Rebecka’s Comments (group member since Jun 14, 2009)

Rebecka’s comments from the all things supernatural group.

um idk which one, the one in batman begins

hes hott

batmans my boyfriend!!!

aj call me again i finished dead until dark

okay tanks, aj call me

rachel will u review my book with this pretty please

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Dialogue & Emotion: /35
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Mechanics: /35
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Originality: /10
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Overall Score: /250


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ummm, yeahh ill try, im looking at stuff rop publishing, and i have a lot of work to do

aj knows whats goignt o happen in part of my next chapter

and im going to do it again, call me

still debating, on the ride to the mountains im going plot it out on paper and maybe type it out

nuthing i might write another chapter right now, but im debating weather i should or not.

nuthing i might write another chapter right now, but im debating weather i should or not.

hello there

IM BACK!!!

i gtg really quick brb

rachel i added a new chapter

haha

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good

u r who else do i talk to