Rebecka’s Comments (group member since Jun 14, 2009)

Rebecka’s comments from the all things supernatural group.

hii!!! im sophies new bffl jkjk but hii

i go horse back riding, paddle bating, and sit in a arcade =)) its not really camping, but it works 4 me

nm getting all my stuff together for camping again, i added anothe chapter to my story

yepp

anyone one?

kk well i gtg 4 now buyy

Numerical Review Rubric

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Plot: /50
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Description: /40
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Character Development: /40
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Twists & Effect: /40
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Dialogue & Emotion: /35
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Mechanics: /35
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Originality: /10
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Overall Score: /250


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hold on ill post it

no actually its easy thats what i did

=) and if u do review it , you have to use the numeric rubric thingy i like it better that way

no. u can review it, but u cant claim it, i want someone random to

well im most likely going to attempt to make a series, so how ever long until i can find a good cliff hanger to piss everyone off

yeah, im going to get what i have so far reviewed so i can fix my mistakes before i continue, then ill ask my reviewer to review it every like 7 chapters

im tierd, sigh i wanna write more, but i dont wanna use my brain power

hii

i will later i have alot to do right now

yes sir

lol

done, its posted, and i get distracted easily thats why it takes me a while

yeahh, its so easy to write, when i know whats going to happen, and i dont have to think of it right on the spot