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Holdstock's review ::
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Coffman's review ::
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I should've been quicker to catch that. But pretty much all of these reasonable prices are suspect.

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All the same, I know what you mean when you say what you say. There are several typical Dream elements which have taken second chair to other (I want more of William the Blind!), newer stuff. But remember, his conception of these Dreams has changed over the past 25 years, especially with no new Dream since 2001.

I disagree! I think that the page=layout he developed here allows him to return to that ever=ballooning sentence of YBARA ("I kept going over each sentence, seeing how much more I could pack into them" --WTV, paraphrased comment about YBARA); especially in the Nez Perce sections (the White sections are pretty clipped, though). It's just that the sub- and subordinate clauses appear more discrete due to the layout, but the sentences just keep rolling and rolling...

I don't know my Whitman well enough!! And a Yes! to Jonathan's note about Wood, which may well be a more controlling locus than I'd noticed so far ; I'll keep my ears peeled.

I wish him well. His novel (pub'd in 2005) has 280 gr=ratings and 38 reviews. A year after publication, Bill's Last Stories has 95 gr=ratings and 32 reviews. I foresee The Dying Grass eventually slightly outstripping the popularity of Argall :: 152 gr=ratings, 26 reviews.
Meanwhile, his claim that "I think I can go further into their world while keeping a respectful distance than any other writer" may well be true. That 'respectful distance' is what I've called in the Dreams, Vollmann's allowing his characters 'space' (by using the epic mode of characterization).

I kind of wish that Whitman had accompanied us a little further into the novel. Obviously, Bill's writing from source texts and borrowing phrasings from them ; but either there are too many diverse source texts (rather than a single ruling text like the Relations) or else their form of expression doesn't differ so strongly from our own early 21st=cent forms that they would strike us as so remarkable. And Bill has said that he had a hell of a time coming up with sources peculiar to the Nez Perces themselves ; so there's probably a lot more of his own imagination in writing them than there may have been in other Dreams?

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Good to hear that the coal/nuke book is getting closer to finished. From The Cloud-Shirt, an excerpt was pub'd a while back -- http://www.grandstreet.com/gsissues/g... But I've still heard next to nothing about The Poison-Shirt beyond Bill's early indication :: "concerning the Puritans vs. King Philip of Rhode Island," or Captain Cook's voyage to Hawaii. [17th or 18th cent.]
Can't wait to hear what the other two novels will concern themselves with. How You Are maybe one of them? [fingers crossed]

Well, yes, but two voices -- the epic mode of the Indian sections and the oral mode of the Bostons. But what I mean is the sort of echo of another text that has recurred within the various Dream Texts. That one thing I thought the Dreams were doing was bringing back lost voices, letting them out to play again. [but I had difficulty getting The Rifles into my schema too]


I'm missing the Dream=specific voice -- The Ice-Shirt had the saga voice ; F&C had the Relations voice. But I miss that part in The Dying Grass where William the Blind would have wept over a newly acquired text which would mold the whole of the novel.

"'The Dying Grass' Refuses to be Coralled"
http://www.popmatters.com/review/1959...
The thing about technology and the Dreams I recall from some self=description on Bill's part. But it's not in the programmatic sketch included in Eden ; must have been a comment in an interview. In The Ice-Shirt, for instance, iron (the be-all-end-all of technology) plays a pivotal role ; as with rifles in Crows. Kind of thing. The Cloud-Shirt is going to be about that other be-all-end-all technology -- coal/oil/nukes.

"William Vollmann's 'Dying Grass': Heartfelt, panoramic retelling of Indian Wars"
http://www.philly.com/philly/entertai...

"William T. Vollmann's new novel on the Nez Perce is 1,376 pages long"
http://www.oregonlive.com/books/index...
And discussion question ::
I had understood that the Dreams are about a clash of civilization kind of thing; and specifically the role played by technologies. But, aside from the Gatling, I'm not picking up what technology is the focus of The Dying Grass. Any thoughts?

I'm thinking its (finally!) a return to what he did in YBARA, which is to return to his sentences over and over again in order to pack in more and more. The various line breaks, indentations, etc allow him to pack in more subordinate and juxtaposed clauses while keeping the sentence open. I think it's a pretty cool technique for creating constantly ballooning sentences ; better than all those {[()]}s.
I'm also, in general, again reminded that Vollmann does not come from the tradition of the English Realist Novel. Much more so the sagas and epics and things like Genji, and Lautréamont.

I'm still out in the cold too. But I'm having trouble believing that it's the best Dream ; the others were all so good!
