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Naomi smiled softly she looked at Dean and hugged him tightly. "I shouldn't try to push you away anymore. I need to let you in." Naomi whispered softly against him holding onto him for support so she wouldn't fall.


"Yes you are. I know you don't want to sleep, but you really need it." Sam said.

Naomi looked at him and smiled softly. Bobby came out of the house he heard everything that just went on. "You can stay. You admitted you had problem that's a good first step you have a long ways to go though. I know you may not like me, but you will thank me for this." He walked back.

Naomi stood there dumbfounded on what just happened it made her feel happy to get congratulated. She took a deep breath. "Dean I'm not worthless or a mistake. I deserve to be happy." Her voice was shaky some she never said this out loud before. She was trying to change she walked near a little shaky still weak from the darkness.


Sam sighed some she was tired. "Bobby let your sister come back." From where Sam was sitting it looked like she was going to fall asleep at any minute. He could be wrong. "Wyatt why don't you go sleep."

"We just got in this fight. I don't like fighting. With you" She whisphered. "Now can we work on the car"

Sam didn't put a card down so she could win. He coukd tell she was really tired.

"I'm sorry please forgive me." Naomi said softly. "I don't deserve your forgivness now,but I want to work at." She wanted to ahow him she was trying.

"Ok" Sam said taking his turn.

"After you broke up with me my problems got worse. You're right I haven't worked through them yet. This right here is me trying and focusing on the now. Dean I should not have let what he said ruin my life. I should have let someone and talk to them."

"Are you sure you don't want to sleep?" He asked raising a brow.

Naomi sighed some. "I'm sorry I shouldn't have acted the way I just did. I was upset at you for not helping me. That time it almost won and it would have too. I have a lot of problems I need to work through. I said sorry to Bobby I followed his wishes and left. I came back because I coukdn't be alone like that. I'm trying."

Sam smiled and went

Naomi looked at him startled. The darkness started to ovet come her, but she fought back. "What? I fought it all by myself this time." Sighing some. "Dean I'm sorry you hurt me when you didn't help me."


Sam typed his name

Naomi backed away stumbling some. She looked down some. She let the darkness in again this time she didn't fight. "I wanted to fight the darkness, but now I understand that all I do is make mistakes. Well letting it in and not being able to feel isn't a mistake." Naomi saw herself as a disappointment to everyone.


Sam waited

"I needed you. I can't fight it without you because I will give in." Naomi whispered feeling sick. "I'm sorry it was going to take over me."


Sam moved his dishes out the way.

Naomi backed away softly clenching his shirt in her fists. "Dean it was going to win." She said shakily her body felt weak.

Sam nodded his head.

Naomi gulped a little. "It's winning. I need help." She fought to say that. She quickly leaned into Dean and kissed him softly feeling the darkness back away her knees were shaking a little bit. It took a lot out of her to do this.


"Ok what about UNO." He said.

Naomi only knew one thing Dean wasn't helping her and that made her break inside nothing else matter. She just didn't move the darkness kept coming in soon it covered her whole body. A little part of her was fighting.

Sam looked at Wyatt. "I don't care either."

Naomi realized he wasn't helping. She froze not moving the last little bit inside of her was giving up. She needed help she knew she couldn't do this on her own.

"Yeah it is " Sam said. Looking at the games. "So what kind of games do you want to play?"

Naomi looked at him tired and exhausted she wasn't sure how much longer she last.

Sam sighed. "I guess we could play."

Naomi fought to turn around to look at him. She was struggling the darkness was so strong because she welcomed it in.


Sam looked at her. "What kind of games?" He asked.

Naomi felt her heart rush she was so close to losing the fight. She couldn't breathe.

Sam shrugged his shoulders. "I don't know." He said. "There's not much I can do."

Naomi could feel the darkness take over her slowly. She was struggling to keep it from taking over her.


"That you are bored and so am I." Sam said

She didn't see Dean no matter how much she wanted to stop fighting she kept fighting. It was putting up a good fight though.


Sam sighed running a hand through his hair.

Naomi sat down she wanted to give up, but she realized that was no way to do anything. The darkness continued to go as she kept fighting. The darkness flashed her back to where Dean was. This time around it felt like she was losing a battle. "Help"

Sam smiled some.

Naomi nodded her head slowly walking off slowly disappearing to her hotel room. She was upset and angry. She walked in the room pacing around. "I messed up again." Angry at herself she could feel the darkness come in. This time she welcomed it she was a loss cause anyway.


Sam smiled some. "Good "