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Mar 03, 2013 05:55PM

60243 Pfft, yeah that's an awesome idea. :))) Max is gonna be like, "Ohhhh lawd..." XD
Market (153 new)
Feb 26, 2013 04:43PM

60243 {That sounds like that woman who walks down my street all the time honking into her phone. XD }
Castle (1188 new)
Feb 24, 2013 02:28PM

60243 {Secret. XD }
Castle (1188 new)
Feb 24, 2013 12:47PM

60243 His brow furrowed with concern. He pulled her hair away from her perspiring face and murmured comforting words in her ear, letting a touch of his soothing drone sneak into his voice.
Castle (1188 new)
Feb 24, 2013 09:58AM

60243 Arms around her, Max layed in the silent darkness, staring at the ceiling. He had to sleep. He needed the energy. He was used to keeping a close eye on the predicted phases of the moon, and tomorrow night it wouldn't be full, but extremely close. Another chance, but he had to do it tomorrow. I'm sorry, my Bella. He tried in vain to let sleep come.
Castle (1188 new)
Feb 24, 2013 07:44AM

60243 Max nodded, eyes softening as he layed down beside her. He reached out and stroked her cheek gently.
Castle (1188 new)
Feb 23, 2013 08:11PM

60243 {Aw, tanks. :D I've got a soft spot for love sick, heartbroken guys, as some could tell you.}

Jink groaned internally, looking around at the many humans in distaste. Max's whole low-profile enigma was going completely out the window. He raced through the kitchen, catching up with the girl and gazing up at her. His back rose threateningly, and he bared his sharp teeth at her.
Castle (1188 new)
Feb 23, 2013 07:03PM

60243 I won't let you die. I won't. He had already made his decision. Nothing she said would change his mind. Still, he didn't protest again, sitting in silence at the edge of her bed.
Castle (1188 new)
Feb 23, 2013 06:32PM

60243 Another pang in his chest. "No," he choked out. "Bella, please..."
Castle (1188 new)
Feb 23, 2013 05:49PM

60243 "It was draining, what I did." With every word, the pain in his eyes grew. So little time. "It took so much of me. And I didn't even cure you. I didn't have the strength." He spoke through the knot in his throat. "But the moon is full, and it gives me more energy. I can save you this time." He gently tipped her head up to look her in the eyes, to memorize her beautiful face. "I'll hold on long enough to get rid of the cancer. I'll make sure you're healthy before I..." His last words were a whisper. "Before I die."
Castle (1188 new)
Feb 23, 2013 05:06AM

60243 Ducky wrote: "(YES.)

Lynne let out a whoop as the panther gave chase. She loved an adventure. She shot off to the kitchens, the only place she could find safety, grinning all the way.

(These tones are so diffe..."


He caught sight of her as she disappeared into the kitchens, eyes sharp and alert in the darkness. Moving like a silent shadow, he slipped in after her, glancing around.
Castle (1188 new)
Feb 22, 2013 07:56PM

60243 {Isn't it fun to be a crazy little muffin?}

Max's heart clenched at her tears. He held her in his arms, wanting nothing more than to not have to explain. Knowing he had to. She couldn't be kept in the dark forever. "Do you remember the first time I helped you?" he murmured, voice shaking. "I passed out afterward."
Castle (1188 new)
Feb 22, 2013 07:35PM

60243 {1. That's how I roll. ^-^ 2. You want a chase? I'll give you a chase! XD }

After a silent moment, thinking, Jink eventually decided to ignore the mature course of action. With a rumbling growl from his throat, he took off like a jet after the servant girl, tearing through the hall with a cat's swift, elegant grace.
Castle (1188 new)
Feb 22, 2013 06:57PM

60243 His throat tightened, and he forced himself to meet her eyes. "I promise you Bella, I will save you," he breathed. "But I-" He shut his eyes, gently pulling her against his chest. "We don't have much time anymore."
Feb 22, 2013 06:09PM

60243 *grins happily*
Castle (1188 new)
Feb 22, 2013 06:08PM

60243 {*bares fangs* Bring it! XD }

Nosy humans, Jink thought, smugly. He straightened to his full size, gazing at the boy blankly.
Feb 22, 2013 05:55PM

60243 I'm a vampire. Obviously winning.
Castle (1188 new)
Feb 22, 2013 05:52PM

60243 {Mwahaha. Secret. And now...}

Jink's ears pricked when he heard a quiet shuffle behind the door. Silently stalking out, his green eyes glared into the dark at the sight of the two spying humans.
Lonely Me (949 new)
Feb 22, 2013 05:42PM

60243 I think I heard of that somewhere...
Lonely Me (949 new)
Feb 22, 2013 05:42PM

60243 Coolio!