining order!

"Um… guys?" Sike murmured from behind Dorian. "Hate to butt in, but we've got, ah… things to sort out…"

Just go with it. No better time for a make-out session than right in the middle of a group discussion.

“There really is more,”

There 'are' more. This is in reference to the other vampires. But why bother editing your books when you have the Kindle community to do it for you?

With my mind pulled in so many directions,

You think your mind is off in different directions? Try reading this book!

Everything I’d believed about the Bureau, my life’s work, was a lie. Uncle Alan’s cold, indifferent voice filtering through the air vent filled my mind for the umpteenth time. I felt hollowed out, my internal truth evaporated. I knew nothing about the Bureau at all, and maybe I never had. I felt used.

Two theories. 1, your uncle limps because he ripped the barrier between the planes. 2, they ripped the barrier trying to nuke the vampires' home.